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Posted: 18 years ago
#21
nilanjana wondeful part. pls continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#22
nilanjana....jus read ths whole story....totally luved it....woaw...sujal's past was like a gothic passage...poor him.... but i m sure his future will b colorful wid kash.... 😃 will b waitin eagerly 4 da nxt part...i m sure its gonna b awesome like the prev. onez....keep up da gud work..... 👏 n SK 's 1st mulaqat was a blast.....i wonder wut will happen in da nxt onez....can't wait....do update soon....
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanxs a lot 2 all 4 wonderful comments.special thanxs 2 bolly crazed,surya,farah,golu,grp 1223,ghazal,varallika & anushika.u know wht farah & golu i am a gr8 fan of urs fan fics ,u r the best.plz yaar bade bade comment likhna,lik u ppl write in farah's & golu's fics.ok now next part-

its next day,shaam hai.

KASHISH HOME
kashish-mehak dekhna aaj pub jaana hai aur main confused hoon kii kya pehnu.
mehak-di aap kuch weatern pehnke jao.
kashish-weatern!lekin main to koi kurti aur chudidaar pehnne ka soch rahi thi
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Posted: 18 years ago
#24
nilanjana dear me happy that you continued your story... 😊 😛 😃 the scene was very nice.. 👏
but dear it was a very small scene... 😭 please agla part jaldi post karna aur haan try & posts a big part... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#25
😳 awww thanx nilanjana....ab se mein bhi apki fan hon hehehe 😉 ....par itna chota part kyun......write bigger oness.....plzzzzz 😃 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#26
sorry yaar actually light chali gai thi islie,part pura nahi likh pai.arre wah adhe part mein hi comment de dia.ok ill continue-

KASHISH HOME
kashish-mehak dekhna aaj pub jaana hai aur main confused hoon kii kya pehnu.
mehak-di aap kuch weatern pehnke jao.
kashish-weatern!lekin main to koi kurti aur chudidaar pehnne ka soch rahi thi

mehak-wo pub hai ,wahan paar baas western wear allowed hai.
kashsih-ok baba,bata kya pehnu.
mehak-hmmmmmmmm 🤔 ye pehno.[gives the green dress that amna wore in lycra awards]
kashish-ok but kya main issmein achchi lagoongi?
mehak-achchi lagogi! di aap issmein dhaamaal lagogi.
kashish-ok ok main yehi pehnungi.
mehak-yeeeeee!!!!!! ye hui naa meri di wali baat.

taiyaar hote hote kashish ki nazar sujal ke die hue kal wale cheque paar padti hai,usse gussa aata hai.but then she thinks'arre main bhi kiske baare mein sochkaar apnaa mood off kaar rahin hoon,i know abb main uss lafenge se kabhi nahi milungi to kyun uske baare mein sochkaar pareshaan karun aapne aap ko'.ye sochkaar she leaves for the pub
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udhar sujal is in his office,uska bilkul mann nahi hai jaane ka paar pratham ki vajah se he have 2 go as he is his best frd.wohi to uski zindagi ka ek lauta humdard tha.he goes 2 his car & drives to the pub while drinking.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#27
now abb next part-
kashish reaches the pub.wo gauri aur pratham ko dhund rahi hai paar wo kahin nazar nahi aa rahe,abb usse ghabrahat ho rahi hai kyunki wo iss shehar mein nai hai aur yahan kisi ko nahi jaanti,aur yahan ke log bhi kuch thik nahi laag rahe.she is tensed.yehi saab sochte sochte wo kisi se[suuujaaaaallll] takraati hai.aur uski dress paar drink gir jaaata hai.
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sujal pub pohochta hai.paar pratham aur gauri ka koi aata pata nahi hai.he decides to wait for them.wo bar mein jaakaar apne lie ek drink leta hai aur i khali table dekhkaar uspe baithne jaata hai.tabhi ek ladki [kaaaaaaashiiiiiishhhh]ke saath uski taakaar hoti hai.aur uska drink uss ladki paar gir jaata hai.
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kasish-oh oh no!ye aapne kya kia...oh[looks at sujal & remembers kii wo kal wala ladka hai].tummmmmmm!!!!!!![gusse se]
sujal-haan main,koi problem hai?
kashish-haan problem hai,tumne mujpaar drink kyun girai?
sujal-maine tumpaar drink nahi girai,tum mujse takraai ho
kashish-[she is getting irritated by his coldness]tumne meri saari dress kharab kaardi.
sujal-tumne bhi to meri drink giradi
kashish-drink ek aur aa sakti hai
sujal -dress bhi ek aur aa sakti hai.ye lo[gives a blank cheque to her kal ki tarah]
kashsih-[she is gettin furious now by his behaviour & is almost in tears]baat paiso ki nahi hain,mamma kaya sochengi kii maine shaaraab pii hai!
sujal-[sujal has an unknown happiness to know that she is a non drinker as all gals around her drink]jaake dholo.[ye bolke he goes & sits at a place with a drink leaving kashsih alone]
kashsish[kashish felt an unknown protection when she was with sujal,she felt as she was safe with him & no one in this world can harm her.paar jaab abb sujal chala gaya she is feeling lonely ,tensed & unsafe.she is unknowingly missing sujal].
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Posted: 18 years ago
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woooo neel what a part. larte larte hi dono ek dusre ke ho gaye 😊 superb yar. waise bhi humara sujal hai hi aisa ki har koi uske sath protected feel karta hai. 😃 chalo waiting 4 the next part. dekhte hai dono jo ekdusre ko itna miss kar rahe hai unka kya hota hahi 😊 👏 this is 4 ur part and story 👍🏼
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Posted: 18 years ago
#29
nilanjana dear a tooo good part.. i loved it.. sujal , kashish ki dubara mulaqat hui..yessssssssss... yipeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
👏 tho sujal ko achcha laga ki kashish does not drink aur kashish felt protected when sujal was with her.. both are shoooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sweettttttttttttttttt & cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.... 😳 ab tho un dono ko zindagi bhar ka saath nibhana hain..tho kashish ko kehna kuch dair ki durri tho bardhast karni hi hogi na ..kyun maine sahi kaha na ?? 😉 ab please jaldi se continue karna me waiting eagerly for the next part... 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#30
aaj shayad continue naa kaar paun kahin jaana hai,lekin dont be so sure aaj continue kaarne kii puri koshish karungi agaar aur comments mile to.waise agge ka part is my fav aur zyaada sweet hai.

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