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Posted: 18 years ago
#11
Nilanjana too good work..i liked your past description very very very very much...........it was quite different..u keep up the good work... 👍🏼 👍🏼 ab please jaldi se continue karna & ya dear call me surya not sun_423.. 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#12
ok now the 1st part of my story

kashish subah-subah uthti hai, 🥱 takes a jamai & wakes up her sis mehak.
kashish-chal uth naa mehak,subah ho gai hai
mehak-di! baas min sone dona
k-ok baba.
kashish does puja & sings a sweet song.then saab ke lie breakfast baanaati hai.saab ko jo jo chahie unko deti hai.aoni parivaar kii haar zaruraat kaa khayal rakhti hai.aur humesha haasti muskuraati rehti hai.she searches for job in the newspaper also.then apni mom kii help kaarti hai.papa ko heart kii medicines deti hai.takes full care of her family.

but on other side.....there is our sujal.

ek bada sa kaamra hai .cheeze bikhri hui hain pure kaamre mein.shaaraab kii bottles idharudhar padi hui hain.a guy [non other than sujal] is lying on the bed pet ke bal aur uska haath zammeen mein giri hui ek sharab kii bottle ko chu raha hai.he is sleepin.
achanak alarm bajta hai.triiiiiiiingggggggggg
sujal[grunts]hmmm aur alarm pe neend mein haath rakh ke usse baand karta hai,aur palat kar so jaata hai.
tabhi 1 naukar chai lekar aata hai aur side table paar rakhta hai.
naukaarsir,sir uthie ,subah ho gai hai.aapko office bhi jaana hai.
sujal[grunts] hmmmm haaan.....tum jao
naukar-but sir aapko late ho jaega
sujal-[gets up angrily]kaha naa jao,samaj mein nahi aata kya !
naukar-[scared]yes.sir...sorry sir.ye ...ye..[pointing at the chai]
sujal-[lookin at the cup]ye kya hai???
naukaar-chai hai sir.
sujal-[furious]te to muje bhi pata hai.kiitni baar kaha hai muje chai wai nahi pasand[screaming].aaah...aaaah...oh[sar pakad ke].aah mera sar bohot dukh raha hai.jao mere lie pain killer leke aao.
naukaar-yes sir.[he gives the pain killer to him]
sujal haves the pain killer aur uthte hi cigrett jala leta hai & gets ready 4 the office.

thanxs 4 commenting all of u.& rajeev 1 haan ye story real hai but sirf sujal kaa past wala part.
plz comment.
u know what main aur likhna chahti thi paar type karte karte thak gai,so nxt time.

agge hai sujal aur kashsih kii pehli mulaqat
ya kahoon mukkalaat.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#13
hi neel
yar ur story is toooo gud 👏 . specially jo sujal wala part hai. was shocked to no abt his past. yar uski ye halat dekh ke too 😕 but jo bhi hai ur sory rocks plz post the next part soon. am sure wo bhi bahut hi acha hoga
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Posted: 18 years ago
#14
Nilanjana read ur story waho ur too good wat to say love ur story very intresting 👏 loved it keepit up
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Posted: 18 years ago
#15
Greaaatt Continue Soon! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#16
Nilanjana too good.. i like your story very much.... me waiting for the time jab sujal ,kashish will meet each other mazaa aayega........ur story is very damn nice.......... 👏 please continue soon me will waiting... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#17
Nilanjana please continue soon..me waiting for the next part... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#18
thanxs 4 the comments all of u.
now the 2nd part
KASHISH'S HOME

kashish's mom-kashish!kashish!
kashish-[comes wearing a pink chudidar & kurti]ji mamma.
k's mom-beta wo zaara bazaar se papa ki davai le aa khtam ho gai hai
kashish-ji mamma abhi gai.
[she goes]

on other side,sujal is driving big luxury car in full speed uski gaadi ke aandaar bhi shaaraab ki bottles bikhri hui hain.

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kashish idhar davai leke wapis aa rahi hai,road pe bohot kichaad hai.wo sambhal sambhalke per rakh rahi hai.
tabhi tishhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!
1 gadi aati hai[offcourse sujal ki]aur uske kapdo paar kichaad throw kaarti hai.uske saare kapde kharaab ho jaate hain.
kashish is furious now.wo gaadi rokne kaa ishaara karti hai.gaadi rukti hai aur usmein se ek handsome ,dashing saa laadka nikaalta hai[suuuuujaaaaaallll].he is constantly staring at her with an intense gaze.k bolna shuru kaarti hai.
k-aiiii Mr gaadi chala rahe ho ya havai jahaz ,dekhke nahi chaala saakte.mere saare kaapde khaarab kaar die.

s is constantly gazing at her with those intense eyes.
wo pocket se 1 cheque nikaalta hai uspaar sign kaarta hai & kahish ke haath mein wo cheque deta hai.says.
sujal-nae kapde kharidlena
& zoomes away in his car.

kashish is shocked haairaani se uss jagah dekhti rehti hai jahan kuch minute pehle sujal khada tha.usse ye samaj nahi aa raha hota akhir hua kya.then aft some time she comes back 2 normal & murmers to herself 'bade baap ki bigdi aulad'.
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sujal enters his office.saari ladkiyon ke use dekhke hosh udd gae hai.saab uspaar chance maarne kii full koshish kaar rahin hai.but he is hard as stone.a gal employ enters his cabin.
girl employ-good morning siiiiiiiirrrrrrrr[she is wearing a micro mini & halter neck top]
s-good morning tina,[without even lookin at her]
tinau know sir kal raat main bathroom mein slip ho gai.knees paar chiil gaya.dekhienaa sir.[apni skirt uthake shows her knees]
s-[gusse se]dekhi Ms Tina aap office mein kaam karne aati hain,wahi karein to behtaar hoga.aur bina wajah mere cabin mein aane kii koi zaroorat nahi.do u understand.
tina-yes sir[gusse mein goes]
sujal gets a call.
s-hello.
the other person-hi yaar main pratham bol rahan hoon
s-hey pratham bol yaar kaisa hai aur gauri bhabhi kaisi hai
pratham-hum dono bilkul thik hai.yaar i jst wanted 2 tell u that tuje kal pub aana hai.
s-pub kyun koi khaas baat.
p-nahi aise hi
s-nahi yaar main nahi aa sakta u know naa muje ye saab bhid-bhad aur shor-gul pasand nahi.aur waise bhi tere aur bhabi ke beech main kabab mein haddi banke kya karunga
pratham-nahi main kuch nahi sunna chahta .tu aa raha & thats final.tuje meri dosri kii kasam.
s-achcha thik hai,kaal milte hain.
pratham-bye
sujal-ok bye.


sujal is very sincere & hardworking.he is working continously.he finishes his work at around 1 at night & prepares 2 go.
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kashish ghar pohochti hai.
mehak sees her haalaat.
mehak-di ye kya hua.
kashish-pooch maat,ek idiot ne mujpaar khichaad throw kia.agaar wo muje phir se mil jae naa ,to dekh loongi usse.kya samajta hai aapne aap ko.
mehak-di chodo uss lafange ko aap usski wajah se kyun aapna mood kharab kaar rahi ho.
kashsih-haan tu thik keh rahi hai
mehak-haan,ek cheez batana hi bhool gai gauri di ka phone aaya tha wo kal aapko pub le jaane kii baat kaar rahin thi.kaha kii aap pohoch jaana wahan aur wo bhi pratham jiju ke saath wahan pohoch jaengi,wahin aap teeno meet karna.
kashish-wow pub!!!! bade shehron kii ye saab hi to khasiyaat hai aur aab jaab gauri di ke saath jaa rahin hoon to mom dad bhi permission de denge.wowwww....isnt that gr8
mehak-yo di!!!!!!
kashish-yo mehak!!!!!!
both sister hug.
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sujal is in his office garage.
wo aapni pocket se sharab kii bottle nikalta hai that he keeps always with him & starts drinking while driving.wo ek sunsan si lake ke paas gadi rokta hai aur shaarab ki bottle gadi se nikaal ke piine laagta hai.he is constantly drinking there sitting alone.
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kashish raat ko apne ghar ke garden mein aasmaan ko dekhte hue kuch soch rahi hai.
kashsih-[in her heart]hey bhagwan aapne duniya mein saab ke lie kisi na kisi ko banaya hai,to mere lie bhi kisi na kisi ko banaya hoga.kaash main mere uss ajnabee se mil paati ,kaash usski jhalak dekh pati.
paar Mr ajnabee tumhe pata hai tum mere lie bohot speciel ho.tum paas nahi ho phir bhi main tumhe mehsoos kaar sakti hoon,tumhe kabhi dekha nahi ,tumhe jaanti nahi phir bhi tumhe dil de baithi hoon.i am sure tum jahan bhi hoge b0hot khush hoge.ye chandni jo muje choo rahi hai,tum bhi isse mehsoos kaar rahe hoge.tumhe dekhte hi muje pura yakken hai ,kii muje tumse pyaar higa.kaash tum jahan bhi ho wahan khush raho aur jaldi se meri zindagi mein aa jao.
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its 3 am of night
sujal sharaab ke naashe mein dutt ghar aata hai.usne itni pii hai kii wo sidha khada taak nahi ho paa raha hai.uski aankhon mein aasoo saaf nazar aa rahe hain.he is in a miserable state.wo baar girta hua aur cheezo se takrata hua jaise taise mushkil se aapne aap ko sambhalke.cheezo ka support leke chalte hue,apne kaamre taak pohochta hai aur bistaar paar mooh ke baal gir jaata hai.he is unconcious.

ooofffff kafi bada part tha.plzzz comment yaar .main betaab hoon.

coming up-sujal kashish kii khatti-meethi mulaqat.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#19
😳 😳 very nice parts 👏 👏 ..great going...mukkalat to ahi thi hope khatti meethi mulakat...bhi cha jaye 😳 ...continue soon 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#20
Nilanjana very damn nice part dear..with each part you are writing me getting glued to your story.. keep up the good work...👍🏼 now me eagerly waiting for sujal , kashish ki pehli mulaqat..mazaa ayega..... 😉 ab please jaldi se continue karna me will be waiting for the next part... 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago

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