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Posted: 12 years ago
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u should have pm me😡am a it angry 4 that
want a sweet apology😉

Originally posted by: sreelu094

ellooo 🤣eeks look who is here...oh yeah me the sweet girl in townaww how much u guys missed me🤣right? 🤣ha ha i'm not dumb to believe even a single one among u missed me🤣wassay y would u guys remember me or miss me🤣itz always gud to forget unwanted things🤣aww lemme top the chart them🤣he he chodo lets talk about the update...

well yes finally i'm here with the last part of this os...as i said before it is dedicated to my loving dracu aka my crime partner aka my boring ritzy or ritika and my ever boring friend cum enemy pikku/pikku or ur annie/patie...well sorry for being late as always ...this time it was not coz lack of time ,it was coz of my bad health...yet running in a bad condition..well i've worked hours on this os which i usually don't do...anyhow hope u guys won't faint reading this...hoping for nothing less than a chennai express full of tomatoes 🤣yeah here u go...

part 2
The cold water droplets made mere effect on her senses.she couldn't feel a drop of rain.god knws if she had any senses left.the pain she was living for the past many months 'her beloved family,friends and rey no one were going to live that truth.truth always hurts'!she din't want anyone to knw that till it was all over. Atleast it might be less painful to her then!

Its' been a while now since she left. It was clear to him that she would be in the terrace now, afterall it was raining so yeah she would be there only and probably drenched in the rain.

After waiting for a long may be like ages he headed towards the terrace in search of her , only to find a wet shivering taani who was lost in some unknown world'

'wat the hell taani''he shouted .'you will get sick taani'have you lost ur senses or what ? '

Well may be his voice wasn't much powerful to reach her ears .so it merely affected her and the rainy dark night.

Well like he said she might have really lost her senses so that the whole world affected her least. now that he got no response from taani he rushed towards her in full anger and shook her up and shouted'

'are u deaf taani?can't u hear me?nor the thunder? it's heavy raining dammit and there is wild thunder too''

She gave a shocked expression to him and looked at the surrounding'yeah it was raining'!her eyes finally rested on his eyes .she still didn't utter a word.

Now it was kind of scary .he got worried for her.he could see those painful tears in her eyes between the cold rain drops.they both never matched.!

He calmed himself and asked.

'are u okay taani? Y were u crying? Wat happened ? I'm so sorry if I hurted u with my words . I had no intensions to hurt u. trust me taani'plz don't act like this 'I can't see u like this. U knw that I love u more than anything right?'

'you never hurt me rey ,nor u can ever'but love always hurts rey.' She said with shivering lips .the sound was feeble ,but least hard for him to understand.

He didn't reply her.he just hugged her tightly and she did reciprocate ,yet with more intensity.

'I love you rey'more than myself and anything else in this world.my heart and soul belongs to you only. My love for you will never end. '

They wish they could stand like this for eternity'.but wishes cannot be fulfilled always!

Finally her hands got loosen up from his back .so he too broke the hug. For his utter bewilderment she started falling back'unconscious ???

Her eyes were closed .he took her in his arms before she fell down and rushed to their room and laid her on the bed. He was so worried that he didn't know wat to do. He called all the servants and asked to call the doctor ,well may be all doctors who existed' he started rubbing her hand and legs so as to give her heat and dried her hair' he was continuously taking her name'

'plz open ur eyes taani.plz'how many times I told u not to get wet in the rain,but no u never heard me and see now u r sick. God what'll I do? Plz taani open ur eyes.'

'rey babba the doctors are here.' One of the maid said.

'tell them to come fast kakka''

There were a number of doctors indeed ,all specialists doctors in town ,including taani's personal doctor.

They entered the room. Rey rushed to them and said

' look my wife is not well. She turned unconscious suddenly and was in the rain for so long ,may be that's the reason' plz do something''

They started checking her. They were checking her since so long and none of them uttered a word. Finally rey who was impatient blurted out.

'why are u all not talking to me?tell me something' can u guys do something or should I opt for a better treatment ?'

' she needs a thorough check up. She is not sick because of the rain anyway. 'one of them said.

'then wat? Wat do u mean doctor? Make it clear''

' we can't say anything now , or you should ask her personal doctor ,about her disease , if she is having any''

Rey looked at her personal doctor with a questioning eye.

' I don't know if it is right to break my promise, but I've no option now and this is not the time to waste .'said her personal doctor.

' make it clear doctor 'what is it? Is she really having any disease ? u've to tell mr' I'm her husband. I need to know. . .' he literally shouted at the doctor.

' well umm she '.she is'.suffering from brain tumor''

May be that was the last word which his brain captured. It was all blank then'

*******

(ok till now itz ok.well eh may be now watz coming is utter bullshit' gutter mind activated'ooo')

*******

(6 months later)

'you shouldn't have done this to me''the tear drop blurred a part of her picture which he was holding in his hands. 'am I that bad lover that u had mere trust on me?' tears were still rolling down from his eyes. He was disheartened 'completely shattered'

'you have no right to hurt me like this taani''he said as a swear wiping his tears'

'I know rey'I don't have any right to hurt you'' she said with a broken heart coming near him.

He just glared at her and started leaving the room without uttering a word to her'

' you can't do this to me rey' your silence is killing me'' he stopped his steps to hear her'she continued

' you gave my life back to kill me in bits and pieces rey ? your silence is enough to tore me'itz been 6 months since you uttered a word to me' plz rey talk to me' I knw I hurted you'but itz not a lone feeling rey . If you are hurt so am i' ' she said trying to control her tears.

He just turned and glared at her and continued to leave.

' tomorrow is our anniversary rey' ' she blurted out with a flood in her eyes'

'wat's there to celebrate taani?' he finally spoke stopping himself again.' A flop love story which ended at marriage when there was no love at all??? Wat do u wan't to celebrate ? ' and left a shattered taani behind

' I love u rey 'I really do' it was for u'always ''

***

He was numb all while. Well ofcourse he was there with her throughout her treatment. She was conscious many a time but he preferred to ignore and just cared her all while. She tried to talk to him but he didn't utter a word to her. Well why should he? Wat was there to talk? Nothing. Doctors had no hope for her but may be the treatment was a success and the doctors said it was pure love that brought her back'well if she is back to life or to hell itz still to be known'

It was pain that was common btw the two

****

Now it was a special day' 1st anniversary .well of course it calls for a celebration. Well the singhania mansion was still like a ghost house. Itz been ages since any noise came out of that huge building. If it was not the sun and moon people would've thought that nothing was moving. Well yes time did move.

It was a new morning. Definitely the rays were aiming for something new. Strange '!even there were changes in the singhania mansion. Well nothing to go with the outer picture. Something new was happening there inside. Well who knows? May be a ray new beginning'!

She was having a complete new look today. Well a strapless peacock blue dress which rested on her thighs was what she were wearing .so yeah hot and beautiful enough to make any normal person drool and preferably faint. Obviously she never used such dresses before' and it wasn't unnoticed by rey'but he preferred to ignore'(don't use your gutter minds here lol)

Both were in the bedroom 'taani was sitting on the bed trying to call someone and rey was sitting on a sofa nearby'

'I've booked yesterday. So can I come now?' she asked in her phone

'yeah taani singhania' well yes I want three tattoos ''

Well he was hearing everything though he acted as if he don't care ,but yeah he wasn't blind anyways'

'yes one on my chest ,one on my waist and other on my neck''

That was blow to him'tattoos on these parts? as far as he knew in his town only men used to draw tattoos and taani wants tattoos on these places'ughh some unknown people will touch her and wat was she up to? she was least bothered it seems 'he thought of himself'

'kay I'm coming then'I'll be there in an hr''and she slid down of the bed to leave'

' you are not going anywhere taani'nowhere u get it? ' he shouted in anger.

' umm u talking to me ?' she asked giving a cold look to him.

' why you have changed your name? I'm talking to you only''

'well as far as I know you are not talking to me'and why can't I go? '

'have you lost it taani ?are u going to make ughh tattoos on those places'?'

' yeah I'm' you have any problem?'

' you are neither going out nor gonna make any bullshit tattoos anywhere''

She was no near the wall and he was just inches far from her.

' why can't I make em? I want tattoos and why are you having problem with that? After all itz nothing related to u '' she said looking at his eyes which were flaming now.

' you are my wife taani and I can't even imagine anyone else touching you''he said fuming or rather he shouted.

' well wat's with a relation when there is no love? You said there is no love btw us right? So u don't need to care'' she said still looking at his eyes'

' it was you who never loved me or trusted me taani' there was always love and trust from my side taani'and u broke me in to pieces 'u played with my emotions taani'u never loved me taani'u never did''

She felt like slapping him for the distrust he had on her. Well of course she would've done that too if it was not her fault'the flames were now spread on her eyes too'

He was still repeating his words.' U never loved me taani'never''

She only knew how much she wished to punish him for those words he blurted.

He was again going to repeat the same' alas his words didn't had a way out. they were close or he gulped em down. Well what else could he do? His wife was cursing his lips for the words he blurted and here more words were trying to come out'well eh that's not fair'

She was rather biting his lips than kissing 'ofcourse in no mood to soften up.

Well he was not responding at all' and he did get least chance to react. He just wish his lips were still there for him even to react if she ever stops'

Holy grace .she did stop.

' ouch wat was that? U are so rude taani ' that's not how a loving wife kiss her husband' he said touching his lips.

' I'm not a loving wife ok' I don't love u neither. I've no trust for you' ' she reacted in an angry voice'

' ughh that was our first kiss and eww u turned it a night mare for me' and here see wat's happening'all fault is yours and I'm being cursed. U didn't bothered to tell me about ur illness and u left me as a dumb and numb. Only I knw how I survived all that 6 months''

' I know rey it was a hard phase for u and me' and I was living with this truth since 1 year'I didn't want to hurt u that's y I didn't tell you .' she said cupping his face

' but you were blindly in love with me that you ended up hurting yourself' neither I can see u hurt taani' I knw even I've hurted u' but I couldn't help' the feeling of losing u was hard for me to take''

' oh glad to know that u realized that I love you'' she said with a puppy face'

' no u don't ' he said with a smirk and pinned her on the wall and caught her lips by his.

He was soft with his lips initially and she too reacted equally' well the aggression was still there so the soft kiss eventually turned to a rough kiss and a passionate one. both trying to take back the pain they gave to the other'

Her hands were roaming on his hair and back'and his both hands were on either side of her cheeks'

Her hold was getting tighter while she was getting out of breath'he broke the kiss sensing her discomfort' it was silence for a few seconds and as usual taani blurted out'

'how mean of u rey' u said that I don't love u 'huh u still don't trust me?'

' I was just trying to make u angry taani' I know u love me more than anything'and hey this is how normal people kiss not that 1st kiss u made'' he said with that smirk again and touching his lips'

' aww I'm sorry rey' I din't mean to hurt you' you just made me so angry that I ended up doing that'does it hurts now'?'

' no taani it's ok'it's not paining''he said with an assuring smile'

' I promise I'll never hurt u again rey'' she said giving a sweet peck on his lips.

'Well did I said before? u look so hot in this dress. I'm getting dizzy over my legs''

'oh really? 'she asked giggling at her scanning husband.

'yeah 'now u'll pay for wearing that and giggling at me.' He said lifting her in his hands and placing her on their bed'

' I'd love to pay' she said giggling again making his senses more sick'

' oh you were going somewhere right taani?' he asked kissing her jaw lines '

' no' she said as a murmur.

' no u were taani'ermm tattoo or something. Should I drop u there?'he asked kissing her ears '

'no' she repeated in the same tone yet pleasured '

' let me remember where all u wanted the tattoos ? umm yeah one on your neck'' he said giving wet kiss on her neck and making love bites there.

'reyyy''she murmured under her voice'

' is it ok if I help you with the tattoos? 'he asked still giving wet kisses on her neck'

She murmured in an yes'

'kay then' lemme help u out'. And he gave a love mark on her neck again.' Here u go with your neck tattoos'now let me deal with the rest'wat was the 2nd part? Ermm? Yeah chest and the last one waist right?' he asked with a smirk

' what no'' she said with a shocked expression'

' reyaansh singhania stick to his words no matter wat''

' no rey''

' yes' it was you who started'let me end this' so tattoo and all was a plan right?'

'yeah''

' what an innocent wife I've' now that my wife loves tattoos I've no other option than giving life to her wishes no?' he asked kissing her on her shoulder''

' nooo I don't want any tattoos '' she said shivering at his touch'

' 1 year wait is more than enough taani' happy anniversary taani'' he said finally getting back to her lips' ' and happy 1st night too my love'' he said winking at his shocked wife and pulling back to a deep passionate kiss'

It was yet to done with two more tattoos'well a whole dark night after the day is still waiting for them so yeah much time to art new tattoos or preferably more'

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long eh?🤣

🤣believe it or not itz over🤣ooo my hard work🤣well hopefully i'm successful to get a chennai express full of eggs and tomatoes 🤣.i'd be glad if u give ur reviews about the gutter work🤣hopefully the last one 4m my side...sorry to all whom i've ever irritated with my works and thanks alot for reading🤗 ...

and pms...are they necessary? i mean i pm not less than 160 people every time cutting off my frnz 4m other forums and hardly 60 people read em or atleat open them...and my frnz from other forums who have nothing to do with my story comes and likes my works even though i don't pm them😆(well they are sick anywayz and loving🤗)...well itz ok if u don't read my pms ...u guys must be busy i knw...neither do i open my pms since so long...so yeah just wanted to say some thing.ie plz remove me 4m ur buddy list if u r getting irritated by my pms(though i pm only once in a while)so yeah u always have that option to remove me...

stay happy people...love ya all...umm well wont be active here 4m now on...and thanks for reading...

oops just saw that inverted commas are there much in btw...arghh there are inverted commas at the place where i put full stop also.umm donno how it turned like this...itz still ok in the word...donno wat hpnd here...sorryyy

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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
A Big thank you for the happy ending..muaaah.😃.. Im gonna miss ur bhashons😭. the Tattoist REy☺️ luvd it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: kukku095

Though all the persons in the story are stangers for me,still it was soo beautiful loved it a lot

i know my chveet friend is a great writer but only now realized that u are a gutter minded too😆omg cant stop laughing🤣
really sweet sreelu😃

wth wat are u doing here?oh lord hw much i wished that this gutter one doesn't comes under ur sight...and holy lord u found it...ughh stammered my dignity🤣...pleej don't open ur mouth in friend of our other friends 😆they'll kill me if they knw i'm writing such gutter things😆...uff shoo shoo go away... u r not supposed to read my gutter works😆chal hatt yahase...
mathi chirichath...uff ente abhimanam😆


and no pms for u ok🤣my sweet friend shouldn't read such gutter works😆ha ha c ya 2mrw ...ughh colg again😆...and i'm not gonna come here😆ok so 2mrw colg🤗
anywayz thanks for reading...u shocked me anyhow😆

and my love u've quoted my complete story there😆uff
Edited by sreelu094 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
Amazing os
n d ending was just perfect
n loved d tatoos thing
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
lovely so ...awesome update ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
Brilliant job dear
it ws so scarcy beginning but got happy romantic ending
lub u for dis...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
Super awesome update...
I so loved the first part of this update...
I mean it was so scary...
But still loved it and I'm speechless...
The way u described it was amazing...
And then the second part...
It was hot and romantic...
That tattoo part was so awesome yr...
N their kisses were super hawt...
Loved it to the core...
Thanxx for the PM...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
Haila Sreelu Dii,
Kya Likha Aapne !! Hot, Sensuous and Shocking obviously with Aapka Comedy !!
Tumor Jaisa Khatarnak Disease De Diya Humari Taani Ko but thankfully teek Ho gayi !
But It was hilarious jab Taani ko tattoo banwanna tha and Rey ki reaction 🤣

The Ending toh 😳 😳 ...
Mereko bahut accha Laga !
Edited by TaaReyD3_Neha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
Omg sriks great work 😃

I thought u'll end it wid sad note bt ye tho ulta ho gaya 😆

my gosh It ws hot srikuu 😳 oww Tatoos on chest , waist , neck

I can imagine rey's halat 🤣 finally he spoke 😆 n taani confessed

I totally enjoyed d update

ending ws totally unexpectd 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
yay sree it was awsum yaar!! luvd it<3 i dint read ur baashan above n below..im sick of it😆

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