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sreelu094

@sreelu094

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Jalebi bai

@Breezy.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Oh di..I loved it so very much..The way u'll have wriiten maardala..It was so heart touching😭

Di i must say u have grown up so much as a writer.. Seriously this time i truly am saying frm my heart that i loved it😛

Thankyou for giving such n awesome os.. Love u di😆🤗

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annie

@patie

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Posted: 12 years ago

RES😈

unres 🤣 gonna critisize u ...no matter u will read it or not 🤣

1. kammo bander I hate u fr making me wait fr freaking 1 and half month 😡

2. It ws so damn short huh ismein os kam or bhaashan jyada hai 🤣

on a serious note there r some good points also 😆

1. Its really emotional n u hv described their pain so well 😊 my taarey r like this only 😳

2. Its not at funny 🤣 i knw ur adat of cracking jokes in btwn emotional dialogues 🤣 gud u r improving as a writter 😆

3. I love this kind os which adds agression , passion , intensity n some hot moments 😳 its TR's speciallity 😆

4. now wat u want me to continue ur taarif 🤣 thats not possible until u giv us 2nd part n mind my words I want long part next time 😡samji dont act like palki 🤣

n srikky bander u only told me ki its a hot os😆 aaj k liye itna hi

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Ayesha Hasan

@Ayesha_Hasan

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Posted: 12 years ago

RES 😳

UNRES..

Sreelu, it's kind of shocking to see an OS from you..😲😆

But, plz... Ok.. I will say this at the last...😆

The concept is amazing..

Loved the first update..
TaaRey are married..

I guess, Taani is suffering from a disease...

I loved Rey's answer to Taani about getting married again...

Gosh!! He loves her so much...

Taani is also in so much pain...

Loved it to the core..

Yeah!! So, I was telling that, now, if you have started an OS, Plz. do complete it..😳

Dont make poor us crave for it...😆

On a serious note, Plz. do continue this...😳

Will be waiting eagerly for the next update which I hope we get soon...😆

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BeingFoodie

@BeingFoodie

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

res/unres

kamzzz...i will bit u for this short update...i thought i will read long long update of your but ye kya diya...itna chotu...not fare...

oming to ur update its very emotional...wby taani not allow rey to touch her...may be major reason...but plz update soon bandar...

love ya minimonster..

your
dikky...

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@-Dreaming...

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

wow

luv the concept👏

but pls taani ko kuch mat krna😭😭

nahi to mere taarey ka kya hoga???😭

update sooon...😊

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Ritika

@...Ritzy...

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

First off all thanks a million (I know you don't keep thanks 😆 ) for dedicating this beautifully written OS to me 🤗 Love ya my crime partner aka boring bunny 🤗

What a wonderful start of OS

Rey and Taani ...the Love birds, who are married
hurt Rey and sad Taani
Its raining outside but Taani is going through emotional turmoil 😒
Please open the suspense soon behind Taani's sadness... I am eagerly waiting even dying to read it 😛

Please please please continue it

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christy

@Amitz.Gibbore

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

nice one bander ...plz update soon...having lot of conphusions:D

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chandrima

@chand91

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

baba re

taani ko koi isse bachao

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Shivangi

@peraltagasm

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Will say sab cheez saath mein.. U know after reading the hot part? ☺️ Isiliye.. jaldi update karo babay! 🤣 uff me is waiting for it ☺️ That hug really made my heart skip a beat! and dii.. the emotions.. u wrote it too well.. but why does Taani want Rey to marry again after she DIES? 😲 whys she gonna die? 😲 😭 Waiting for the next update dii! please update soon!!

P.S.- I read the entire bhaashan of urs which definately seemed to me a bit more than the actual update! 🤣 I want a lamba and hot update next time! 😡

Haila maine bola ki mai sab kuch ek saath bolungi and abhi hi itna kuch bol dala 🤣 TR effect hai ya aapke OS ka effect 🤔 I guess dono ka 😆 chalo enough of my bak bak now.. bhaashan dene ki aadat toh aapki hai.. why me giving it? 🤔 🤣

Update soon! 😈