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Lavender_Luna

@Lavender_Luna

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

omg...

thanx a lot 4 this tattooo update...

it was so emotional and...

it was viraciously a passionate chapter...

loved it to the core...

*applause*

*speechless*

Edited by hima_taarey - 12 years ago

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natasha sehgal

@vi1772843271_nc

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

i just loved it

it was really nice

i just read ur whole os right now

and it is just wow

great job done by u

loved it

and thanks for the pm dear...!!!

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rinki

@iheartVD

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

hey...luved ur os...starting was emotional bt later part was romantic...keep writing more 😳

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saumya....naam to padh liya hoga..[=))]

@.saumya.

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

res😆

unres...

omg..ur bhaasan di...🤣 🤣

okay coming to first update

it was really emotional one..

the way you describedd the pain of TaaRey was just
ummm....i dont have words..it was freak awesomely written👏
it contained passion,love,aggression for each other

but itna lamba update tha ki 2 min me hi khatm ho gya...🤣

okay now me bhaaging to read next one..ba bye...

oh god..again bhaasan...😆🤣

before leap...it was again so emotional..

argghh😡..my TaaRey❤️ why their love is so so so pure

i ll go mad one day😆🤣

heading forward for leap

hahahaha awww😳.their cute stupied fights filled with love and care...☺️

taani wants tatoo...🤣

' it was you who never loved me or trusted me taani' there was always love and trust from my side taani'and u broke me in to pieces 'u played with my emotions taani'u never loved me taani'u never did''

She felt like slapping him for the distrust he had on her. Well of course she would've done that too if it was not her fault'the flames were now spread on her eyes too'

He was still repeating his words.' U never loved me taani'never''

She only knew how much she wished to punish him for those words he blurted.

underlined words made me speechless

taani biting rey's lips...☺️

bechara rey🤣..the pain of his lips.🤣..taani...🤣

then the passionate kisss..☺️..,m in..TaaRey dreamland.😳.wow..☺️

the naughtiest rey...😆🤣

lemme remember the parts where you wanted the kiss...😆

and the os ended with an happy note...👏

boring gal itni bhi boring nahi hai..🤣😆

vaise i love to throw tamatar and eggs

but here i didnt got t chance to do so...🤣😭😆

oh gawd...help me😆 again bhaasan..🤣😲

your gutter hard work..???? yeh...😆 🤣

and my gutter mind..that i loved it...😆 🤣 🤣

overall it was wonderful os...😳

and chal hatt mat bolna please..coz truth is truth...😆🤣

meko aapka pm nhi mila tha...😭

but its okay...😃

m lucky i didnt misssed the chance to read it...😆 🤣

your new nick name lopu di....

take care...love you...

see ya...

😳🤣

Edited by .saumya. - 12 years ago

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Soumya

@.-Soumya-.

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Awsum part di
In between it was so emotional 😭
Then their nok jhok was so cute 😉
N their romance was freaking hawttt 😳
Thanx for PM di

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raddhi

@raddhi

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

aww it was emotional romantic

sexy prt kkk i luv it to core n awsm prt

n kisses were awsm n i luv dis tattoos idea

n i wish tht u keep giving us new way of tattoos

in future also thanks alot n keep writing n thanks for PM

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Alefiya Magar

@alef_mgr

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Hot ☺️
Taani ko tumor nahii 😭
Uff the tatoo thing ☺️ 😳 ☺️
M blushing lyk hell ☺️
Keep writing such stuff...! 😉 😆
Loved it totally ❤️

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Viji.Chandran

@Viji.Chandran

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

happy ending...

yippeee

i nevr thought u l evr update ur stories...

bt u did...

thats sm thng unexpectd...

taani n her plan ws just perfect,...

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Akshita Taneja

@AkshitaWrites.

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

Awesome.. Sreelu di I know that u dont get tired of giving bad comments on ur work bt still this was really good.. thanku fr d pm.. keep writing n do pm me