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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: hima_taarey

omg...

thanx a lot 4 this tattooo update...
it was so emotional and...
it was viraciously a passionate chapter...
loved it to the core...
*applause*
*speechless*

😆lol thanks...glad u liked my piece of work😳...thanks for the reply
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vi1772843271_nc

i just loved it

it was really nice

i just read ur whole os right now
and it is just wow

great job done by u
loved it
and thanks for the pm dear...!!!

thanks alot for reading and glad u liked it😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: iheartd3

hey...luved ur os...starting was emotional bt later part was romantic...keep writing more 😳

thanks dear...glad u liked it
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: .saumya.

res😆


unres...

omg..ur bhaasan di...🤣 🤣

okay coming to first update
it was really emotional one..
the way you describedd the pain of TaaRey was just
ummm....i dont have words..it was freak awesomely written👏
it contained passion,love,aggression for each other

but itna lamba update tha ki 2 min me hi khatm ho gya...🤣

okay now me bhaaging to read next one..ba bye...



oh god..again bhaasan...😆🤣

before leap...it was again so emotional..

argghh😡..my TaaRey❤️ why their love is so so so pure
i ll go mad one day😆🤣

heading forward for leap


hahahaha awww😳.their cute stupied fights filled with love and care...☺️

taani wants tatoo...🤣




' it was you who never loved me or trusted me taani' there was always love and trust from my side taani'and u broke me in to pieces 'u played with my emotions taani'u never loved me taani'u never did''
She felt like slapping him for the distrust he had on her. Well of course she would've done that too if it was not her fault'the flames were now spread on her eyes too'
He was still repeating his words.' U never loved me taani'never''
She only knew how much she wished to punish him for those words he blurted.

underlined words made me speechless



taani biting rey's lips...☺️

bechara rey🤣..the pain of his lips.🤣..taani...🤣
then the passionate kisss..☺️..,m in..TaaRey dreamland.😳.wow..☺️



the naughtiest rey...😆🤣
lemme remember the parts where you wanted the kiss...😆


and the os ended with an happy note...👏

boring gal itni bhi boring nahi hai..🤣😆

vaise i love to throw tamatar and eggs
but here i didnt got t chance to do so...🤣😭😆


oh gawd...help me😆 again bhaasan..🤣😲

your gutter hard work..???? yeh...😆 🤣
and my gutter mind..that i loved it...😆 🤣 🤣


overall it was wonderful os...😳
and chal hatt mat bolna please..coz truth is truth...😆🤣

meko aapka pm nhi mila tha...😭
but its okay...😃
m lucky i didnt misssed the chance to read it...😆 🤣
your new nick name lopu di....
take care...love you...
see ya...
😳🤣

holy shit i forgot to put note for kids🤣not likely to be read by kids😆lol😆
lol may be for the 1st time i'm getting such a lengthier reply😆me not used to it 🤣thanks alot for spending so much time to give me a reply...really glad that u liked my work...
oh yes happy to have an admirer of my baashans🤣me happyyy🤣
and yes thanks for reading and replying...
and now u should tell me y u named me lopu di😆i din't get the meaning kay 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: soumiluvztaarey

Awsum part di
In between it was so emotional 😭
Then their nok jhok was so cute 😉
N their romance was freaking hawttt 😳
Thanx for PM di

thanks for reading dear 🤗glad u liked it and no need to say thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
☺️Amazing ending...
**fainted**😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it di..Yah finally i read.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow awesome!!!
loved it soo much
thanxs 4 the pm and sorry 4 late comment...
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Posted: 11 years ago
@taashareyam: thanks
***what a crap feeling.damn i wrote this :v :p -_____-

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