Smitar's: Finding Khushi #12 Last Part Pg32 (11/7)

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vittoriA Giardano

@kbtr

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#291

Loved it! Loved how you used parts of the show. Loved how your Arnav behaved, so much better than the ASR who changed in the show. And most of all, loved how true you were with the character of Kushi. (What a mess they made in the show of the real Kushi!)

tfs

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muskaanrao222

@muskaanrao222

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Posted: 12 years ago

#292

superb last part...!
gonna miss this badly!

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teja21

@teja21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#293

i'm extremley sry fr nt commenting on the previous updates n comenting after so long,

i was in hospital due to high fever n was completely bed ridden

hope u understand

d updates were awesome n

it was an awesome ending

thanx fr d pms dear

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733619

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#294

This was a brilliant story. Loved it. Thank you so much.

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daljeet

@daljeet

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#295

Wonderful I loved this story. Great first night. I loved it, no vulgar, but so romantic.

Loved and will miss Anamika, Gaurav and Ganesh!!!!

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..Anita..

@..Anita..

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#296

That was a sweet ending

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#297

cant believe this story have finish

fantastic updates

loved it

from the wedding to the honeymoon

amazing updates

will miss this story

thanks for the pms Rashmi

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@SuperstarSanaya

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#298

Hi Smita,

finally I finished with the last part.

and It was the perfect concluding update for both stories.

Loved the cute and sweet conversation between Anamika and Gaurav.

and Arnav-Khushi.. they are best.

"Promise me that you will never leave me, Khushi. Tumhare bina..." Arnav gulped. "Tumhare bina main jee nahi paaoonga..."

a beautiful end of full circle where he started with Finding her and at the end found and made her promise to never leave him.

Smita, you weaved a lovely story around these lines about leaving him. I have enjoyed it throughout. Thanks for writing it.

And, thanks to Rashmi for all her efforts of posting and PMing.😃

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Mystery Girl

@mysterygirl06

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#299

it was a awesome story...thanks for sharing it...

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lilakumariacnw

@lilakumariacnw

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#300

Lovely ending to a beautiful story...
Ur stories r always beautiful... "Beautiful" isnot just a term...but ur stories r best described by the word beautiful...
One can always find the beauty in ur writting... Stories can be told ... But the way it is told makes it beautiful... Thats what u r doing to ur stories...
Telling us stories in the most beautiful way...
Smitha... Ur pairing with rashmi is just wonderful... It always mak us understand the depth of things which our silly brains miss...

Will surely miss this story...
Love you both... Let u both be together always...