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Part 46 - Amazing 😊 Awesome FF
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When I came to Finding Khushi to read I thought to write my views in word and post them here, wished I had done same with other stories too...I had yet to read Loving Khushi and half of the story in Saving Khushi...

Finding Khushi

When I started to read the story, I was..er...can't explain what I felt...Khushi's coldness and throwing his word at him back, Arnav's attempt on trying to get her back to RM, the way Khushi fought with him throughout was written beautifully, she made him see his wrong assumption about his father, and Arnav finally realizing it, she had made him to see his fault in Lavanya's matter, he accepting and apologizing to Lavanya, so good to read...I was enjoying everything, her attempt to go away from him but ending up close to him, Mami with binoculars keeping an eye on Arnav and Khushi, NK's hindi, Anjali and Nani...buaji, Amma everyone are so so good...Arnav asking for time for them to know each other...so perfectly shown that we could imagine happening before our eyes,...really Di ( can I call you Di?) I felt fury engulf me when Lisa said to Khushi all that, and then Pam and Sim hurting her more including on Arnav too because of his past Khushi got hurt...Khushi however made him see how it would be for a girl to look past everything and move on...Khushi opened her new sweet shop to support her family that was good to see Arnav too supported her in a way which will not hurt her or her family. Pam and Sim got what they deserved and now waiting for Arnav ji to do something to that Lisa witch.

I'm briefed my experience I felt while reading the story from part one to the annual party, I should have done this earlier...should have read one part then should have commented on it about how I felt but I in the awe of reading story forget to do so,...and I realized my folly in half of the story at 19th part...

The annual party was rofl the way Khushi chased the model away...Anamika character at the part introduced was interesting, she showed Khushi how the world in the business world is and all are not good like she thinks, she even told not every women lover her Arnav ji but they are behind his money...Anamika offered for them her designing clothes for 5 months, each month one piece of designer dress which she designs. Khushi coming to Anamika's office was view to watch, so Anamika is the lady ASR or to say she is more than ASR who is sharp tongue like razor, and temper reaching the heights of sky...how did she found Khushi is a gem, in only a few minutes speaking with Khushi...So she is all soft towards Khushi when she never was before like this with anyone other than her son...Oh I missed to tell, Gaurav part was lol...he calling Khushi Florence nightingale...I had a doubt too like Ganesh Why Anamika is keen on showing the world what Khushi is and what she means to Arnav...why she is helping them? I mean like she is building a protective wall around Khushi from getting hurt from those bitchy womens...Arnav's look on seeing Khushi in the blue saree before photo session was incredible, the way Khushi complimented them, Anamika and Ganesh trying to not laugh seeing them was rofl...wow Anamika is at bua ji house and Raizada's Gupta's are looking at the magazine in which Arnav and Khushi's photo published...the way you described Arnav's and Khushi's photo taken was like with open eyes I'm dreaming...

I'm still wondering why Anamika loves Khushi, I know Khushi is innocent, wonderful girl but that does not tells all, something must there for Anamika to love Khushi when she hates Arnav. I'm loving this Anamika character. She ahd come up to Khushi's house and given them magaize, Di you know the way you described each photo was like I'm there looking at Arnav and Khushi taking photo before me, like Anjali said she is going to a picnic, even I too went to the place like you described Ganesh had set for Arnav and Khushi. Arnav is turning naughtier day by day with the way he does not live a chance for Khushi to blush. Ganesh is a wonderful photographer, with Anamika the great designer they both brought the splendid magic of Arnav and Khushi's love.

Anamika's story moved me, that was so hurtful for any girl to be gangraped, hell rape is however a wrong thing for any girl, she must have shattered to lose her amma too...how hurt she should have been and then Gaurav came in her life...

NK and Akash pair is so rofling, the way NK always kills hindi and Akash banging his head corrects it. You bring out every character like they were in the show, kind nani, hello hi bye bye , soft Anjali, bua ji, Amma, babu ji, Payal, everyone looks so real.

Raizadas and Guptas had went to console Anamika and support her, Bua ji's interaction with Guarav, pure look of horror on his face with mami ji's magazine idea was rofl... smiled, and said audaciously, "Khushi, after our wedding is fixed, I will help you marry off anybody, even Buaji!" this line rofl me to no end nandhkishore...

I love the way bua ji teases Khushi, Arnav and everyone around her, and mami ji is not to be left back, she too can't be left behind when it comes to teasing. Raizadas and Guptas all set to get Anamika and Ganesh married off, and the way they put their words to the both were so nice...Arnav and Khushi part were always so funny, romantic, nice, warm, beautiful, wonder, splendid, so I'm not going to go on them telling again and again how incredible they are.

At last Ganesh and Anamika are getting married with Arnav and Khushi, I love how Raizadas and Guptas took Anamika, Ganesh and Gaurav inside their family with welcome arms. Arnav is such a tease...Lisa had got what deserved but I want ASR to shower his wrath on her with Anamika...I loved all the pre wedding rituals, engagement, sangeet was one fun filled I was laughing all the way, it was good my mom has slept otherwise she would have thought have I gone carazy to laugh at something staring at my lappy at 1. Am lol...the haldi scene oh I loved it so much the way Khushi said she wants to go with Arnav not wanting to be away from him...teasing bua ji and mami ji were so brilliantly done...Khushi is unbeliveabale man she and her sanak pan she cried and accused NK because he had not invited her for the party, and NK had asked sorry for wrong accusation...I think Khushi did not understood fully what bachelor party is?...bang guess was right, haha ha innocent Khushi, Anjali had to tell her bluntly, I love the way Khushi gave the girl Neha a tight slap. But she did had her faith in her Nanhe ji. Wedding of both couples were described beautiful, Arnav rofled me with the way he fled with Khushi to his farm house. Their post wedding, I mean Suhaag raat was blushing'...so I leave it there...superb ending...After the story came to end I was scowling at my laptop as if asking why the story finished so soon...

I'm going to read Loving Khushi after this...it will take time I guess...and you are wonderful writer...and Rulama Di did a good interpretation which helped us lot to understand the update and story in clearer view.

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome...
read it in one go,,,,,,
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Posted: 11 years ago
Read it once again...
and here is one small gift from me for you Smitaji n Reshu too.😛






lots of love for both of you.🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
I read all in one go.Love it😊
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awesome story... and your way of writing ...seems like each scene is being going on live...
😊 came across ur story yesterday...and read from ch-1 to chap-46...at one go... couldn't felt like stopping even when i had to...will be reading ur other stories now. i didn't even stop to write to u about the chapters in between... actually didn't want to stop at any chap... the sangeet was fabulous...

take care
sushmita
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it
it was so cute
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Thus wad the next one I finished...I'm so glad I came across this amazing index!
Loving the series, it's so heartwarming, bringing back so many memories! Love your Arshi!,
Finding Khushi was a beautiful journey and I loved reading it!
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Truly brillant story dear! Beautifully written, so that I really couldn't stop reading through the hole night and the hole day... Hubby was not amused to see me doing nothing but reading! Love this story and the way you are writing! Thank you very much for this one, cheers Chanya.

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