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Posted: 12 years ago
great chapter once again! I get so into the story that I sometimes forget where I am! lol. I enjoyed it from beginning to end. Wow so Khushi was right about Shyam Jha. I'm glad they were able to resolve everything with that. Poor Khushi and Arnav. They desperately need each other, but at the same time their past doesn't seem to leave them. I'm really curious now as to what happened 10 years ago. I hope we can find out soon! I love that this chapter took us back to the prologue, but this time in Arnav's point of view. So the minute he entered his past all his feelings for Khushi took a backseat. Oh no I really hope they can learn to move on and be with each other. Can't wait to read the next chapter!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally the past unravels... what did Khushi do... was she responsible for ASR losing someone close to him... he is 30 now.. so he was 20 then... so was it Anjali that he lost?
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update...I am just amazed where they, especially Arnav ,started from and where they have arrived in terms of their relation...impossible to believe that Arnav who did't even want to be in the same room as Khushi can't wait to have her at his side and even rings to hear her voice...the dynamics of their relation has changed beyond belief. Khushi as well is feeling some very strong emotions towards Arnav...she can't take her eyes off him and looks forward to receive his phone calls and against her better judgement agrees to go to Sheesh Mahal just because Arnav asked her to.

Arnav wanted green eyed monster raise its head in Khushi and to achieve that he had planned to just flirt with Sheetal but things went completely wrong and out of hand, how is he going to fix this remains to be seen.

I want to know what really happened in their past and how was Khushi responsible for whatever happened.
What we have is biggest cliffhanger ever and I just want to say can we have the next update now?

Love the way your are telling this tale and off course your writing style is brilliant and the characterisation is out of this world. Please continue soon.
Thank you for the update.
Will wait eagerly for the next update.




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Posted: 12 years ago
So its here.

I hate sheetal.

The scene I had detested but waited for nonetheless. Hoping that some reaction would come out..and following that, their history too.

I don't know why he HAD to do what he did... I don't know the excruciating pain that their shared past has caused Arnav which in turn had led him to hurt her in this way.

I hate Sheetal.

But the surprising thing is that...they haven't acknowledged feeling anything more than that inexplicable attraction or pull...then how did he know that doing what he did would hurt Khushi immensely?

Dil ki dhadkanein ek hojaati hain?

And that's how they know what will cause pain and pleasure to the other?

I guess that's how it has always been between them!

Samajhne aur na samjhane ki zaroorat hi nahi padti...
though I don't really know if its a good thing or a bad thing?

What will Khushi do now? Leave for Delhi? Something tells me that she'll treat him very civilly. Devoid of any emotion she should be displaying and naturally cool and unruffled. That's how I would like to see her treating the Stupid Raizada. THEN he'll know! Huh!

He gave into his demons. Okay fine. I shouldn't be judging what made him do that because I don't know what he suffered..but seriously he did that? God.

He's supposed to be a nice guy, isn't he? Fir isko ho kya jata hai?

Sigh.

Stupid him. His past. His anger. And his stupid brain which doesn't let him listen to his nice,soft heart.


How can you stop here Juhi? Its downright cruel.

Sigh. Though I am very happy we'll get two updates in this week! :D


Oh and, did I mention? I hate Sheetal.


And yes, I absolutely LOVE your titles. Bas.


Edited by arshi21 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wah! I'm shattered myself! Great update!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Oh what an amazing update!!!

So Shyam was the reason they had to come back, so Khushi's instinct were telling her the right thing.. Well she has been in this business for a while now.. At least the problem has subsided now...

So the past has finally caught up to them right at the pace where it all began...still trying to figure out what it was but waiting for that all unfold..
Khushi is heartbroken and Arnav really doesn't know what he feeling now..Sheetal I just don't like...

Can't wait for the next update... Take your time, asli duniya is more important
Will be waiting ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
Could not expect Shyam is the reason for their comeback
Could not wait for the past and eagerly waiting
for the next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally we will get to know what happend all those years ago...
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Posted: 12 years ago
How I wish I could do a mind swap NOW and read everything your mind has planned for the story!!!! Queen of Cliffhangers and Mistress of Mysteries... I am hanging there right on the edge of the cliff and dont even know how long before I get a clue..ab khush ho?😆

This whole update was all about justifying your prologue and the reason why you wrote the story right? the promo scene for the show?

I TOTALLY LOVED the ELEVATOR SCENE!!!!! whatever we saw in the promo, your scene justified beyond all possibilities and BIG muuaaahhh for that!!!

And you couldnt stop at that right? you had to rewrite the chopper scene and change all my memories of Arnav Singh Raizada stepping out a chopper and walking towards Sheesh Mahal with all his nightmares coming back...the setting was the same...but in my mind this politician Arnav has overwritten all other chopper memories of ASR!!!!

Feeling terrible for Khushi...and cant wait for the flashback...
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Posted: 12 years ago
AND THE PROLOGUE JUST KICKED IT WOW SO HE DID IT JUST TO HURT HER JUST TO GIVE HER PAIN THE FRIENDSHIP THAT WAS REBUILDING IT SELF HE DESTROYED IT BECAUSE OF THE PAST SO SAD AND SHE SHOULD HAVE LISTEN TO HER INSTINCT ABOUT SHYAM HEART BREAKING UPDATE KHUSHI DREAMS SHATTERED

Edited by dumas - 12 years ago

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