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Swati Singhal

@swatim318

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Posted: 12 years ago

#421

Its Sunday already Dahling.. when are we getting the update..??????

waiting..

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Shobhana

@-Shobhu21-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#422

Oh !

I have no idea what to say !

The whole trip through the cavern, and the little ways in which they are aware of each other ! Really yaara, it makes my heart go dhak dhak,.. But everytime I read a new update, the prologue.. it slows it down ! I want to know much more about it !

And now, the last update.. Khushi speaking to him like this, he has committed a big blunder hasnt he ? I know Khushi will solve it, but I just hope it goes good !

And then the scene outside Khushi's room ! Believe me I was holding my breath throughout ! And the way you wrote every little flicker of their eyes over their ! *bows down* You are amazing !

Cant wait for the next update !

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CheshireBilli

@CheshireBilli

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Posted: 12 years ago

#423

Teri aankhon ka qaidi hoon
Mohabbat kaam hai mera
Hoon aashiq yeh khata meri
Ke Javed naam hai mera.

My name is not Javed, but the sentiment is the same ya?

Humse pyaar karle tu and give us an updex?

Edited by Semanti - 12 years ago

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EXPELLIARMUS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#424

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EXPELLIARMUS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#425

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CheshireBilli

@CheshireBilli

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Posted: 12 years ago

#426

OHMYGOD!

I knew it! Khushi's instinct couldn't be THAT off the mark! Shyam effin' Jha! He be da corrupt doctor! 😲 Conspiracy theories galore. Maybe the opposition planted him!? Maybe he planted himself!?

And DAN, the elevator wala scene. Also from the promo. I get such FEELZ whenever you use any of the promo-walein scenes, kya bolun ab?

OHMYGOD the sexual tension. I don't think thanda pani would help at all heer.

I've probably said this before too, but I love how A and K read each other so well in your stories. They really GET each other. Even through the whirlwind week where they had to do massive damage control, they managed to stay connected. Those phone conversations were so cute and they felt real-- the kind any two people getting to know each other might share.

Much like Julia Roberts and Hugh Grant from Notting Hill, they say it best when they say nothing at all!

Oh so THAT'S how the party happens at Sheesh Mahal after all.

*cue Kyun Dard hai Itna playing*

And the blasted past is back.

So I was close. Arnav DID make out with Sheetal as some sort of twisted revenge as well as a way to free his mind from the unwanted thoughts plaguing it.

But poor Khushi. Whatever she's done ten years ago, I can't help but feel AWFUL for her.

Because she isn't exactly the kind to hurt anyone intentionally. So whatever happened was either a genuine mistake or something she felt that she had to do. She just doesn't seem like the kind to hurt anyone for kicks or randomly mess around.

And she seems to have been paying in more ways than one ever since.

And did that feel like an Anjali dialogue in between? No teletubbies then. Drat it.

So Anjali had attempted to be the voice of reason and had been shot down by her Chhotey's volatile temper.

But she isn't here now. So then where is she?

Dead? Injured? Memory loss? Stuck in teletubby land? Just in a different city/country?

It don't feel like she's around somehow.

The two are definitely linked-- Khushi's so-called error and Anjali.

Damn.

Heart break and rain have gone hand in hand since time immemorial in Hindi movies and soaps. The question is, will epiphany follow?

Eeep! Can't wait for the next chapter.

Edited by Semanti - 12 years ago

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

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Posted: 12 years ago

#427

So it was Mr. Shyam Manohar jha who was the culprit. You know it always gives me immense pleasure whenever the character of Shyam is negative; aadat si pad gayi hai. And in this case while I was still vacillating about his character until the last chapter, I was wishing for Khushi's intuition to come true.

The change in the equation between our protagonists is so comforting. It may have begun in that cavern cut out from the rest of the world but the fact that it extended till India and braved the trouble caused by Shyam ( of course I would like to believe that Khushi's handling of the mess in an efficient manner was what ameliorated things between them a bit more) is what made me harbor a feel good feeling after this update.

But the past still looms doesn't it? This one threw more light upon the effect Arnav is having on Khushi. The photo part was especially touching as also her realization that she was to stay at hercurrent profession for logn when he would be here temporarily stirred me. And while she is still in two minds owing to their shared history, it was a surprise to see him being more humane towards her. And that not onty extends to the daily phone calls and the improvement of the camaraderie between the two of them but also the point where he asked her if she would be okay with the party beign held at Sheesh Mahal.

How much have things changed over the past one month! At that time I distinctly remember him not even wishing to be in the same room as Khushi while this one had him yearning for her presence just so that it could help him sustain being in Sheesh mahal.

You know I could I have gone into overdrive and scratched everything that I had written in favor of Arnav had he gone ahead with his earlier plan of dangling the green eyed monster in front of Khushi by making use of Sheetal. But then the way you described the rapid change that took place in Arnav's bearing right from the time he entered the venue makes me not go and lash out at him. Of course, he isn't forgiven; because the damage has been done. To have him make out with Sheetal and imagine Khushi all the while doesn't make him own any brownie points...because I think if Khushi has been responsible for anything that has happened ten years ago, Arnav shall be the one responsible for what happens at present.

Needless to say...this is going to be the most frustrating of cliffhangers. We have arrived at the prologue, Khushi's reminiscence is about to start and thus we are going to get the real story, but then the next update is also not going to come soon.

There are two things left for me to do; either concentrate on the Aviator clad Arnav getting down from his helicopter and erase out all that took place subsequently or if that doesn't work...take up Arasi's advice and buy a wig.

Now only if you could update soon!

Edited by Eccentrica - 12 years ago

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shijinareneesh

@shijinareneesh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#428

U r here!!!!!!!!
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👏 ok I just realized I am the third one to comment,and I am debating myself whether I post my comment here or not and the later won .simply cz I am afraid that I can't do justice to your update through my words.this is not my place to comment,sorry for wasting the space...sooo i'll post any of the leading page,but comment I'll... 😉

Edited by shijinareneesh - 12 years ago