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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry for late comments...
Beautifully written.. I always start my comment with the same line, as cant help it Juhi.. Its really fabulous...
Arnav came back for her.. Obviously, How can Khushi think that he will let her be in that place and in that condition alone..😊?
Loved how he was by her side through out the journey...
how he called in between his meeting to check if she is fine or not...
both are getting affected with each other.. Cant wait for the next update and to know about their flashback along with that prologue... Its killing me..😔
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Posted: 12 years ago
A little embarrassed to be here given that i am yet to comment in detail on the last chapter but still wanted to let you know that i am waiting desperately and eagerly to know ke Arnav ne aisa kya kiya???


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Posted: 12 years ago
So our hero never left...they both are coming closer and closer ...wondering what could be the news which compeled them to return back...update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Waiting for the update.. :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally caught up with chaps 2 to 5! What an adrenalin rush it has been! I applaud myself for the patience with which I put off reading these chaps to save my weak heart!

It's like you have kept us on our toes through the entire story so far! I am impatiently waiting for part 6!
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting for the update.. [8->]
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Posted: 12 years ago
You Need To Show Them The Way - Chapter 4 part 1

Juhi..I think you should really take me seriously about that book!
I knew it, his condition ...is that she accompanies him...and she agrees...
I loved how both are questioning themselves and their reason though...he wondering why he made that condition and she wondering why she agreed ?
I loved their internal introspection and confusion ...she had called his bluff..he thought she would probably refuse, but seeing that victorious glint in his eyes she accepts...but why had he made that offer...? Why had she accepted it...marvellous!
I loved how both equally stumped has just avoided talking about it in case the spell breaks ...

Loved how she needing to voice her thoughts out loud needed to speak to La and get it out of her system...everything she was feeling being in such close proximity to him her growing attraction, her confusion everything. I love how La is up to date on every detail about Arnav...including his schedule at the conference...she needed to let it all out...to be reminded that whatever happened is not her fault and she should be feel guilty...clearly she feels she has some reason too...now this it gotten more interesting ...so it's something that she thinks is her fault...ok ok remembering note to myself...

This was his city, he should be at home here, he loved this city but here too he was just consumed by her...
I loved how even though they are together in the US, they are not together its more like just knowing they are in the same space is enough for them in some way..
He busy with his conference she in the gallery, but both are aware of each other oblivious to each other ...she has no clue how any spare moment and his eyes search for her...and the disappointment when he does not see her...
I liked how he knows when she has entered the room at the dinner and is mesmerised by her and she stands out for him in a room full of people..I loved how he cannot take his eyes off her even though he wanted to and he knew that there was something undeniable between them...
Seeing her laugh brings back memories...everything about her evoked emotions in him...
loved that she did not look extraordinary about her appearance it was the feeling that he felt that was extraordinary and he could not fight it...

I loved how he cannot understand how people think her name is apt when for him she symbolises something quite the contrary...

Loved how the sight of her sparks off feelings off jealousy and rage much to his annoyance and a loss of control of his feelings...and he does not like it! And uses an excuse to get her away...alone ...but could hardly tell her what he was really feeling...

Loved how whatever transpired between them personally ...professionally she was perfect, loved how talking to her, her desire to change the system and he felt invigorated by talking to her and wanted to be with her and makes these changes together ...

I loved how as soon as she leaves he feels alone in a room full of people.

I loved how he just could not fight the feeling anymore...the attraction and emotions not even his professionalism, nor the past !

I loved him thinking why could he just not feel this attraction towards Sheetal and un complicate things...but he was irrevocably drawn to Khushi...

Loved his just to have her near him, he riles and challenges her...when Sheetal asks her to join the expedition ...
Love how they size up each other, love how he to hide his own weakness and feeling for her reminds her of their professional relations up !

Loved how he wonders who is the real coward is!

I don't know what spells you weave but your writing is magical leaving me enchanted!

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Posted: 12 years ago
wot was it that the mediaz creatin a havoc abt?? as for the entire update.. m speechless... its fantastic.. i dont have words to point out wot exactly i liked cuz i liked everything...😊

the way u play wid the plot gosh... m desperatly waitin fr more of the story to unfold... the sayin goes that - curiosity killed the cat , but frm nxt tym it wud be like curiosity killed niharika!!!

very curiously waitin fr the nxt one.. 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 2

So she thinks he should not be calling her a coward ...why is that? does she think he is a coward?
I knew that last comment about her being a coward would ensure that she will go for that expedition ...
Knowing she is way in above her head, but if that is admiration for her that she sees in his eyes when he finally notices her it was worthwhile ...

Loved how even though he keeps her within eyesight he never comes to her ...like I said sometimes just breathing the same air, being in the same space was enough!

Going forward the expedition and the course getting harder and harder,her mind and body feeling it making her realise how unprepared she was for something like this, but she us not give up, nor take the easy way...she would not quit...
While he was a natural and graceful...
I wish our country had politicians like them...really...

Loved how when she gets stuck and injures her foot...(.I immediately thought of the ankle twisting by the poolside...) he is right behind her, angry as say what you may but he cannot see her in pain and is angry at her carelessness, love how she apologises and he asks her for what she was apologising ...a loaded question ...I got the feeling that there was hidden reference to the past too...

I loved how through the pain that one thing she registers is his calling her by her name...wonderful...for how long more will they avoid what is going on between them,?

I love how she thinks he has left her and gone ...leaving her to wonder if he does really hate her that much...and in pain, fear and panic she calls out his name...

I am sure he is right there...onto part 5 to find out!

And I don't think I have realised home is where my heart is!

Edited by vandana.sagar - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow simly superb dear..
I hope u know dt u r myy one of d fav writer...
u deserved it...
love it..
thanks

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