Arshi SS ~ For Your Sake ~ (THREAD 1)

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#561

wow ...awesome update looking forward to see what has happened in the past and does kushi really deserve whats being dished out to her...feel really bad for arnav ...hope he finds his happiness soon...looking forward to read more...

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@SuperstarSanaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#562

Hey Anony_mous.

another one superb story by you.

and you just know how to get readers wrapped up around your story. 👏 absolutely amazing piece of your brilliance filled writing. Arnav as Lawyer and Khushi his secretery.. tied down with responsibility of her Younger brother.

Loved the start.. where Khushi was being subjected to insults without her faults. it actually created a curiosity at first.. and followed further.. the last line of the first chapter "she knew she was the reason of it." had me very much intrigued that if they knew each other before this Boss-Secretery relationship.

and 2nd chapter was all the more sad when I explored ASR. Aditi was a very strong lady I must say. My heart went out to her turmoil. a wrost of any kind in girl's life but she still faught for her Son. worked all her life.. and asked him to be happy. let bygones be bygones. only if her Son could give her that. only if her Son could be happy to pay off all hardships she has been thru!

and the end para of this update once again had me thinking.. theres definitely some connection, some past these 2 has shared. I am sure ASR is furious at Khushi for dancing with some other man. and infused such jealousy.. theres difenitely something had happened.

I want to know more. This story is super fascinating. And more so.. you have addressed very sensitive issue of Arnav being the rape child. I fear with Khushi thinking herself to be 'Imperfect', if she had also been subjected to someone's lust like Aditi. I hope not.

do continue soon.. and I don't have to say but still I will.. update MKM please. 😳

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Nida

@Gurmeet4Drashti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#563

Hey ...
I just read both the chapters and I loved it ... :)
The story us really intriguing !!! :)

Awww I feel really bad for Khushi ... :(
She just keeps mum and listen to all his accusations ... :|

Even Arnav's past is saddening ... <\3

Does Arnav feel something for khushi ???
I have a feeling that he's jealous coz khushi had danced merrily with a random person ... :)

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segad

@segad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#564

holy cow! here i was feeling bad for arnav who suffered for no fault of his and then you bring out the possessive arnav. please no forcing himself on her. after knowing his mother's history, that should be anathema to him.

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Atyay

@Atyay

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Posted: 12 years ago

#565

Loved the update!

Thank you for the PM. I have already contacted you via mail, will look forward to your creation updates when you shift to blog. 😊

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Pd2012

@Pd2012

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#566

Excellent. Eagerly waiting for the next update.

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newfoundlove

@newfoundlove

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Posted: 12 years ago

#567

hey!
I'm new to your stories and iust read these two chapters.
I'm loving the story so far.

feeling bad for both arnav and khushi, arnav for his past and his need to make an identity for himself, and khushi for having to put up with arnav.

looking forward to where the story goes from here

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Harshita

@Hanuharshita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#568

I had said before only that this one will be better than the Silent Symphony haven't I ? Arnav's past touched my heart. You did the write thing by taking this topic up. We all know what happens in cases liked this. Though the people say that India is developing but the basic mentality is the same; no change in that. Maybe not in other aspects but where girls are considered the mentality is the same.

It is tough to write something like that and you did a great job!!! You wrote is so perfectly ; without imposing your opinions on the readers.They can make their own opinions regarding this.I am waiting for Khushi's past now.

P.S. Are you planning to take up writing professionally?? If not , then think of it.

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parjay

@parjay

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Posted: 12 years ago

#569

Beautifully written. ..ur story is conventional with a perfect blend of creativity.. the way u made us travel through Arnav's past was filled with expanse of emotins.. there was pain ironically warming up virtue of hope.. dnt knw wat connects arnav and kushi neither I wanna guess.. just waiting for the further track n hw the story gets unfold.. thanks for this amazing creation...

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kharunya

@kharunya

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#570

Nice update.

Arnav's dark painful past is very touching one.

His agony what to do with khushi as he is taking out his anger and it is not giving him satisfaction. Was arnav was affected by khushi's family in the past?

"He had worked like a man possessed to reach where he was today but for whom? No one. He had bloody no one to call his own." Really this sentence shows how much he missed his mother and feeling guilty for not providing good treatment for his mother

last sentence give me a sense that khushi didnt permit arnav to come close to her. Am i right?