I shall start my comment by apologizing profusely for not commenting earlier. I don't have any excuse except I thought I had nothing to offer your story. Your story is beyond any praise. Whenever I read this story and think of commenting, words escape me, I feel overwhelmed. This story is one of my favorites no doubt. I usually prefer stories with light hearted and comic plot line. But this story with its intense plotline and impeccable characterization drew me to it. I wish I could find words to express how much I love this story. I absolutely adore the khushi...I sympathize with her. Having lost my mother when I was only 14 k could understand some of her troubles...difference is I m an only child. So I didn't have to look after a younger sibling.
Poor khushi due to her naivete and inherent goodness took such a huge decision. I wish there was someone to guide her.
I can't even begin to tell you how much I cried after I read this story...
those 11 years, so many lost opportunities...I wish I were more eloquent.
Whenever I read other ppls comments I feel so envious of them...they can describe their feelings and thoughts so wonderfully I wish I could too. Hopefully you will forgive me for commenting so late. Or my audacity to even ask for forgiveness. I just wanted you to know that I absolutely adore and worship you for writing and sharing this beautiful piece of work...
I really appreciate the time and hard work you put into this story. Not to mention the way you handled such delicate issues. I simply love you yaar
Edited by cj-the-greatest - 10 years ago
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