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Posted: 12 years ago
a very very perfect ending!!! thanks so much for such a brilliant work, Rima 😊 I just relived IPKKND moments 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hi Rima,

Sorry for such a late late comment.

What a fitting conclusion to the story. As clichd as it was, I absolutely loved the roller coaster journey you took us on. I felt every emotion, pain, turmoil, joy and bliss that Arnav and Khushi experienced.

So true, we seldom appreciate simple, yet special things and people in life when we have them. We know the true value only when they are gone or lost. For seven years Khushi was able to live her life knowing that Arnav is alive and is happy somewhere but he is there. But the moment she realized that she is going to lose him logic, rituals, formalities, manipulations everything flew out of the window.

When Arnav was on the verge of losing his life he realized that his life was a void without Khushi and he was letting his ego and pride take over his happiness. He realizes that end of the day what matters is they are together and that's what is their destiny and happiness.

All is well that ends well.


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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update..
Such an amazing ff...
Whole story was wonderful...
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Posted: 11 years ago
I really loved this story..
the last line of this story is universal truth for an IPKKND fan..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Where the hell was I when you were writing this wonderful piece of work?

Stories like these make me want to kick myself for not having been with it every step of the way.

I loved how you delved into the psyche of the characters of Arnav and Khushi, La and NK and even Arnav's father and Khushi's mausi.

Your characters are multi-dimensional, you bring in the past to show how it shapes the present and affects the future, you showed how scars run deep and take time to heal, you showed that valiant efforts to win are not so valiant after all. Because we are humans, first and foremost. And between black and white there are some 254 shades of gray 😊

All this sees to it that your story isnt just another college romance. It is an emotional journey where you, as a writer, did justice to every aspect of each emotion for all your characters.

I know my comment doesnt make any sense. I dont even know how to word my opinion for this story. So, all I will say is I simply loved it. 👏

And the last line of your story: 'Because God knows,that He can make the world believe in love through your story---'

That isnt just about Never Say Goodbye, it is about Arnav and Khushi in IPK, isnt it? Because I can vouch that the last line of your story is a fact. Nothing less
Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow what a sentence. ... parting dialog. .. it's true. .. in all sense.
Awesome story. Well written.
Never got a chance to read your stories. Thanks to Rasgulla_sp for recommending .
No falling no rain no matured stuff.
Characterizations awesome.
Khushi always loved him.
Arnav fall for her heart.
His jealous his anger wow superb
His wooing... then angrily said what she was waiting for 7 years...
That accident and her dream... Amazing twist
Those photos and her captions wow it was sentimental.
Love it and enjoyed reading. .
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi dear
This is the second story of yours i'm catching up with...I am already glued to your on going story "TRAPPED"...

when i got to know your index yesterday, i dont know why i chose this as the first...but im very very happy that i have come across your index...beautiful story and all the emotions penned were excellent...keep it up...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Rima, just finished reading this FF in one go and it is abosolutely gorgeous...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow I just finished reading this story and it is super cool and emotional. You have very well portrayed each and every characters emotions. Thanks for the story.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Its an excellent story...
Number of parts made me in tears...
Its so awesomely written...
Superb ending...

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