Never Say Goodbye Final Part and Link to New SS - Page 84

hi...amazing story...👏read it in one go...beautifully written... you almost gave me a heart attack at the 2nd last update but thankfully it was a nightmare... love the ending...😊and looking forward to read more of your work...thnx for this lovely story...

kyun end kiya yeh story...aaj kitna miss kar rahi hoon...😔

Beautiful ending
loved it 😊

M missing dis story

sob

first u started giving update at 8 just like ipk...

N u ended it w/o notice achanak...just like ipk...sob

missing dis story

it was nice story

Just read it in one go

It was a beautiful story. loved the ending. Thanks for this wonderful story dear.

beautiful story

Hello Rima


This is my first update on this story. I read it at one stretch. Such a beautiful story weaved with an ocean of emotions and i found it very practical and real.

The bonding of their friendship , their gradual progression from friendship to love , their loneliness filled with regret and guilt and their longing for each other were beautifully written.


I loved the way u have portrayed the gradual change of Khushi from an eighteen year old girl to a twenty five year old , be it in the way she conducts herself, her outlook of the world but still maintained her innate qualities like her utter selflessness and the attitude of putting others happiness before hers even at the cost of her own happiness. U have also maintained the essence of Arnav with his ruthlessness towards the outside world but giving all his best and love to his loved ones. Nk's character was etched beautifully who stood as a pillar of support for a person who was naive , confused, low on self esteem and made her look the world from a different yet positive way. U started the story with NK, Arnav and Khushi and ended it with them !!!!!

The insecurities of a woman who has been hurt deeply , her morals being tarnished and made to feel of being used initially to capture another person's attention and later to gloat one's ego was wonderfully narrated. I am angry at u for one reason. I think what Arnav did by emotionally blackmailing her through his father and her massi was really wrong on his part and if i were in Khushi's shoes i too would have got offended and hurt badly by that act. Any relationship should not start with a foundation of lies and should be backed by trust and honesty. I just wished that Arnav could have really apologised to his actions atleast at the end when they decided to get married wholeheartedly. She had forgiven him for all his past acts due to the fear of losing him again but he should not have taken her for granted and should have offered his apologies for doing things behind her back.


But on the whole, a nice and an emotional journey encompassing of two beautiful souls intertwined with each other and traveling through the bumps but emerging victorious at the end . Kudos 👏

beautiful ending to a wonderful story...loved the ending line