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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 3 (b)

I think this chapter gave me diabetes. 😆 bohot hi zada sweet-sweet ho gaya.

I was shocked to see Sheetal's behavior... but then she's a bitch so was pretty understandable.

Here I want to thank NK (I mean you) for knocking some sense into Arnav's head. And I LOVED the change in him. How understanding he became and how gentle and nice he was with Khushi? I loved him in this chapter. All the disappointment from the chapter 2 is gone now.

I loved how he stood up for his wife, not just against Sheetal but against his family as well. #Respect!

And do I even need to tell how I liked their make-up scene? Again... very real. I love how Khushi didn't forgive him easily and Arnav understood it. And I loved how Arnav said he won't let her go anywhere away from. I loved the understanding between them there. They know each other too well.

"I hate you!! I hate you! You are a bad person!! Go and chase after that Sheetal.. GO! Why are you here!?!? You don't like me! You are ashamed of me! And you think that you had to compromise when you married me, right? Then fine! I will set you free from this marriage! I wish it were just another 6-month contract! At least it would have been over!! I wouldn't have been so sad! But its okay.. you are free now. I will leave your house soon. You can marry anyone you want to. Go to parties with anyone.. Have dinner with anyone.." ---- These are my favourite lines. Loved it. So much emotions in these words. Love, loved it!

So everything fell back into place? I do love a happy ending at the end of the day. Who doesn't? To be honest, Arnav's wasn't a jerk at all. We often say the harshest thing only to the people we love. Most people aren't black and white, they're grey. And Arnav is a fine example. But he deserves a happy ending too, doesn't it? But he better not hurt Khushi again 😃




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Posted: 12 years ago
Okay so I ended up commenting for all the chapters separately 😆 But I truly loved this fiction and all the chapters deserved separate comments.

Really great work, H 🤗 It made me miss the show so much...but in a good away. Absolutely loved this piece of work! Hum aapke pakka wala fan ban gaye!
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Posted: 12 years ago
I love it... your story literary touch my heart... dis was an awesome story i read till now...
U showed khushi arnav & n.k emotition briliantily... i loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
I really REALLY woud like to read a story where Khushi does not forgive ASR so easily.
I LOVED your story and definitely want to read more of your work. But, she forgave him too easily. In the show too.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it!
Loed the way NK knocked some sense into Arnav!
loved the way Arnav gave a boot to Sheetal!
Loved the way Arnav shut his family!
Loved the way Khushi gave vent to her feelings!
It was a wonderful story with a fabulous narration.
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Posted: 12 years ago
what an amazing ss...
jerk arnav...poor khushi n smart NK...
loved each n every part...
u really amaze me Helee...i never knew someone could write so well n u r the most versatile writer here...
i loved NK's character in this story...
finally arnav sudhar hi gaya!!!
OmNaMaSteOm thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
for me the best part is RM members giving ArHi their space
NK knocking sense into ASR.

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Posted: 12 years ago
superb...

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kbtr thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it up to Part 3A.
Then somehow, it fell short.
Arnav as usual, got off to easy!
Didn't feel his remorse at all!
Ah well...
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMFG!!! That was freaking roller coater ride!! Phewww..!!!!

U knw..i could actually FEEL Khushi's pain!!! That poor thing!!!


And Arnav was such a world class jerkkk!!!! JERK! ugghhh!!!


NK?? OMG...NK LOVES Khushi?? KHUSHI???? Poor guy..!!! Hes a gem!!


Thank god fr NK to actually knock some sense into Arnav!!!

But...MY Arnav wouldnt have gone THAT far...woh bhi uss sheetal ke ssath!! NO WAY!!!

U were brilliant yaar!! absolutely brilliant..thus is my first comment on ur wrk and i m gonna comment more!!! I lived THIS...completely!!!

p.s- i wud hav been heart broken if u wud hav sepearted ArShi!!!

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