Three's a Crowd *Last Part P15*

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Anupama

@Anupama.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

For 3A.

Now ironically, Arnav lashed out at Khushi, deeming her as an insecure fool who doesnt know how to stand by his side and here he himself lost his bearings when he gets to know of someone else loving his wife. The update totally belonged to NK.. And I lovved the last few lines. And also, I've realized that I have fallen in love with him. =) ;)
Most well written chapter of this series.

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Anupama

@Anupama.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

For last part-

be it a passionate or plutonic relationship, communication is really important and taking the loved one for granted is very hurtful. M glad Arnav realized this and his rather jerk behaviour. I kind of expected the making up scene to have played out differently but then its your story to tell. I loved it. Sheetal being shown her place.. And what do I say about the family! All i can say is that glad they got their senses back. ;) most importantly Payal.

Lavanya and Aman?! And our NK.? Me and him.? <3
;)

so? More angst shots, will ya?

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tvserial2012

@tvserial2012

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#123

i am so glad that someone other than Khushi dare to question Arnav. Frankly I didn't expect NK being so bold and knock some senses into Arnav...
All in all love this TS. hope to read some more in future. Thanks for the PM

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ashw99

@ashw99

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#124

As always beautiful H...
Loved the lion roar... when he does something it has to be 100 percent may be hate, may be love, or may be regret to its fullest, i really missed his blast to sheetal in ipk it was thanda not suitable to his ASR aura. So here one more revised track from you.
NK... yeah we should buy him girlfriend, its high time and also he is getting risky for us now that he got gut to stand to ASR.
That was amazing so when we are getting new one will wait for it come soon dear.

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KBS

@oKBSo

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

you should be awaded with oscar fab potray of feeling and hats off to NK...no doubt it was strupendiously mind bogling update...wish u write more...may god bless u

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annieK

@annieK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

Nicely wrapped up , thank you .

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Ananya

@Anarocksick

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Posted: 12 years ago

#127

Res.

Will read and comment soon :)

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BubblySanaya

@BubblySanaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#128

Wow!!!!
I just read all the parts together.
It was beautiful...
I just loved the way you wrote Arnav and Khushi's feelings.
I literally had tears in my eyes reading all the hurt that Khushi was going through.
And the end was simply awesome...
This is a very different genre of writing, and i loved it.

You must write more, and pm me if possible.

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BubblySanaya

@BubblySanaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#129

Oh and yeah... How cud i miss the NK part.
Im so glad that NK confessed his feelings for Khushi !!!
And he did an amazing job in putting some sense into Arnav's head, to not ignore his loving wife.

Keep up the good work... :)

Edited by Arshi1985 - 12 years ago