Three's a Crowd *Last Part P15* - Page 14

I read all 3 parts in one go amazing os
I love NK he's do sweet and understanding
Thank u for pm me

Hellee 🤗 ❤️ that was a beautoful job well done and standing ovation to u !! 😊

awww loved the update! :)

hey helee glad ur back with a story...

A perfect and amazing ending, loved the update.

You are so right Helee, there is no Arnav without Khushi and vice-versa. We all know "To err is human, to forgive divine". Beautiful finish to a wonderful TS, loved it. You are super duper awesome 🤗

Beautiful update...

Hii! Sorry for catching up with this one so late.

I just got done with reading the 1st chapter and ..I loved it, dammit! I had planned to read all three chapters and then comment. But the first chapter was so bloody brilliant that it deserved a comment of its own.

Really loved reading it. You wonderfully described Khushi's pain and angst. Sheetal track was a pain to watch through and that was because we all had placed our feet in Khushi's shoes. But behind all the bullshit they had shown in that track, somewhere I felt that they got all the feelings right. It was well portrayed.

And I loved that you took up that part and made it better. My heart broke for Khushi I read that she had planned so much for Arnav, and how she couldn't succeed in completing it just because she saw her husband with her.

The picture of the husband you've created is so real. I guess these things happen, no? Men often take their wives for granted thinking they already love them...so why bother with flowery stuff? But that doesn't mean they love their wives any less. But of course, the wife gets it all wrong. And it isn't her fault either. They also need to be reminded from time to time that they are being loved. But who'll teach these husbands that sweet nothings are that is needed? A compliment here and there, maybe a light conversation after work?

Nanhe ji has a story of his own? I always felt that they should have shown something like that in the show. Behind the facade of the family clown I knew there was a man with feelings buried somewhere inside him.

Last part of the chapter is my favorite 😉 Can you blame me? Now off to read the rest.

Chapter 2:

I loved the passion of the love making and I loved the passion with which they fought.

Words...words words... when will understand what words mean to women? Funny how his carelessly used words which probably should have gotten her more aroused only killed it for her and made her cry instead.

To be very honest... I hated Arnav in this chapter. Too much ego going on. But it was very real.

There are men like Arnav for whom ego mean a hell lot. Words are thrown carelessly and they hurt like daggers. He knew his words were going to hurt Khushi and YET he used them to hide is guilt. But it hurt him too. It was so obvious.

But he messed it big time.

Chapter 3 (a)

I'm quite speechless here. And wait... are my eyes watery? *runs to get a box of tissues*

This was very emotional. LIKE very. I have always loved NK, but after reading this... my respect for him increased. His act was so mature... I'm so proud oh him. Can't explain how brilliantly you wrote this chapter, H. Some of the things NK said were so intelligent and soo big for a man in love to do. Now it might sound funny... but I must say it... you've made NK such a nice human being.

To give up on ones love in different, to see your love married to your own cousin can be so hard. He saw their marriage crumbling, he had his chance, and yet he decided to be a bigger man and help his cousin. Seriously, gotta love NK.

I want to say more, but I'm afraid it'd end up sounding the same. So I'll stop here for this chapter.

This comment was obviously dedicated to NK <3