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Originally posted by: Arhi1o1

What a perfect finish to a lovely story dear!

I discovered your writing before I read anything else and I am so glad I did because you write beautifully! Thank you for the wonderful epilogue! :)

Originally posted by: undercoverhappy

it was short but so effortlessly beautiful to the point 👏

thank u 👏

Originally posted by: seeta_naips

such a sweet ending

Ambar is gussa wala like her dad
and Armaan is pagal like his mom

will miss this story

Originally posted by: avika_ShArMa

Shikha its high time you made an index for this story!!😆

Originally posted by: rulama

That was one of the lovely SS's I have come across and what a lovely pair!

They had seen life with its ups and downs together and that had strengthened their bond!

Loved it to bits!

Originally posted by: foesb

Can't believe it ended! One of the most sweetest stories I have ever read. Epilogue was awesome, even though they have grown older and their children have grown up still their love is the same. Amidst all the obstacles they have built a world of their own and made sure children are bought up in correct way. I hope everybody will be able to find their Arnav/ Khushi so they can have their happily ever after. It was truly a fantastic story written beautifully. I'm gonna read the entire story again when I'm eased of with my prolonging exams and work. Again it was a fantabulous story!

Originally posted by: shree10

Felt like kids grew up too soon and u ended it much sooner!! :(

But nice read.

Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp

I got bored with studying research by Otto Rank. Surfed the forum and thankfully found this.

I am telling you, some psychologists were loonies and Freud was sitting at the helm 🤔

RES!

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Yeh story padh ne ke liye meri fingers dukh gayi. You need an index. I used IronButterfly's (she had once recommended this SS to me but I couldnt read it then) My Posts to navigate to the chapters.

And why dont you have an index yet??? If I were you, that is the first thing I would have done to show the world how creative I can get with my titles. Girl you floored me with the titles for each chapter corresponding to the number of that chapter. That is AMAZINGLY BRILLIANT. Bas! 👏

Such an ArHilicious tale...

You gave an entire journey with this story. The first time Arnav Khushi met, to their nok jhoks, to steadily falling in love, to the feelings of jealousy and missing the other which comes free with being in love, support to each other in times of distress, a little running away... a little chasing, confession!!!, and then phase two which was a life after marriage.

They both are two different people, from two different backgrounds but they were so blinded in love (or should I say only love was in their sight) that nothing mattered to them. Not a simple house or a limited income, not a war zone or a lack of support from family (for KKG this is completely true, for ASR his sister was far away).

They were each others' only support and companions. Love, care, and affection was just oozing out of those updates.

The third phase to me was when they were expecting. Both Arnav and Khushi were good as spouses but with her pregnancy, he crossed all limits of being supportive, understanding and loveable. Bas! I want this Arnav. Double bas! He saw to her every need (even the ones which didnt exist), changed cities, changed his dreams, he did it all to accommodate his kids in his life... He nearly lost Khushi once to a bombing... no wonder he wanted to ensure complete safety for his family.

Khushi also rose in my esteem when she didnt let her father sully her husband's name and their offspring. She severed it all with her waste of a father to honor her husband 👏. It is easier for Arnav to forgive his father-in-law, but for Khushi... Her father is a hopeless case. Acc to me, it is better to be blinded with love than money.

I liked it that both worked to give their children the best, that both had equal share in bringing up their twins, that neither their passion for each other nor their nok jhoks subsided with time 😳

The final phase is when they see their grown up children doing something constructive with life. I am sure they are proud for bringing up such wonderful children ⭐️

This SS was a journey of two people which I enjoyed reading tremendously. Thanks for sharing it. Really loved it 😊

PS: Whenever you make an index please let me know. I want to 'like' all the chapters. So far, I have 'liked' only the first five chapters, the Prologue and the Epilogue...

Thank you sooo much! I'm really glad you liked it. And the index has been added too, so.. go ahead..😉

Originally posted by: LOLWAsAalu

AREY WAO KYA BAAT HAI!!!

After such long am reading your works?..fantastic 👍🏼

What am I to tell...Arnav is such a cutie !!! 😳 He is just like a kid who saw a new baby 😆

And Khushi...haha...the emotional killer 😉 Love her so much 😳

It's so perfect Arnav , Khushi , Armaan and Ambar 😃HAPPY FAMILY ALAS 😉

Wish Akash was here 😭

Loved it Shikhaji 😊 I always tell YOU ROCK!!!!

Originally posted by: LOLWAsAalu

Now what am I to tell on the Epilogue 😳

It's an emotional one 😭

ArShi old 'WOW' 😆 great Shikhaji

I am sure Ambar and Armaan will be the same as Arnav and Anjali ...the other way around I mean 😆

Lol...the Mom-Dad fights over their children's are always common on parents 😉

Loved it 😃 but unfortunately this s over 😭

All the way to the end...it was a fabulous SS

Come back with new ones in the future 😳