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A very beautiful story it is dear
I loved it 👏 👏
You are a great writer yaar...the best one 😊

Hats off to you such a wonderful story absolutely amazing

read it all in one go. very nice

Nice SS read it in one go

this is just superb yaar

too good

loved it

A beautiful story.

read it in one go...such a cute and adorable story...really beautifully written...loved it...

wow what a journey they had from there lil arguments to falling in love with each other to becoming parents to growing old together...
loved it.

Loved your story. So well written. Would have loved to read more and and more!

Wow..
What should I say yaar?
I am amazed..
I really like Blinded in Kargil. That was one of my favourite! Emotional, Romantic and touchy!
This was amazing..
Today I thought to check your Index! And see I got from treasure..
This was lovely amazing and going with flow...
Their relationship was so beautiful and their understanding...
Ah! It makes me wonder that if it can be possibli in Real Life!
Arshi..
Fought, Argued but then Love... Only love with little bit teasing...
There are many scenes I liked the most... They were beautiful. Let me make the list! :p Sorry if fonts are small okay! I am using mobile..
1. When Arnav called Khushi Mirchi!
2. Teej Scene... Very beautiful!
3. Khushi's way of telling Arnav her feelings.
4. When Khushi thought how will she face Khushav, that 5 months baby coz he heard Arnav's confession! I was like What the?! 🤣
5. Phere.. That part ... I can't describe how I felt but it is surely in the list! ;)
6. Whenever Arshi hugged... You describe their hug in such a nice way.. It always felt like scene is playing before my mind! :p
7. Index of story.. 6th sense, come forth, 11 minutes... Before opening epilogue, I knew Arshi will be budhe! :p Hahah...
8. The story behind Ambar and Dreams... :p I forgot boy's name... Sorry! I can't scroll up even.. *smiling sheepishly*
9. Whole story! Bas! Ho gaya...
Whats left nothing..
Take care..
Phir milenge kisi din when I will open ur index again.. ;)