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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey thanks for the index..

I liked this ss much..
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely story both arnav and khushi are awesome
👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
This was a great story of two individuals in love, their light-hearted moments against a tumultuous backdrop helping them fight the darkness. Living in a war zone is never easy and the scars often linger for years. Khushi's unstinting love and his willpower helped him fight his inner demons and work towards a bright future for themselves, their kids.
I also read your other ongoing story Shaapit - reminded me of Chitra Divakurani's book "Sister of my heart". But here Arnav is a sweetheart and hopefully Khushi realizes his true worth. I predict Shyam will change for the better and the cousins will find happiness in the long run.

I'm amazed at how you're writing multiple stories - even if updates are spaced out, just the breadth is staggering. Hats off to you! Here I am trying to finish one short story in a short span of time with little patience 😊


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Posted: 11 years ago
loved this ss... it was so nice and lovely...!!!
the Tom & Jerry fight between Arshi is of the famous one, we all know that, but the way you have presented it, was beautiful...
the situation you described at the beginning of the Kargil front and their struggles was something that was so true and realistic. each chapter was so meaningful and Arnav in this ss was drool-worthy. i liked Khushi's no nonsense attitude too.
the Kids were so adorable and the story behind their names were so so so nice. 👏
the dialogues are aptly thought out and worth reading.
loved it completely...!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SS88

Beautiful, Shikha. This was simply beautiful. All the best for your exams!

Thank you very much dear! I really need it... Especially for the last one... God! I HATE physics!!!🤢
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Auchi

Nice update & eagerly waiting for other updates too. I must say u r a very gud writer dear. Keep on writing. I love reading ur write ups. Thanks for the PM.

Aww! Thank you Auchi!😳 And you're welcome!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Arjuhisis

Oh that's a fantastic story
Read all the Chapters in one go and loved it immensely
Iam a new reader of ur works
Will check ur index for ur other creations
Pls keep me in ur pm list

Thank you very much!😛 The thing is, as I have said in the first post itself, I think, I don't PM anymore! I email my readers when I update. If you wish to be notified, send me your email address.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PhenoixTears

Fantastic ending to an amazing story... I just love this Dr. Arnav from bottom of my heart & each and every update of this story has increased my love for him, so sad that this ended but he will always stay in my heart 😳😳😳

You truly rocked the show with Chapter 11 Shikha... I think it was Khushi's father ill luck that he couldnt understand what kind of gem his son-in-law was. Loved the way Khushi stood for him and her family and inspite of the hurt caused by her father's words. The Shiv-Parvati story was a beautiful addition to a superb chapter and I cant stopped myself admiring the way you showed Arnav's fear while listening to it. You are an magician dear who weaves this magic with her words 👏👏👏 Chapter 12 gave us a happy family consist of these four equally amazing Raizadas. You made them emerged winners out of every hardship of life with their hardwork and super strong support for each other. Loved their silly fights and how Arnav cajoled Khushi for making mysore pak, he was surely a drama queen there, superb chapter again... Last not the least the last chapter of this beautiful saga, it cant be better than what you wrote. Absolutely brilliant chapter!! Dont know how to appreciate this story more but just like your A-Z series of Arnav-Khushi, I will surely remember this 1-12 series 😊 Thank you for writing this story dear 😊

Dii!!! You're back!Hayye, shukriya!Embarrassed
Indeed, it's his bad luck... Where do you even get guys like that? And Arnav is someone is just... perfect! And he belongs to Khushi. As a father, the oldie should have been proud! But he's a dim-wit, no one cares about him, eh?🤔 Hehe... Thank you...EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed Phir se... ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mklam

This was a great story of two individuals in love, their light-hearted moments against a tumultuous backdrop helping them fight the darkness. Living in a war zone is never easy and the scars often linger for years. Khushi's unstinting love and his willpower helped him fight his inner demons and work towards a bright future for themselves, their kids.

I also read your other ongoing story Shaapit - reminded me of Chitra Divakurani's book "Sister of my heart". But here Arnav is a sweetheart and hopefully Khushi realizes his true worth. I predict Shyam will change for the better and the cousins will find happiness in the long run.

I'm amazed at how you're writing multiple stories - even if updates are spaced out, just the breadth is staggering. Hats off to you! Here I am trying to finish one short story in a short span of time with little patience 😊
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Thank you!!!😃 I am very happy you loved the story. I too can only imagine how hard it can be, for now...
Yes, indeed, Shaapit's inspiration comes from Divakaruni's "Sister of my Heart", but as you saw, the characters are slightly different, especially Arnav's and the story is not going to end up the same way... although I cannot tell you what will happen!😆
😳 Hayye, shukriya again!😳

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