*Completed* Th#2 SS: Hold My Hand Ch. 4+NOTE pg. 1

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--MISHTEE--

@--MISHTEE--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Loved d update

tat was awesome

pls update soon

Thanx for pm 😊

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nazca

@nazca

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Beautiful mind
Hallucination
Oh no next episode of attack.
Absolutely brilliant

Me speechless

Sisters, take a bow, hats off, standing ovation. 👏
Congrats both for bringing such a brilliant work and bringing schizophrenics to light. Sure for some readers it will be eye opener about this mental condition.

Edited by avcmyd - 12 years ago

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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Very nicely done, my husband counsels patients with such issues and watched helplessly almost 10 years ago as his younger brother committed suicide, he was diagnosed a schizophrenic that no one from his own family wanted to help but was instead shunned from society more to do with what will people say or think...He very rarley reads anything I read but he too said you did a great job. it was sad that Anjali was more concerned with social stigma than helping her brother, everything needed to be kept hidden..

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vibha92

@vibha92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

it was unexpected vt brilliant...
superbly plotted ...
khushi didnt exist in real bt she does for arnav...
different n emotional concept...
u hv potryed everything so brilliantly... 👏
well in d end she came wid driver so i think she is real...
n i wl think she is khushi...bas...;-) 😉

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Farha Naz

@farha_ipkknd

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

WOWWW...a biiig blow for me...how did you come up with something like that ..????!!!! its amazing ...the most different ss I've ever read

the only thing that hurts me is arnav's condition ...no i'm not feeling pity but feeling bad cause dont know how long and how many times he'll fall for that illusion ...he's so helpless and lonely :(

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Wow!

Can't think of any thing else...

How talented are you...amazing!

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supriya

@Dreamy123

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

beautiful ending ...fely sad for Aranav...but u kept it so real without any filmy ending i liked that thank u so much for this little cute story 😃 keep writing...

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riafna

@riafna

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Edited pp 2

And congratulations on new thread

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bhadraprasad

@bhadraprasad

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#69

wow...what a twist

I was always in awe of the O Henry twist in the stories

But, for the first time I felt that awe for a writer of the present time

Madam, Tussi great ho

What a well planned story

Hats off to you

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sslmay11

@sslmay11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#70

Zehra, this one was unexpected and a very different one from all ur works so far...i loved it dear...please do come with more experiments...i love to read the way u write...keep doing. Thank u so much for ur update mails...