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Posted: 12 years ago

Woa..read in one go...must say tooo good...totally different concept..n fablsy written...loved it...

plzzz do pm me wen u update next...
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Posted: 12 years ago
ANOTHER WONDERFUL UPDATE, CHAPTER 2 IS JUST SUPERB AND AMAZING!! Ooh Khushi and Payal are talking boys and OMG Khushi's already in love and that someone is her online boyfriend, I agree love is truly blind. Gosh, NK y do you always have to come between Arnav and Khushi, lol don't you know they're mean to be. And Khushi, how can you even think about eloping with NK, when you met the hot and handsome Arnav?! Khushi, I can't wait till you start falling for Arnav, that's going to be one of the best moments ever!! 😃 😳 Hahaha, I love Akash, he's so funny, I can't believe he calls Payal fatty, and Payal is so lazy, thank god for Khushi, otherwise she wouldn't have woken up! Awww it's cute how Arnav couldn't stop admiring Khushi, he makes me blush! 😳 Awww I think Arnav is willing to do anything for his soon to be lady love, I just hope he doesn't find out about NK, because then he'll be heart broken! 😭 Lol now that Arnav knows Khushi's name, he can't stop teasing her, what a meany, and lol he loves it when Khushi gets mad, soo cute! 😳 Ooh soo Khushi is making chocolate cake, sounds soo yummy and delicious, I wanna try some! Loved the way Arnav greeted her and OMG, loved it even more when Khushi checked him out, that was soo cute! 😳 Lolll Arnav, will you stop with the teasing, now that you have chocolate all of your face and your vest, I hope you've learned your lesson lol!! 😆 Oh so Akash's birthday was approaching, that sounds so much fun, and lol Arnav really knows what Akash would like, hehe Arnav and his wild plans, lol but that was an epic surprise, and Im glad Akash loved it!! :) Wow, Arnav doesn't even have to try in school and he would still get the best grades, now that's what you call intelligent! LOL LOL LOL, 😆 loved his plans to cheer up the girls, and OMG thank god, he covered Alash with a blanket, before the girls saw him naked lol! Oh nooo, who would've dared to steal Arnav's happiness! This is just so tragic, all of his family died and now he has no one, it's ok Arnav, you have Akash, Payal, and Khushi, and they will be there to support you! Arnav, you can do this, we all believe in you!! :) Go Arnav! Now I wonder what will happen next!! AWESOME UPDATE!! :) EXCITED AND EAGER TO READ THE NEXT 8 CHAPTERS, AND THANKS A BUNCH FOR SENDING ME THE PMS!! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hai... Deepthi... I have just started reading... Brilliant... Proloque...
Going to read all the chapters...
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Posted: 12 years ago
WOW ANOTHER AWESOME UPDATE DEEPTHIYA! It seems like this story is full of so many twists and turns, can't wait to read more chapters! Awww I feel awful for Arnav😭, all of his relatives died and I can't believe his uncle kicked him out too, what a jerk!! 😡 Yes Arnav, it's time for you to be independent, I know you can do it, your friends, Khushi, me and Deepthiya will always be with you! 😃 Awww I loved the way Payal gave Arnav a check for 1001 dollars thats really thoughtful, caring, and sweet of her! Loved it even more when Arnav gave the check back to her and told her that he will take it once he designs a beautiful dress for her and her dress will be his first order! And awww their hug made me really emotional, Payal is a gem and Arnav is really lucky to have a friend like her, because she's a true friend! 😊 Akash, your a great and true friend too, loved how you gave your share of 30 k dollars! Oh no, Arnav has suffered a lot, but don't worry Arnav, no matter what happens, your friends will never ever leave you! So Khushi went to pick up NK, and he's finally here, but I feel like his timing is just not right. Khushi is getting closer to Arnav and hopefully soon the attachment will turn into love! Yayy, Khushi didn't like NK hugging her, thank god, and I hope you realize Khushi, that you only belong with Arnav! Oh noo, Khushi is going to show off NK to the group, I don't thinkArnav will take all this really well! Hahahaha, I loved Payal's remark, someone needs to talk Khushi out of dating NK! Oh Khushi, I really can't wait till reality kicks in! Aww I'm glad Khushi visited Arnav, but on the other hand Arnav is avoiding her cuz he believes that someone will snatch away Khushi from him too! Awww loved it when Khushi took Arnav's hand in her own and loved it even more when Arnav embraced Khushi in a tight bone-crushing hug! ❤️❤️❤️ NK why are you such a kabab mein hadi, when two people are hugging and especially if those two people are Arnav and Khushi, then thats a sign which tells you to stay out! Oh no Akash, why did you have to announce that NK is Khushi's boyfriend, now Arnav will just break into a million pieces! Omg, the rage on Arnav's face and his anger and the way he yelled at Khushi and told her that she cannot call him Arnie anymore, showed that he loves her to the core and can't live without her, oh Khushi I wish you knew about Arnav's feelings! 3 months passed and Arnav still ignored Khushi and Khushi still ignored Arnav, but yet they both care for each other! Khushi, when will you understand that Arnav loves you more than anything in this world! Too bad for NK, if Khushi calls you Arnav, that's good, at least that way she will realize who she loves! Aww love how Khushi sends dinner for Arna\v without his knowledge and I'm glad she cares for him sooo much! :) So Arnav has a visitor and it's Shashi Gupta, I'm glad he decided to help Arnav and took the sales, marketing, and advertising manager's job, I know he can handle it. Awww Shashi Gupta is awesome, and even though Arnav remianed expressionless when Shahsi Gupta answered "son" to Arnav's question, Arnav respects and loves him, I know forsure! AWESOME UPDATE CANT WAIT TO READ THE NEXT 8 CHAPTERS!!! :D
Edited by extremelicious - 12 years ago
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LOVE HOW THE STORY IS COMING ALONG, ITS GETIING BETTER AND BETTER EACH DAY, LOVE READING IT SOOO MUCH MUCH MUCH!!! 😃 So Shashi and Arnav are making some excellent progress in thier business, I like this and best of all their bond is growing stronger day by day! Omg Shashi uncle saw Khushi, this is just not good! I knew it, this would not be good, he got upset and now he wants Khushi to come with him and worst of all Khushi has something to do with Arnav's relatives dying and leaving him to be an orphan, but how? OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG, NOOO, Khushi is going to India for good, this not good, she'll be so faraway from Arnav, I don't want that. 😭😲 Shashi Gupta, please tell Arnav everything before a huge misunderstanding creates, which would be awful! Of course still loves her, it just hurts him that Khushi belongs to someone else, but one day Khushi will be all yours Arnav, I just know it!! ❤️ So Shashi uncle and Khushi have returned to Mumbai, and Shashi is still angry with Khushi. I agree with Garima, it was destiny that was responsible for it, not Khushi and Shashi seriously needs to understand that cuz Khushi does everything with good intentions and just to make others happy! Khushi, stop missing NK, you're only meant to be with Arnav! I still can't believe Khushi has something to do with Arnav's relatives death. 😲Oh I hope Khushi finds out the truth before it's too late! Oh so what if Shashi is incharge of KG Designs, the important thing is Arnav got the contract and I loved how he fulfilled his promise of Payal being his first client and calling her first to give her the great news! :) Wow, Arnav's and Shashi's partnership is working excellently, but I think Shashi needs to take it easy, we don't want any health issues taking place. I'm glad Shashi took Khushi's help, and I'm glad Khushi decided to help her father, oh I really hope all these misunderstandings are cleared up soon! EXCITED TO READ THE MAHA UPDATE AND THE REST OF THE 7 CHAPTERS, THANKS AGAIN FOR THE PMS, YOU'RE AWESOME!!! :D

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OOH OMG OMG OMG, EXCITED TO READ THE MAHA UPDATE, I KNOW THIS IS JUST GOING TO BE EPIC CUZ ARNAV AND KHUSHI ARE FINALLY MEETING AFTER 8 YEARS! I know that "He" is Arnav and he has made some really great progress and he has gained all that he lost! Aww all those memories and the time that he spent with his family made me a bit emotional, I hope things get better soon! WOW WOW WOW Arnav has finally reached is goals 😃, but at athe same time, he's become so bitter, changed so negatively, and now he thinks that money can buy everything and that money is the most important thing there is. 😭 I hope his thinking changes soon and awww I'm glad that Shashi uncle called Arnav to wish him a happy birthday, that was really thoughtful of him! 😊 Oh thats cute, Arnav and Khushi were born the same day! :D Omg NK, why are you always at the wrong places and at the wrong times, and Khushi whats wrong with you, how could you make plans of marrying NK when Arnav still loves you?😲 Thank god Khushi's dad did not approve and Khushi's already engaged, I hope she's already engaged to Arnav, and NK she will never ever come back to you, cuz you're a jerk!! 😡 Shashi uncle, it's ok, this is all for the best, cuz Khushi will learn in the long-term affects and sooner or later that it is only Arnav who matters, and no one else! Well that was a lot to take in, the truth is finally out and now it all makes sense, but I still don't undertsand how Khushi is responsible for the death of Arnav's family.

Ooh Part 2, maybe now the love birds will finally meet, can't wait for it!!😃 I wonder how they will react! So the letter that Arnav's dad wrote and how Khushi's kundali had something wrong in it, maybe that's why Arnav's family died, but I can't wait to find out fully! :)))) So Aman is on the lookout for an address, I hope they get the information soon! Shashi unlce commercialized, I wonder what will Arnav discuss with him on the phone?! Arnav is coming to see Khushi, woohoo, and Khushi for once, think about Arnav, cuz there was no way he will cancel the marriage with you, because he loves you SO SO SO MUCH!!! ❤️ I miss the old Arnav, the one who didn't care about money and the one who was not as bitter! The only reason that Arnav is going to see Khushi is so that he can compare that Khushi ti his Khushi, thats a shame, well to bad for you Arnav, because that and your Khushi are the same person! So Arnav finally arrived and I'm glad Shashi told him to meet Khushi, and Arnav's behavior is not surprising to me, because Arnav doesn't like wasting a second, after all he's a business man. 😉 AWWW Arnav's already falling in love with Khushi, he's totally checking her out, that is just sooo cute!! 🤗😳 Yayyy, Khushi finally saw Arnav, now I wanna see his reaction! So Khushi was checking out Arnav, well why wouldn't she, he's just sooo goodlooking and so handsome! Even my eyes turn into hearts when I see him 😆! I'm glad that Arnav finally admitted that he didn't know Khushi's real name, thankfully one confusion is over! OMG Arnav is boiling with anger and rage, and there is no way that he can tolerate Khushi's rejection for a second time, but if thats the case then why doesn't he just tell her how he feels! Khushi, I'm sorry, but Arnav is right, you will get engaged and married to him under every cost! The last question Khushi asked made me cry 😭, Arnav I hope you change for the better soon! AWESOME MAHA UPDATE, EXCITED TO READ THE NEXT 6 CHAPTERS!! :D
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YAYYY IM FINALLY ON CHAPTER 6, I GUESS IM HALF WAY THERE! EXCITED TO READ THIS CHAPTER! I REALLY WONDER WHAT WILL HAPPEN NOW?! CAN'T WAIT TO FIND OUT!! 😃 Omg Khushi, what do you see in NK, he's not worth it at all, he's jerk! 😡 Wow, he proved he's a greedy scumbag who just cares about Khushi's money and if it was up to him, he would have Khushi dead so he can take all her wealth! Look at the boy's nerve, how dare say all this bullshit, and Khushi thank god reality kicked at the right time and you finally realized that NK is not the guy for you, besides he will never be, because you only belong with Arnav! Khushi, he's not a bloody Raizada, dont you dare say anything like that about my Arnav! I just want him to go die in a hole! 😡 Khushi, I understand love is blind, but love isn't stupid, and HOW CAN YOU EVEN THINK THAT NK's IDEA IS RIGHT?! HAVE YOU LOST YOUR MIND?! YES, YOU HAVE!! 😲 Wow, Khushi and Arnav are so like and Khushi Arnav is not the only one whose arrogant, you're really arrogant and stubborn as well, so shouldn't even be talking! Your conditions are absurd and thank god Arnav didnt agree to all of them! Ooh you go Arnav, please investigate and get on NK's case, cuz that boy doesn't have good intentions at all, and Arnav you're not marrying just because of the promise your dad made, you're also marrying Khushi cuz you love her! Ooh that conversation on the phone was painful, but I'm glad that Arnav is now aware of Khushi's insecurites and feelings and I know he will make his best effort so that everything works out well in the end! AWESOME UPDATE!! EXCITED YO READ THE NEXT 6 CHAPTERS AND MORE!! 😃
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I'M FINALLY ON CHAPTER 7, YESSS!! LOVING THE UPDATES MORE AND MORE, CAN'T WAIT TILL I READ CHAPTER 12, WOOHOO!! :D Wow, at first I thought that Arnav's interview was in Khushi's dream, but I'm glad it was reality. Lol Khushi's expressions and her inside talk are so funny lol! Haha dont worry Khushi, your marriage will be real in no time! 😆 Lol I love how she was eager to watch Arnav's interview and loved it even more when she started connecting the wires! Oh too bad for her though, she didn't get to see all of it, Khushi should get DVR, so she could have recorded it and watched it later! 😉 I loved Arnav's analysis of Khushi, that was cute! :) Awww loved the phone conversation between Arnav, Payal, and Akash, that was so cute, and Payal stop getting so curious, you will find out everything in just a matter of time! 😊 Payal, I love you, cuz you hate NK too! Yayyy, Akash and Payal are getting married, that is just so cute, can't wait till the same happens for Arnav and Khushi! 😳 Awww Arnav's and Khushi's conversation was just so cute until Khushi mentioned NK, at least play along Khushi, Arnav wasn;t even being, and YOU ARE GOING SHOPPING WITH ARNAV NO MATTER WHAT, AM I CLEAR? YES I AM!!! And stop hanging up the phone on Arnav, Khushi, he doesn;t do that to you! Oh poor Kaka, but I'm glad Arnav apologized!! Khushi, GET A GRIP, how dare you make Arnav Singh Raizada wait outside your for 30 minutes, don't you know how he is, well I found it kinds of funny 😆, but never do it again! Awww loved how Arnav dragged her in the car, opened the door for, made her angry, and made her put her hair down, super cute! 😳 Ooh they are gue a lot, another thing thats the same between them! Ooh those were some harsh words they both said to one another, and Arnav you are the one who provoked Khushi to say all this! Arnav, you do have a heart, but you need to share your feelings, pain, and all your inner turmoil with the people who love you and care about you!! AMAZING UPDATE!! 5 MORE CHAPTERS TO GO, YEEE!! :D
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WOOHOO, FINALLY AT CHAPTER 8, AND THE STORY IS GETTING JUST WAY TOO INTENSE, AND I'M LOVING IT SO SO SO MUCH!!! 😃 So did I mention, I hate NK, because I really really really hate NK😡! Why does that jerk always call Khushi at the wrong time and who the hell is he to tell Khushi where she should, where she should not go, and who she should go with, what a jerk, he should mind his own business and stop butting in other people's lives!! I loved the way Arnav gave NK a piece of his mind and loved it too when Khushi spoke back to NK when NK questioned her about the media. NK, FYI, Khushi does not belong to you, so leave her alone, and Khushi, Arnav did the right thing by throwing your phone out the window! Omg, Khushi was about to tell Arnav the reality, if she did, I wonder how he would have reacted, and I can't believe she told him that she regrets sending him emails, but I wanna know y! Khushi left her bag in the car and Arnav came back to her house to return it! I loved how he had the sudden urge to see Khushi, true love! ❤️ Khushi when will your love start? Ooh he untentionally hurt her and he regrets it, and Khushi I understand Arnav hurt you, but take your rudeness to NK, he deserves it more, Arnav is a good-hearted person, unlike that jerk NK! 😡 Haha Arnav had some really weird password, Sexypanties, and with an uppercase S 😆, I want the other Arnav back!! Haha Akash, thanks for helping him find the passowrd, wow that was fast, I can't believe Arnav already changed the password! Omg Khushi's email was really painful, and she kept sending those emails to you cuz she cares for you Arnav! :) LOVELY UPDATE! EXCITED TO READ THE NEXT 4 CHAPTER AND MORE!! :D

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