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Posted: 12 years ago
Interesting!
So she puts up a query which when answered he gets the answer to his query.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Update
Payal inspite of knowing didn't say any thing to Khushi... That was good...
Thank God there was nothing about NK in this update... I kinda started hating him...
Arnav started being naughty and now enjoying teasing her, but he gets pissed off soon.. after all he built this arrogance in him in last 8 years...
Both are denying to answer each others questions and Khushi doesn't even want to be social with him always ready like a bull.. he he
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Fabulous update & thanks for the PM 😊


Khushi trying to let out her pain but then not explaining things further when she learnt that Arnav hadn't given a clue of their marriage to Payal & mentally thanking him was well written

Oh, my heart couldn't stop crying today after reading Arnav's dialogues ...……. how much of liveliness was stolen from him by fate ...……. if fate hadn't played its games he would have lived his life happily ...…. his dialogues, his thoughts, the tinge of playful attitude in them were well portrayed 👏 ...…… how much of joy he must of got on knowing that she sent him unbelievably73 e-mails in 3 years that shadowed in his conversations today

Was shocked to see the ASR say those dialogues teasing Khushi that too in front of her parents ...……. Loved the part where he asks Garima if Khushi was her real daughter, at which Shashi remained quiet to let Arshi carry on but Garima innocently replying to Arnav …... 😆 😆 😆

Khushi wondering in awe of how Arnav chose the ring of her liking when she hadn't even made a small gesture to let anybody know her liking towards that piece was a wonderful scene & then the little fight, struggle & argument over Arnav putting the ring on Khushi's finger & Khushi disturbed over the fact that she was scared of being with Arnav as she could sense herself losing herself to him at a slow pace was awesomely written 👍🏼

The scene at the car where Arnav questions Khushi about the 73 e-mails, his anger surging up when he didn't get a reply from her but melting when he saw her tears & Khushi in turn throwing her question regarding the rude manner of shutting her abruptly away from his life that day on the college was fantastic ...……… waiting to know how things turn up between Arnav & Khushi

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey...


Awesome update...

Even i really want to know why she sent 73 mails.??? It just can't be friendship????

Thnx for the PM and do continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update waiting for maha update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lobe you story. I like the play of characters. Please keep me posted with udates
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Posted: 12 years ago
Everybody is being insensitive to Kushi. And I can't believe she forgave and is behaving normally with her dad and mom who took away her life literally away, her dreams away. Yes it is her parents, but their reasons were stupid and what Kushi lost was precious!
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow!!! just read all the chapters...and loved this FF verrryyy muuchhh...plz pm me when u update...

continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Phew!! Read all the chaps in one go. This FF is too awesome Di. You are writing beautifully. I had read ur FF BTS as a non IF member but after joining IF lost the link. But you know Fate, I see u in Pooja's scrap then got ur FF. Its amazing more than BTS :p Arnav is in pain, so much pain. Khushi is doing wrong everything unintentionaly. Loved the FF. See u in nxt chap,
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Posted: 12 years ago
Arnav tongue tied !!
Rightly counter questioned by Khushi.
I wish dey sort out their differences n den get engaged.

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