Virman SS: FATE OR SOMETHING LIKE IT New pg 31 - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Diii Wat is wrong with u??????????Y u made this do perfect that I can't stop myself from falling in love again n adoring te good boy!!! Trying to derive me from my evil bad boy fever? Well u r 50% accomplished! It' was so beautiful n magical that I wanna kiss Him now rofl.. It's like Wat to say.. Speechless pure perfect profession!!

Typically autors do twist n turns make the readers wait for a good time to finally do the confession! BUT u r one of the unique kind that drives me nuts! I loveee the way u write.. It's straight forward.. Simply elegant n up to the mark... Being an impatient girl it makes me sooo damn mad when I had to wait n wait untill I get my stuff!!! But I think u r te only one who don't make me wait at all.. N I will always love u for that...

This story is practical n tooo good! I wish life was that simple like this story...
Not to mention I am adoring the friends like crazily specially Ria n Karan both r perfect example of a best friend. Wise advise n making him move on correct time.. Bang on!!!!!!!

Wat can I say about my boy.. He is special as u know :p I love the outraged avatar.. Don't touch my girl ha... Protective ;)
My heart melted at the dialog "can I kiss u?" u know whatever story I have read boys don't ask for permission but just go for it... N I always miss the permission part... N u fulfilled it today! Wohooo...

Manvi... Usually I don't pay attention to the female character.. N I don't care Wat goes with her cuz I love my boy more ahem.. Call me biased :)
But I can't stop adoring her... I was sooo happy when he confessed her love.. Girls sud be like that no? It's like GO FOR IT... Don't wait hahah...

N my good boy controlled him self from losing control... Ahem batamiz dill was saying man... But my good heart melted again... NOW u said u got more so I won't complain cuz u will give me my desire part I know :p muaaah! Extra love for u haha :*
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
Nush di the update was just mindblowinggg... and fabulous 😃 👏
loved it to the core ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
virman danced on Tum Hi Ho ❤️ eekhs!!! 😃
Manvi bursted out on him and said all those feelings of her heart and she was hurt too with his behaviour..
but then Ria made virat understand that he loves her very much 😊
and he went to her hostel to say that he loves her ❤️
and they kissed 😳
and they talked till late night and slept in eachother's arms hayee!! 😊 ❤️
virat came to the hostel by climbing the tree 😆
update asap di 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
lol nush di my comment on part 4 was still pending and u updated :-D well i loved both the updates to the core
firstly they are light and a treat to read...now i could get why manvi's dad was worried of virat being in the same uni with manvi and asked her to maintain her distance loved the thing that you didnt make manvi give up on her love and stuff because its obvious for it to change into love actually i think that the comfort level manvi and virat shared from the day they met was never that weak to break their friendship just because of virat's insecurity of being like his father...really liked that virat easily told manvi what he felt...this clearly shows the level of trust he has in manvi...the confession was in two parts but loved both of them...❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Eeeks virman confessed their love i juz can't stop smiling :DDD firstly the virman dance on tum hi ho~~~ hayye ❤️ n the jealous n possessive virat 😉 he juz can't see her with other guy 😛 loved the way he react seeing manvi dancing with Nikhil !!!! manvi outburst was mind blowing ~~~ she juz confessed it :DDD awwn ria u r such a sweet heart she make virat understand his love for manvi ⭐️⭐️ n here come our hero virat confession awwn kya scene tha virman kissed ❤️😳 so virat is scared coz of his dad !!! he juz don't want to hurt manvi this is soo nice !!! i juz loved the way manvi trust virat ❤️ the whole update was superb Nush di👍🏼 very well written ⭐️⭐️ such a adorable update !!! i really loved it ❤️ looking forward for next part !!! will be eagerly waiting :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
nice update both are confess there feeling each other
what happen when her father get to know about them
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMGGG Can this update get any better ...it had everything ...Viraat confessed ..OMG...yes yes Yes...Viraat confessed ...It happened ...and Their talks were so logical and real yet again. Maanvi's outburst ..Viraat's realization , Ria ..everything just beyond perfection ...So Inder was a cheater ...No it makes sense ...and that is why the Chaudhary dont like him may be. I want to write a long essay on this update but falling short of word I dont know why ...Blame it on my mood ...but ...I m ..totally ...under daze of this update

Brilliant Update ..It made my Day
Love
Sumana
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Posted: 12 years ago
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di its beautiful!!! i dont have words to say the beauty
really i again & again see an awesome manvi.. the way she's out & the way she's in is so cute.. finally she confessed,, loved her confidence & annoyance..
virat is really a perfect guy!! i mean all his hesitation was just becoz of his dad?? so manvi's dad's fear & keeping away from vaderas must be something to vt virat's dad's behaviour.. according to me, manvi's dad vl fear to handover his daughter's hands to virat, guess so..
besides, i love the quick realisation of virat dat she's falling for her & the quick confession of manvi as she cant hide it, fake it anymore,, its sooo real, loved it!!
and yeah, he asking permission before the kiss was awesome!! & backing off to not loose cntrol, showed his genuine nature.. she trusting him alot showed d depth of her bond vt him & trust, confidence, faith & love in him... simply beautiful
and friends must be like karan & ria,, perfect advice & perfect timing to let virat understand dat he too loves her,, lovely!!
continue the great job!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
awesome.. love this sweet romantic update... loved ittt
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow what a lovely story...
i really enjoyed to read this story...
plzzz plzzz update it quick...
and pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nush update was fab.. m speechless right now.. loved it.. ❤️ Dey confessed at last.. nd Inder cheated on his wife dats d reason Mr. Chaudhary was worried.. long way hun.. Continue soon.. Waiting.. ❤️

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