Virman SS: FATE OR SOMETHING LIKE IT New pg 31 - Page 3

Wow dis is lovely...cant wait for VirMan lovestory to unfold... thanks so much...pls pm me whenever you update next..

love the flashback ... virman first meeting was cute ...
waiting for nxt part ..

Nush Diii..!!

i read both the parts awesome continue soon

This one sounds really interesting with all those teenage love excitments nervousness confusions and all ...
and no doubt yu write really welll write in a flow feels awesome reading it 👏 👏 😃
so manvi has a secret crush on virat whum she just spend alittle time on a weekend trip thts really interesting ...plus virat is showing special efforts from his sidei mean thts what every gal wants 😃
manvi's bonding with her parents is soo adorable love it 😃
and the flashback parts were really good
i feel tht virat will be in the same college its just a guess hope its a rite one 😉
update next one sooon really excited for reading the next one 😊

Both updates are awesome...

waiting for next update

pls update soon n pm me

Originally posted by: Captain_Pari

Nush Diii..!!

This was amazing! :P Im going to brag that i've read the first part longgg ago 😉 and its just as great today as it was then 😛 coming to part 2..

I loved Manvi and her fear to go away to uni..its rare thing to see these days with all teens wanting to run away to uni at first chance 😆, but im excited to see what happens next...would love to hear more on the weekend trip 😉 oh nd i love Manvi's bond with her parents its sooo cutee nd loving! im now thinking that Virat also goes to X-uni doesnt he? 😉 hope he does 😛!!

update soon..!! looking forward to whats next!

-Luv Pari

Central attraction of ur story is it seems like real life.. Cuz there is manyyy girls who does this kind of crazy acts called the "Stalk profile" blame the social networking haha..

Part one was good.. Sweet n simple.. Good that u made manvi a good student instead of a pinhead :p love the parents they seem to be understandingvn caring...
Now my boy comes in the roll. Already trying to flirt huh? "I still remember you cheating on the cards" aha good memoriZation ha.. U know that dialog remin me of the scene from the beginning of EHM the card playing? Remember... ?

Now it will be awesome to know what actually happened 3 years ago and how it will move forward in future!!!

U know di... I'm relating myself with this manvi .. Cuz as u know we r so despo to stalk the sexy boy :p haha n I can imagine her situation when she saw the Friend req n the MSG it's like kushal /tacker seeing my msges *day dream*... Tch tch.. I'm babling too much... Lol kushal-Tacker fever.. Now runs to read part 2! Eeekss love u extra for already posting part 2!

Hey...I really like the beginning. Have you written anything before? Loved the real life situation with facebook and random obsessions, we all have those once in a while. Really excited to read more, please continue. I have a feeling that I am going to get attached to this story..its very original!

Y UR CHAPTERS R SO SHORT DI????

First meeting n she already checked him out. Ahem Ahem...
Reserved girl became free.. Magic of my boy...
For the iPod sharing I like that part.. Nice trick to get close to girls but again u haven't describe virat yet... But tagr wink was ummm... Bad boy!!!

NOW the catch comes! She is going Delhi uni n he lives in delhiii' so assuming they will be in same college... My 20 yr sexy boy!! Hope u make him a good one ^____^ now gonna read ur teaser :p