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verisimilitude

@verisimilitude

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Perfect.. this is very good.. I liked how u described Arnav's family. Akash and Payal open in relationship ? but how doesnt Khushi know that Arnav is Akash's bro?

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cherrybloom1

@cherrybloom1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: harhem
Perfect.. this is very good.. I liked how u described Arnav's family. Akash and Payal open in relationship ? but how doesnt Khushi know that Arnav is Akash's bro?

well thats because khushi isnt close to Akash's family but arnav and khushi would get to know about it in the next update which would just help her loosen up to him...ive already got that planned out!😊

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..ashiya..

@..ashiya..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Nice update.
Loved it.
Thanks for the pm! :)

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Trinity11

@Trinity11

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Amazing start!! Beautiful story line...

So proud of you :')

You should be more descriptive!

improve your vocab :P

Other than that.. just purely amazing

waiting for the next update 😛

Edited by Trinity11 - 12 years ago

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cherrybloom1

@cherrybloom1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Trinity11
Amazing start!! Beautiful story line...
So proud of you :')
You should be more descriptive!
improve your vocab :P
Other than that.. just purely amazing
waiting for the next update 😛

thank you so much aki!!!! im sure your going to make me read the dictionary from now on...do one thing...carry it to school for me!!😛

Edited by cherrybloom1 - 12 years ago

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crizal

@crizal

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

unressed pg 2 ..off to read next chapter 😛

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crizal

@crizal

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

when u said no Arshi I was like Damn it! ! 🤪
well Arnav playing PSP was sight to see 😆
both open abt relationship den why Arshi nt knowing each other 🤔
looking forward to their office meet 😛

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deepa

@deeswarna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

loved the family intro and the part i like best that shyam appears to be a gentleman who genuinely cares for his wife and the family!

so payal and akash are together and everyone seems to know about them! does arnav know that khushi is payal's little sister? or is it just a coincidence that she landed herself a job in AR!

fabulous update and super eagerly for them to meet again and to see how love will make its way to their hearts if it has not already!

n thx loads for the pm

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cherrybloom1

@cherrybloom1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: deeswarna
loved the family intro and the part i like best that shyam appears to be a gentleman who genuinely cares for his wife and the family!

so payal and akash are together and everyone seems to know about them! does arnav know that khushi is payal's little sister? or is it just a coincidence that she landed herself a job in AR!

fabulous update and super eagerly for them to meet again and to see how love will make its way to their hearts if it has not already!

n thx loads for the pm

well since alot of you have questioned me about how arnav and khushi dont seem to know each other even though both the families know about their relationship, I will be answering that question of yours in the next chapter which is ready to be updated, though im not sure if I should update now or wait till tomorrow morning.😊

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PhoenixTears

@PhoenixTears

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#50

That was one lovely family introduction. So Akash-Payal are in relationship and every one knows about it but Khushi doesnt know that Arnav is Akash's brother.. thats interesting. And Arnav playing PSP leaving his bussiness-mode aside was a treat to read, awesome! Eagerly waiting to read next one and to know how they gonna behave with each other. Awesome update, thanks for the PM 😊