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Posted: 12 years ago

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FOREVER AND BEYOND

Author's note:

Hi. I have been into writing different things for some time now but this is the first time that I am sharing it. I don't know what the future of this story will be. I don't know how long this story will last but I want to try my hand on writing something. So I present to you my first story: Forever and Beyond. Please give me extremely frank comments on whatever you think about my story. And if you generally like my story then please hit the like button. I will try to update as soon as I can depending on my study pressure and daily schedule.

Thank You!

Prologue:

AR Design

It was a bright sunny morning
in Delhi. The AR office was all chaotic , after all the great Arnav Singh
Raizada also known as the Prim and proper guy wanted everything to be perfect.
No girl could be seen as they were all getting ready with their final touch ups
to impress the most eligible bachelor in town.

Gupta House

Here on the other hand we see
our very own 23year old innocent and naive Khushi Gupta getting ready for her interview
for the post of the PA of the CEO of AR Designs.

"jiji I'm leaving. Wish me
Luck. I really need this job or its time to say goodbye to Delhi and go back to
Lucknow." She said running out of the door and slipping on every non-slippery
place.

"Oh god Khushi could you
please stop getting so scared and I'm sure you will get the job. Best of Luck."
came the quick reply from her sister,Payal Gupta.

AR Designs

The 26year old self-made rude
and arrogant man, the Arnav Singh Raizada strode into his office premises. He knew how his mere presence scared his employees but then again that's the way he was. That's what he liked. He wanted everything to happen according to him.
His manager, Aman Mathur, ran to him to tell him his daily schedule.

"Sir, you have an interview for your new PA at 10 followed by a meeting with Mr. Khuranna at 1."

"Whats the name of the girl coming for the interview?" questioned Arnav

"Sir, Miss Khushi Gupta" came the quick reply from Aman

"Alright send her in when she comes"

Khushi entered AR and went to the reception. She was asked to go up for her interview. She reached the top of the stairs and took a deep breadth before knocking on the door.

"Excuse me sir, may I come in please?" she asked looking at the man sitting on the chair facing his back on her.

"Yes Miss Gupta please come in." He said turning around.

The sight that he was shown early that morning amazed him. A girl in her early twenties wearing skin tight blue jeans with a white top and minimal makeup on was standing on his office door step. She looked a little nervous but was trying her best to but her brave face on. She looked like an angel fallen from heaven. He looked her from toe to head and finally looked into her eyes, the doe-shaped hazel eyes which were still asking him for permission to come in. A soft voice from the angel broke his trance and made him come back to earth.

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verisimilitude

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Posted: 12 years ago

Annu...

Fabulous.. finally you decided to post it.. 👏

The intro was awesome.. I feel there could be a bit more description. Rest I liked it.. Looking forward for the next.. UPDATE SOON.. 😆 (dhamki)

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: harhem
Annu...

Fabulous.. finally you decided to post it.. 👏

The intro was awesome.. I feel there could be a bit more description. Rest I liked it.. Looking forward for the next.. UPDATE SOON.. 😆 (dhamki)

aww thank you so much harshi. Im going to keep that in mind for my furture updates...Im not very good with descriptions so its going to be a challange for me...i hope i suceed...😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Hi should I continue the story because I recieved 109 views with just 1 comment? It really did hurt to see so many views with only 1 comment. So if there is no interest then I would not continue with the story.

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Author's Note:

Hi I would be very honest, I had posted the prologue a good few hours back and recieved around 150 views but only 1 comment and I am extremely disappointed with myself for that. I have been writing for a while but never shown it to anyone and for the first time when I actually showed it to all of you I recieved no kind of comments, weather they are good or bad. I had asked you to tell me whatever you think of it, even if you would have said that the concept of my story is horrible I would have accepted that but then I recieved nothing. So here I have come with chapter 1 and if I don't recieve any kind of feedback from you I would stop writing here itself.

Im sorry for being unexceptionally rude, but I an extremely hurt with no feedbacks from all of you.

Chapter 1

"uh sir? Could I please come in?" she asked again, trying to catch his attention

"Oh yes please come in Ms. Gupta." He replied curtly coming back to earth.

"So Ms. Gupta I have been through your resume and I am pretty impressed, but why do you want the job of my PA when you have a degree in designing?" he continued.

"Sir I was actually looking for a designing job but there were no seats available here and the next best option I could think of was the job of a PA as I really need this job or I would have to leave Delhi and go back to my home which I don't want to do. I have come here with some dreams and I don't want to loose them without even beginning." She replied

"Okay then this job is yours from today. Congratulations and welcome to AR. You could join from tomorrow and I will tell Aman to brief you about your work." Said Arnav

"Thank you so much sir" she said.

She extended her hand for a handshake and when he took her hand they both felt like a sudden electricity passed through their bodies. They didn't know what happened suddenly as they were looking deep into each others eyes asking the same question: what was that? They broke out of their trance when they heard a knock on the door. She bid goodbye to Arnav and turned around to leave.

When Arnav saw her leaving he suddenly felt empty. He couldn't place what was happening to him. He felt like a part of him was going away. Well it was no better for Khushi. She didn't want to go, it was as if something was stopping her from leaving him. Her heart was beating fast as if it would burst if she took one more step forward. She heard Aman talking to Arnav and that broke her thoughts and she slowly left the office only to come back the next day.

She reached home and started yelling, calling her sister. Payal came out from the kitchen only to be engulfed in a bear hug by her.

"Jiji guess what. I got the job. Now we wont have to go back to Lucknow. We can stay here and live our lives just like we always wanted. You remember how much Amma had wanted to stop us from coming here. I'm so glad now we can stay here, and you can also meet your dream boy everyday" said khushi smiling and winking at her sister.

"Yes I'm so glad we don't have to go back now. I can meet Akash now and then when the time is right I can get married to him as well." She replied back dreamily.

Khushi went back to her room and sat on the bed to think about the previous few hours. She remembered how Arnav was checking her out when she was standing on his office door step, well she was doing the same, only to go unnoticed by him. She remembered how intensly charming he looked. His gelled up hair from which a few strands were coming on to his forhead, oh how much she had wanted to go and run her hand through them, his chocolate brown eyes which were continuously speaking to her, she was sure she could drown in them for hours, his perfectly toned body and the arrogant avatar that he would carry with him. I cant wait to go back to work tomorrow and meet him. She sighed dreamily. She heard her sister calling her and left her room to go help her sister make dinner for them.

It was late evening by the time Arnav could leave office after finishing all his work. He couldn't stop thinking about Khushi all day. He could hardly concentrate on work leading for him to finish a 3 hour work in 7 hours. If asked what he had done during the day he would not know what to say. To him Khushi was the epitome of beauty. Her hair falling on her shoulders, he wanted to run his hand through her silky hair, her extremely slim waist, Why would she want to be a PA or a designer, she was perfect to be a model. He thought. Her doe shaped hazel eyes were constantly talking to him. He could have drowned in them for hours if given a chance. For the first time he couldn't wait to come to office the next day to meet Khushi, his angel. He wanted to make her his in every sense. He was going to make sure that he would eventually make her his, make her fall in love with him, slowly. He had has his share of girls but he was sure she was not the type of girl to played around with, but he was also sure that he would protect her with everything he had. With that he sat in his SUV and drove home.

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Nisha

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Posted: 12 years ago

nice start...

arnie fallen on seeing khushi...first sight love

i didnt get that akhi matter...khushi meeting akhi or payal meeting akhi...

waiting for upcoming parts...

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verisimilitude

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Posted: 12 years ago

Dont get so depressed Ann..

Part 1 was good.. Love at first sight ?Now She got a job in his office.. Easy for Payal Akash to meet.. Hope this love story doesnt have any speed breakers..

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cherrybloom1

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: harhem
Dont get so depressed Ann..

Part 1 was good.. Love at first sight ?Now She got a job in his office.. Easy for Payal Akash to meet.. Hope this love story doesnt have any speed breakers..

i dot knw whats happening...i knw i shudnt react this way so soon..i mean ive just begun the story today and i shudnt be this disappointed but looking at the amount of views the story is getting and the amount of comments i get...i just feel really hurt...oh and i hope that i havent disappointed you with the details this time...😃

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stories.1408

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Posted: 12 years ago

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read both d updates just nw.loved d story esp their reaction towards each other nd longing to meet.wanna know more about guptas esp their background.y were they against their daughters delhi stay...plz continue soon

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