Forever and Beyond #1 Link to #2 on pg1 - Page 7

chapter 3 nice one...now we got it ...

let see how they progress their relationship...the conversation is really good both flirting with each other😆😆
...thanks for the pm...

its awesome love at first sight

nice update dear

woww...nice...

Thank you for the long update 🤗
That's so awesome...
Loved the way family reacted after knowing khushi as arnav's PA...
So finally, they came to know that they have a relation...
Arnav was admiring her...
Good that they started from friendship...
No fights...!!!
Both are having feelings so strongly...
Favourite scene arnav saving khushi...
So now they are having lunch together...
Expecting some fun filled lovely update... 👏

NOTE:

Hey,

Harem sent me this link. I have just finished chapter 1.

But before I wait to complete reading I wanted to tell you this. Don't get depressed like this. That is not good for a writer. First write for yourself, satisfy yourself, only then depend on others' gratification.

It is not the number of comments that matter dear. Even if you get just one comment, if it is an heartfelt one, taking you and your story seriously, then that itself is a boon.

Even views are not a small thing. It means there ARE readers who read your work and is waiting for more to see if they should settle for this one or not. The viewers count also matters dear.

And yea these 'likes' and 'comments' are a boost for a writer, but don't depend on the number as such. You have just started writing. Only the people who know you would come first and let you know how they feel. Others don't know you, so they will wait for your story to frame out and see if it is worth it. Won't you too do the same as a reader? So relax. Don't be depressed.

Now you have started. Good. With time you as a writer and your story along with plot will undergo many changes and development. And depending on that the readers count and comments will increase. But it will take time. So have patience. Meanwhile find joy in those comments which are given with sincere feelings.

And nobody will tell you if a story is 'worse' unless it has somehow offended them, which too is very rare. So leave the silent readers aside. Take their value in viewers count and read the comments of those who really bother. And always be HAPPY. Okay?

I will comment on the story once I finish second chapter too. I hope I can read it today evening. Let me see. Please wait for my comment on the story, I will post it 2mo itself.

And I'm sorry if my comment bothered you in some way. Please understand that my intention was just to put you in ease, not the opposite.

Originally posted by: daljeet

Hey,

Harem sent me this link. I have just finished chapter 1.

But before I wait to complete reading I wanted to tell you this. Don't get depressed like this. That is not good for a writer. First write for yourself, satisfy yourself, only then depend on others' gratification.

It is not the number of comments that matter dear. Even if you get just one comment, if it is an heartfelt one, taking you and your story seriously, then that itself is a boon.

Even views are not a small thing. It means there ARE readers who read your work and is waiting for more to see if they should settle for this one or not. The viewers count also matters dear.

And yea these 'likes' and 'comments' are a boost for a writer, but don't depend on the number as such. You have just started writing. Only the people who know you would come first and let you know how they feel. Others don't know you, so they will wait for your story to frame out and see if it is worth it. Won't you too do the same as a reader? So relax. Don't be depressed.

Now you have started. Good. With time you as a writer and your story along with plot will undergo many changes and development. And depending on that the readers count and comments will increase. But it will take time. So have patience. Meanwhile find joy in those comments which are given with sincere feelings.

And nobody will tell you if a story is 'worse' unless it has somehow offended them, which too is very rare. So leave the silent readers aside. Take their value in viewers count and read the comments of those who really bother. And always be HAPPY. Okay?

I will comment on the story once I finish second chapter too. I hope I can read it today evening. Let me see. Please wait for my comment on the story, I will post it 2mo itself.

And I'm sorry if my comment bothered you in some way. Please understand that my intention was just to put you in ease, not the opposite.

Chapter 2 comment:

I liked you showing there respective home situations. It was a nice way to introduce the families.

Both are attracted to each other, I'm looking forward to see how they deal with it.

Great job!

Awesome & long update...
hmm so Arnav is truely falling for Khushi & our sanka devi is still not getting what is happening with her...
Nice update..
Waiting for next...