*COMPLETED*#1!! FF:THE BROKEN BED,Chapters 1 to 11 - Page 62

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tvserial2012

wow...it is indeed an awesome update...
at first Khushu denies the kiss and surprisingly Arnav agree on that and hide his frustration y showing his anger on Khushi...the most intense part is while they are having their passionate kiss which by the the way initiate by Khushi a few feet away from the family and Anjali is reading the letter...as if Khushi is taking away all his anger and pouring love to him..❤️

thanks for the PM


Thanks for your brilliant observations!⭐️ 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
tread lightly for ye tread in dangerous waters. the queen of interruptions is in his room along with blabbermouth mami and these two throw caution to the winds


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Posted: 12 years ago
I am late I think😊

"You are married?" he managed in a whisper.

what will he do then other than whispering😆, he must have almost fainted hearing that.

Miss Touch-Me-Not and Mr. I-Want-To-Kiss you were quiet enjoyable today. The time machine was so good, ha ha. Like her comment on his towel falling off and his besharam reply.

today it was ...😳
Edited by KittenRose - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
🤗❤️o wow that was a super duper kiss :)...loved the whole ambiance which u have created while they kissing ...like hundred fire works,roses and stars wow too good...u have written it beautifully dear,loved it to the core...and last paragraph is just more than awesome...to drink in all of his gussa and give him all of her''pyaar(love)''..👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely
and romantic
love how you connected letter and khushi surrender
tfs
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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww loved it
hope he doesnt say something stupid aft the kiss
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Posted: 12 years ago
wiwy

That was the best update ever...loved each and every part of it.So she gave him a peck and he kissed her hand literally and then Miss Touch me not changed into touch me all over...
Nice ambience of the kissing,Maa's letter,and Mami -Anjali talking while they were busy...Hmmm...nice adventurous kiss👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
thats nice😊
mami in his room ,omg
she will create a scene if she find out them
haha loving it very much
thnx for pm😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: angeldream14

wowww loved it

hope he doesnt say something stupid aft the kiss


Thanks for loving it😃
Okay will ensure he zips his mouth after the kiss! What say?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha

wiwy


That was the best update ever...loved each and every part of it.So she gave him a peck and he kissed her hand literally and then Miss Touch me not changed into touch me all over...
Nice ambience of the kissing,Maa's letter,and Mami -Anjali talking while they were busy...Hmmm...nice adventurous kiss👏


Awww!😳 Thankyou Arshi! ❤️ My guruji says its my best update ever! I am dancing

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