*COMPLETED*#1!! FF:THE BROKEN BED,Chapters 1 to 11

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roshaan

@roshaan

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#601

yayyy they kiss lol awesum update loved t

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wiwy

@wiwy

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#602

Originally posted by: DurgaS
Wiwyji, ek warning to deti! Chalo koyi nahin. I think everyone will be celebrating, you gave what all wanted. 😆 Di is reading Ma's letter. Is Khushi able to listen what Di was reading?

Thankyou Durgey ! 🤗Yes I had to let them kiss or everyone would have killed me!😆

Maybe Khushi heard the letter. Or maybe she just knew instinctively how to love him!😃

Edited by wiwy - 12 years ago

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wiwy

@wiwy

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#603

Originally posted by: massu91
amazing update loved it
girls like waiting fr d first kiss by der husband do exist...

love hw arnav was controlling himself...

bt i dint like y arnav bought d aukat part here...

m glad khushi dint take dat seriously...

this arnav is who i like...i hope he doesnt distance himself frm her

plsss update d nxt chp soon

Yes, girls like that do exist...are you and I one of them?😃

thanks for your comments.

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ramadevi

@45ramadevi

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#604

👏 beautiful update dear😃😃😃😃😃😃

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arnavbarun

@arnavbarun

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#605

Loved it!

The wait was worth it

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wiwy

@wiwy

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#606

Originally posted by: jdd1959
Oh WIWY WIWYYY...once again u have done it, very well N beautifully written update.I liked d way u blended d scene of MAMI & ANJALI TALKING ABOUT "MAA KI BAHU" IN D ARNAV'S ROOM & OTHER SIDE OFF D ROOM ARNAV ROMANCING Khushi.
U r one of d writer , whose thread i check everyday 4 new update.
THANKS 4 D PM. LUV U...

Thankyou so much for liking the blending of the scene! I enjoyed writing it!

You always have such lovely things to say about the SS and me😳

❤️🤗

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wiwy

@wiwy

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#607

Originally posted by: Aashisrivastava
Haye re mai mar jawa kya update h yar n d kiss smebody just stop me m floating in the dreamland :-)

😃 ❤️ 🤗

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tvserial2012

@tvserial2012

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#608

wow...it is indeed an awesome update...
at first Khushu denies the kiss and surprisingly Arnav agree on that and hide his frustration y showing his anger on Khushi...the most intense part is while they are having their passionate kiss which by the the way initiate by Khushi a few feet away from the family and Anjali is reading the letter...as if Khushi is taking away all his anger and pouring love to him..❤️

thanks for the PM

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wiwy

@wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#609

Originally posted by: cinthiann1758
Wiwy just wonderful. You can make even his thumb sound so hot! Loved it. Want more, more, more!!!👏

Dil mange more, Cyn ? 😆 Why dont you take my Arshi to Paris, Venice, Goa and Lucknow with your two? 😆 🤗

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wiwy

@wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#610

Originally posted by: rulama
Very interesting. Stopping him from the kiss saying she want her husband to be the one, she kisses him on his lips!
When angrily he kisses and she gives in Anjali reads the letter his mother had written to her Bahu about his anger and how to deal it with love! Amen!

Awww! thanks for the superb gist of the chapter! 👏

Do keep reading and commenting🤗