*COMPLETED*#1!! FF:THE BROKEN BED,Chapters 1 to 11 - Page 64

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: wiwy



The story has actually crossed 20, 000 views! 😃Hola! 😃 Baraf ka gola!😎

Thank you friends for liking THE BROKEN BED so much! 🤗

I am humbled by your love and support! ❤️

Oye Wiwy, that is great news! Congrats! 😳 😃 smiley-happy096.gif
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Posted: 12 years ago
😳 GOOOD UPDATE!... i hope he doesent misunderstand her though!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Barun_Addict

Ok first of all someone catch me as I m fainting...

(Though I would like Arnav to do so)
How many times I have mentioned that I am addicted to this SS...
I never in my wildest drems thought k Khushi would stop him from kissing her due to this reason...
Although its a very valid one...
But who cares when ASR is trying to kiss u...
U just frget everything n melt into his arms na...
But Khushi...
Uff kya karon iss ladki ka...
Isse thode na pta hai k iske pati ko koi objection nhi hogi...
N Arnav started laughing at her reaction...
N wen i read these lines ☺️

"Be careful Arnavji. If you shake with mirth your towel might fall off'.!"

Her words had the desired affect. He stopped laughing but the very next minute she wished she hadn't said what she had, for his eyes narrowed and he drawled sexily, "And you will like that, will you?"

The tables were turned on her and she was at a loss of words!

Meri halat bhi aisi hi thi...😆

N omg

She fell into the pool...

N i just loved it wen arnav said

"Khushi, he groaned, "Do you know how enticing u look in red and to add to my woes you are wet ! And on top of that you have banned me from kissing you,"

Bechara...

N for this Mamiji

Go n play ur James Baand game in ur own apartmentwa...

Stop disturbing my Arshi...

Otherwise...

n Anjali aur bhi paagal

Room me hi ghus gyi n kangan dikhaane lag gyi...


WHAT THE !!!!!

I'll not leave them both if they further disturb our Arshi...

N Arnav itna besharam h

wen Khushi placed her hand on his mouth to stop him frm screaming...

he started kissing her palm...

I wasn't surprised when Khushi kissed him...

It had a very valid reason...

He was not at all forcing her even though she was also clearly willing...

But what amazed me was Arnav's reaction...

He removed her pallu from her shoulder...

n kissed her properly...

ummm ☺️

passionately...

n Khushi also

kissed him back...

returning all his love...

Soodh Samet...


I don't want Mamiji n Anji n Lakshmi n HP to interrupt Arshi further...

N here I hv totally gone mad...

Thankswa it was an awesome update...

U amaze me everytime...


















Hey my dear friend 🤗

I look forward to your comments everytime I update! 😃

You had me 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 with this one!

It was a brilliant and hilarious summary of the story!👏😆

How intricately you have read every line I wrote!

Its because of readers like you that I am continuing with this SS!⭐️

Don't know what more to say!😳

I love you I guess!❤️ 😉 And always will!

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Anita..

Really wiwy? Another cliffhanger? Really?
Omg they kiss and that too when kathra is like 15 feet away... These two have some guts


These two have guts!😛 Yes, Anita🤗, don't they?😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: DurgaS

Oye Wiwy, that is great news! Congrats! 😳 😃 smiley-happy096.gif
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🤢 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
@wiwy Di

You are making my heart beat skip its beat...and I can't breath..Really a good writer...mix of comedy and passion...wow

Love every chapter but this last one ,you had me...
All hail on wiwy😆
Edited by goofy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: goofy

@wiwy Di


You are making my heart beat skip its beat...and I can't breath..Really a good writer...mix of comedy and passion...wow

Love every chapter but this last one ,you had me...
All hail on wiwy😆


Hey! Goofs! What luck to catch you here! Thanks for reading and commenting! ❤️ 🤗
Take deep breaths, dearie!😃
Feeling better?😉
😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey...

Awesome update...

I think Khushi heard Anjali reading the letter..

Do continue soon !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
y did u send me pm?? i have already read dis chp before

sob i thot u updated a new chapter

update soon plsss
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wiwy This is for you for your HOT update


Edited by ArshiHamesha - 12 years ago

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