*COMPLETED*#1!! FF:THE BROKEN BED,Chapters 1 to 11

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jdd1959

@jdd1959

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#591

Oh WIWY WIWYYY...once again u have done it, very well N beautifully written update.I liked d way u blended d scene of MAMI & ANJALI TALKING ABOUT "MAA KI BAHU" IN D ARNAV'S ROOM & OTHER SIDE OFF D ROOM ARNAV ROMANCING Khushi.

U r one of d writer , whose thread i check everyday 4 new update.

THANKS 4 D PM. LUV U...

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jenshad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#592

Hope Arnav Takes It Serious!!

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Aashisrivastava

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Posted: 12 years ago

#593

Haye re mai mar jawa kya update h yar n d kiss smebody just stop me m floating in the dreamland :-)

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cheesemad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#594

updated my comment on page 88...

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-MKM-

@-MKM-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#595

Brilliant job..I enjoyed reading this chapter..hoping to see more in next chapter... thanks for the pm..😊

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Cynthia Abruzzo DeSiena

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Posted: 12 years ago

#596

Wiwy just wonderful. You can make even his thumb sound so hot! Loved it. Want more, more, more!!!👏

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rulama

@rulama

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Posted: 12 years ago

#597

Very interesting. Stopping him from the kiss saying she want her husband to be the one, she kisses him on his lips!

When angrily he kisses and she gives in Anjali reads the letter his mother had written to her Bahu about his anger and how to deal it with love! Amen!

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wiwy

@wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#598

QUOTE=cheesemad]reswa...

editwa...

wow wow wow...they kissed...OMFG i can't believe...

initially when she denied kissing him i was like what the...

then when she pecked i was like cool she initiated the kiss...

and then when he kissed her passionately and she reciprocated him i was like *FAINTWA*

mamiji is so nosy...but i love their idea of kissing surreptitiously...their family members were like few meters away n they kissed...amazing...

but there is this issue Di...dont know y update jaldi khatam ho jati h...lol... but i guess u can't make my issue go ways because even if u write 100 pages update i would feel the same...

continue soon Di...or else i would spam😛

editwa once again...

i forgot to mention ma's letter part...

did khushi hear anything?? may be no...how could she...she was busy kissing ASR😳

Thanks a lot, Komal ❤️for your lovely comments! 😳And you were the first one to comment!😃🤗

Maas letter, did Khushi hear, I am not sure😕 😆 But she was following it to the t wasnt she? Maa would have loved her!