*COMPLETED*#1!! FF:THE BROKEN BED,Chapters 1 to 11

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Addicted87

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Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#621

They finally kissed...!😳

When Khushi said 'Husband' I was like what the??!? n after reading her explanation I was face-palming...!!!

Anyways Khushi kissed him first and gave him the green signal... How can Arnav possibly resist then?!?!😊

Fabulous update

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wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#622

Originally posted by: lalarukh
🤗❤️o wow that was a super duper kiss :)...loved the whole ambiance which u have created while they kissing ...like hundred fire works,roses and stars wow too good...u have written it beautifully dear,loved it to the core...and last paragraph is just more than awesome...to drink in all of his gussa and give him all of her''pyaar(love)''..👏

Thankyou so much dearie! That was a super duper comment on my story! Muaaah!😃

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wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#623

The story has actually crossed 20, 000 views! 😃Hola! 😃 Baraf ka gola!😎

Thank you friends for liking THE BROKEN BED so much! 🤗

I am humbled by your love and support! ❤️

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jeshsaiiii

@jeshsaiiii

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Posted: 12 years ago

#624

Amazing! Though I do have a question, when Khushi kisses him, why is he angry? I expected him to be startled but rather happy about it..

They both are so so cute! Mami's interference is working out great for us though I would hate it if she badmouths Khushi.. It has been made obvious in the recent updates that Khushi would like to retain her image and reputation, and hence I would love to see this being shaped as a clandestine affair :)

I can't wait to read more! Hope its not a long wait :)

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Crazy4IPK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#625

It was so hawt!

I found the whole update so sensuous!

Khushi was really an alien from Mars! Her childish candor must pulled him more towards her.

"I want my husband to kiss me first"

God sure will grant her wish.

Arnav was already yearning her to see in red saree. When he saw her drenched completely, he became aphrodisiac for sure.

And finally they kissed.

And the kiss was just ufff!!!

Inside his room, anjali is reading his mom's letter that his heart is full of love and outside he is pouring all his love to his future wife.

Great assimilation.

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wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#626

Originally posted by: jeshsaiii
Amazing! Though I do have a question, when Khushi kisses him, why is he angry? I expected him to be startled but rather happy about it..

They both are so so cute! Mami's interference is working out great for us though I would hate it if she badmouths Khushi.. It has been made obvious in the recent updates that Khushi would like to retain her image and reputation, and hence I would love to see this being shaped as a clandestine affair :)

I can't wait to read more! Hope its not a long wait :)

Thanks for liking and commenting!😃

Why was he angry? 😡

Because he was not any tom, dick or harry. He was the mighty ASR! And she had initially pushed him away from kissing her,remember? He had been very angry but desisted because he respected every woman's right to her dreams! But when she initiated the kiss, he was angry with her for resisting him in the first place. How dare she resist him so long! If she had no problem kissing him why act Miss touch me not in the first place? So when he was kissing her he was both punishing and desiring her!😛 Samjhi tum?😆

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wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#627

Originally posted by: sohara
It was so hawt!
I found the whole update so sensuous!
Khushi was really an alien from Mars! Her childish candor must pulled him more towards her.
"I want my husband to kiss me first"
God sure will grant her wish.
Arnav was already yearning her to see in red saree. When he saw her drenched completely, he became aphrodisiac for sure.
And finally they kissed.
And the kiss was just ufff!!!
Inside his room, anjali is reading his mom's letter that his heart is full of love and outside he is pouring all his love to his future wife.
Great assimilation.

Thanks a ton, Sohara for taking time out of Ramadhan and reading, commenting! 🤗

Thanks for your kind words. I am thrilled you enjoyed.😃

Yes his gussa is really his pyaar that he was pouring out to his future wife!

Great observations by you!⭐️ thanks again!!! Take care.