*COMPLETED*#1!! FF:THE BROKEN BED,Chapters 1 to 11 - Page 54

Originally posted by: wiwy

I got cold feet, Komal!🤣

But next chapter...ho jayye!!☺️ What say?!

Originally posted by: sondaryalakshmi

Really really nice n fun filled update.
Loved Mami's dialougebaazi.

Awww the lastest encounter of Arnav n Khushi n I I hope he kisses her. 😉

Originally posted by: ..Anita..

Haye arnav shirtless and in a towel!!!!
Why wiwy why would you stop there

Originally posted by: wiwy

😆Anita! Its called titillation!!!😉😆

❤️🤗

Originally posted by: jdd1959

EXCELLENT, AWESOME, LOVELY UPDATE...

Arnav, Khushi, Aanjali, Mama- Mami, u have written about everybody & everything so well; it gives me crave 4 long update. " YEH DIL MAANGE MORE."

U don't believe it while reading last scene between Arnav & Khushi some "CURRENT"pass through my body; just by reading it u feel THE EMOTIONS of them. so very well & beautifully written chapter.

You have done it WIWY...HATS OFF U... It shows along with HUMOUROUS bone u have ROMANTIC bone is also there in ur body. .WELL DONE.

Waiting 4 their FIRST KISS... UPDATE SOON..

THANKS 4 D PM.

PS. Pardon my english , i m not very good at it ; hope i m able 2 convey my feeling about ur update.

Originally posted by: vrindagupta

awesome update

so hilarious

mami was trying so hard to get the truth ot of arnav

glad she didn't got much

i knew that HHBB in showroom was arnav's mami

wish things go on like this only

happy that anjali didn't took mami's words seriously on arnav

Originally posted by: kenny_Arhi

Hahaha Chottey is big enough to break beds! Ha ha! That's a good one! Ha, ha!"🤣🤣

My gutter mind is on a spree now🤣

Anyway awesome update...eagerly waiting for the next one

Originally posted by: Barun_Addict

omg

what the...😲

this was totally unexpected...😕

khushi running out of the room like that...😲😆

n mamaji n mamiji...😲

arnav bohot besharam hai...☺️

n please yrr this is a cliffhanger...

jaldi update karna...😳

after reading the last para

i dunno how long i would be able to wait...😉

Originally posted by: DurgaS

Hmm... Ab kaa kahen hum... Just when I was thinking ke chalo bachchi aaj ke liye bach gayi, you send her right into the bachcha's den. 😆 So, Arnav gets to flirt with her and you get to flirt with both of them, carry on, carry on... 😉 So, the lady from the shop is the US wali Mami! Wonder why she was shopping for beds as soon as she arrives in India? And as soon as she arrives in RM, she's started her inbhestigation. 😆 Akash is coming, is Payaliya on her way into the story too? Nani is in Sheeshmahal! So, Khushi will go to the NSS camp which is near Lucknow, and the Raizada family will reach Sheeshmahal to meet Nani. Some interesting story developing at this place. Looking forward to it. 😳

Hey Wiwy, just saw. Congrats on your 16000+ views. 😃 👏 👍🏼