*COMPLETED*#1!! FF:THE BROKEN BED,Chapters 1 to 11

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Addicted87

@Addicted87

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#511

"Yes, big and strong enough to break beds!!"🤣 Im sure Mami wont stay quiet for long... She'l probably end up telling Anjali the whole story...😆

Fabulous update😊

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horizon123

@horizon123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#512

beautiful love story, loved the concept😊

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Katelyn

@Katelyn

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#513

I thorough enjoyed reading this chapter with so many twists! So the couple from the furniture store is actually Arnav's aunt and uncle! Loved the teasing Arnav! Luckily Khushi was able to escape this time but I'm sure Manorama will spill the beans later. Awesome dialogue by Manorama: "Yes, big and strong enough to break beds!!"

Khushi caught Arnav half naked twice!! 😆 Love these lines:

"She gulped as she took in his prominent biceps, the emerging expanse of his tanned sculpted chest, slightly matted, his toned muscles and his flat stomach. He was breathtakingly handsome in his half naked state, like a Greek God. "

"He looked infinitely devilishly sexy in a white towel clinging low on his waist, his long muscular legs proudly exposed. Drops of water clung to his thick wavy hair, while some droplets trickled down the thick strong column of his neck and caressed his beautifully sculpted chest. His fresh smell drugged the air and his brooding eyes spun brown magic in their depths!"

Wiwy, these are too good!! I'm definitely drooling over your ASR and your SS. OMG, you left us with a cliff hanger! Inquiring minds want to know...will they kiss or not?!! I'm so eager to read the next chapter so please update soon!!

Wiwy, sorry dear friend that I haven't commented! I do want to let you know that you are a talented writer. I love the romance and comedy and everything about this SS. I see a lot your personality here! Thank you so much for giving us this awesome story! I truly appreciate all your time and efforts!

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Aashisrivastava

@Aashisrivastava

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#514

Awww i want a long hot n most imp unintrupted kiss plz plz plz
khushi to gai kaam se ;-)

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pips27

@pips27

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#515

why didn't you finish writing???☺️☺️☺️

please do not bring anjali to spoil the moment 🤪🤪🤪

great updatwas 👍🏼

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raniluvsasr

@raniluvsasr

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#516

Hey thnx for d pm,
loved d update.
Woow waiting for wat arnav is gonna do next. Manorama to be turning out to be arnav maami ws a big tym shock.
Beautifully wriiten. Update soon

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Throne

@Throne

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#517

AWESOME!!!!!!!!

Enjoyed reading it!

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Peonia

@Peonia

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#518

First thing first the title is kool😉 so i totally bumped into this story and very glad i strted reading it very good story and climbing buildings😆😆

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wiwy

@wiwy

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#519

Originally posted by: cinthiann1758
wiwy, you are a naughty girl too! Just loved it! Love your description of him wearing a towel!! Keep writing! looking forward to the next chapter!

Thanks Cyn! ❤️ 🤗Sorry for late reply😳 Was very busy at work whole day!

Naughty girl? Who ? Me? What did I do? 😕😕😕

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