*COMPLETED*#1!! FF:THE BROKEN BED,Chapters 1 to 11 - Page 55

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: wiwy



arnav bohot besharam hai...☺️

🤣

tabhi toh...🤣
pta nahi aage kya karega...☺️ ☺️ ☺️
bechari khushi...
how can she stand in front of him like that...😕
main to faint hi ho jaati...☺️ ☺️ ☺️
n iss baar koi HP ya kisi aman ke phone call ya di ya mami kisi ne bhi disturb kiya na
to i'll kill that person...😡
un dono ek saath time to do na...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: wiwy


Let your imagination run wild till the next update!🤣😉
Thanks for reading and commenting!🤗

you are pushing me deeper in the gutter☺️
update soon!😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Katelyn

I thorough enjoyed reading this chapter with so many twists! So the couple from the furniture store is actually Arnav's aunt and uncle! Loved the teasing Arnav! Luckily Khushi was able to escape this time but I'm sure Manorama will spill the beans later. Awesome dialogue by Manorama: "Yes, big and strong enough to break beds!!"

Khushi caught Arnav half naked twice!! 😆 Love these lines:
"She gulped as she took in his prominent biceps, the emerging expanse of his tanned sculpted chest, slightly matted, his toned muscles and his flat stomach. He was breathtakingly handsome in his half naked state, like a Greek God. "
"He looked infinitely devilishly sexy in a white towel clinging low on his waist, his long muscular legs proudly exposed. Drops of water clung to his thick wavy hair, while some droplets trickled down the thick strong column of his neck and caressed his beautifully sculpted chest. His fresh smell drugged the air and his brooding eyes spun brown magic in their depths!"
Wiwy, these are too good!! I'm definitely drooling over your ASR and your SS. OMG, you left us with a cliff hanger! Inquiring minds want to know...will they kiss or not?!! I'm so eager to read the next chapter so please update soon!!
Wiwy, sorry dear friend that I haven't commented! I do want to let you know that you are a talented writer. I love the romance and comedy and everything about this SS. I see a lot your personality here! Thank you so much for giving us this awesome story! I truly appreciate all your time and efforts!


Kate the Great❤️ 🤗

Thankyou, thankyou, thankyou for loving my story! Yes, its so much me! Thanks for understanding! 😳 And I am having a ball! Welcome to the party, my dear friend!🥳
I guess I will have to let them kiss by public demand, or maybe not😉 😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
if mamiji is the one in the showroom then how come she didn't recognize Arnav?
Khushi is in a red sharee... Arnav in a towel...the kiss...☺️...

Thanks for an awesome update and PM

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: wiwy


Uff! Durgey! How will I ever 'bacho' from you!😆
Why was mami shopping for bed?😆 Because...I will tell you in my next update! So don't have sleepless nights over it, okay?😆 Sheeshmahal-Raizadas-Lucknow-Khushi, I don't know what you are talking about!!!😛 Payaliya?!! Oh no! I want to end the story NOW!😆

16000! Hope at least half of them have actually read it!😃

😆 Did I scare you Wiwy? Can't help it, I am the detective after all! 😆 Ok, you tell your story, I will wait as it unfolds. Embarrassed Meanwhile, I think you have a serious issue to look into, a public demand, to be or not to be. 🤣
It is 17000+ now, you still feel they are not reading? This is like the IPK cast not knowing their popularity during the making of the show! Your story is a super duper hit, Wiwy. Congrats! Clap 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: wiwy



Thankyou for liking and commenting!🤗
What would you prefer Khushi to escape or not to escape?!😉😃




I would prefer khushi heart Dhak Dhak...
Really 😕 😕 don't know 😭
But want romantic scene
Or again bed break like in serial
Eample .. Before khushi escape arnav catch khushi, n teaser her like
Arnav moved forward and khushi move backwards till they continue
N khushi hits to his bed and she falls down arnav try to hold but he to fall on her...

Now up to you ... you broken the bed n mami got chanc to teasing they or both heart races on dhak dhak...
I'm really 😕 but I really love both scene if it come on your story update. 😳

Thank 4 mp me n like my comment
❤️ you...!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wiwy the Wicked! You're a rockstar man!! Tu itney mazzey se likhti hai ki padhne mein bhi mazza aa jata hai 😊 👏 😊

Totally loved it. You've smashed it out of the park for a record 7th time!!!!

Edited by IssPKaur - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


Originally posted by: tvserial2012

if mamiji is the one in the showroom then how come she didn't recognize Arnav?
Khushi is in a red sharee... Arnav in a towel...the kiss...☺️...

Thanks for an awesome update and PM


Hey😃 Thanks for commenting.Anjali said in the update that mama mami had left forU.S when *Arnav was only 5 and they did not keep in touch with Arnav, Anjali and Nani. So Mami did not recognize Arnav in the showroom. Okay?! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: wiwy


What the! Sohara! 😃 You want your shirless sexy boy, towel clad sexy boy as well as a hot sexy boy kiss in one update!!!! Tum bhi na!!☺️

i know I'm impatient.
if i could i would make them, you know what i meant.😳
But I'll wait for the kiss.
this is exactly what I want when I see Arshi

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