*COMPLETED*#1!! FF:THE BROKEN BED,Chapters 1 to 11

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please6

@please6

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#551

Lol love it and thanks for the pm so now the update lol nano is funny and I was waiting for something this funny to happen plus if mami is here then comedy is near ;) anyways loved it and Argo moment will be disturb right and that too by mami right? Lol anyways loved it and plzzz update soon

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angeldream14

@angeldream14

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#552

awesome

ASR is being a tease

wht will Mani n Mama think abtt he so embarassing

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Horizon

@Horizon

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#553

Wiwy, just caught up all chapters. You are such a chupa rustum indeed in writing! Broken Bed concept in itself is such an awesome ticking idea.. originality oozing.. hats off. Loved their shopping trip for bed.. where as in reality what we got out of their shopping trip was only a heart break ...so full marks.

You already know my comments for the first chapter, and how much I loved it.. here is a toast again.. for that one!

I see that you are enjoying keeping your readers on cliff hanger teasing about that Diwali reloaded.. well we hope it won't exactly be a Diwali in all the ways..

loved the idea of Khushi going to a remote place.. I see lot of scope there!!:) but seriously sending Khushi out of Delhi was my all time dream.. and you are fulfilling it. Thanks for that.

All in all, a joy ride wiwy.. look forward to your updates! Apologize late comments.

Have a good one.

PS: would like to know if you are OK with sharing, your source of inspiration for the ideas incorporated in the story.

Edited by Horizon - 12 years ago

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indi52

@indi52

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#554

wiwy,

telepathy. now we have evidence.

i just wrote a non cheek kissing scene on blast... please take a look... the thumb.

and a pink purse... 😆

i love the fun and sex and glitter and energy of your bed breaking duo. they make my breath race... and that girl running off, slippers in hand... that is me catching sight of someone... and he needn't be half undressed too. so he is in a towel and parched lips and wet smirking ones are getting ready to act out some conjugation. aah i wait.

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aafan

@aafan

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#555

gosh! hormones are acting up...keep it up.

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ArnieBoyBarun

@ArnieBoyBarun

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#556

it was a fantastic update, except i have a little problem with mamaji and mamiji not recognizing arnav and arnav not recognizing them in the shop. I am sorry if you felt bad, i cannot convince myself to that part. Except that portion it was fantastic. Loved the last part and looking forward to the update now👍🏼

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sindhu

@sarun21

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#557

its awesome and funny update...

khushi exactly will come when he is shirtless how come😉

loved the update very much...

simply superb...

they must be feeling embarrassed by seeing mami ji and mama ji in their house...

really funny...

pls continue soon and pls pm me the updates...

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wiwy

@wiwy

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#558

Originally posted by: IssPKaur
Wiwy the Wicked! You're a rockstar man!! Tu itney mazzey se likhti hai ki padhne mein bhi mazza aa jata hai 😊 👏 😊

Totally loved it. You've smashed it out of the park for a record 7th time!!!!

Awww😳! Your comment on my story is my treat! Thankyou so much, Issk! Seriously, could't have asked for more! ❤️ 🤗

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luvmisdd

@luvmisdd

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#559

nice ff please pm me😊

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wiwy

@wiwy

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#560

Originally posted by: Horizon
Wiwy, just caught up all chapters. You are such a chupa rustum indeed in writing! Broken Bed concept in itself is such an awesome ticking idea.. originality oozing.. hats off. Loved their shopping trip for bed.. where as in reality what we got out of their shopping trip was only a heart break ...so full marks.

You already know my comments for the first chapter, and how much I loved it.. here is a toast again.. for that one!

I see that you are enjoying keeping your readers on cliff hanger teasing about that Diwali reloaded.. well we hope it won't exactly be a Diwali in all the ways..

loved the idea of Khushi going to a remote place.. I see lot of scope there!!:) but seriously sending Khushi out of Delhi was my all time dream.. and you are fulfilling it. Thanks for that.

All in all, a joy ride wiwy.. look forward to your updates! Apologize late comments.

Have a good one.

PS: would like to know if you are OK with sharing, your source of inspiration for the ideas incorporated in the story.

Thanks Horizon🤗

Pichhe se shuru karte hain 😛 ! I would love to share my inspiration, the sources of my idea for the story!😃 Will you interview wiwy, the budding writer? Ooo!😆

Lot of scope in khushi going to remote places, eh? For example? You must have thought about this a lot since this was your dream! Give me some ideas na and be my source of inspiration⭐️🤗

Chupa rustam? That is true! I never tried my hand at writing! Indi, her style of writing inspired me!