*COMPLETED*#1!! FF:THE BROKEN BED,Chapters 1 to 11

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wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#521

Originally posted by: jeshsaiii
Oh my God! What a twist making the elderly lady in the storeroom be Mamiji! LOL. That was hilarious and Arnav is so teasing!

Can't wait to read more and see what happens! I bet it won't be long before Mami divulges what happened.. Khushi would be so embarrassed, poor she!

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Thankyou for reading and commenting! Yes, I am wondering too what will happen when Mami divulges what happened!😃

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

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Posted: 12 years ago

#522

Excellent One.

Poor kushi, first time, she escape but second time, she can't. 😳

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ayesha998

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Posted: 12 years ago

#523

read it in a go was fab
amazing

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wiwy

@wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#524

Originally posted by: tparvaiz
Awesome update.

Khushi escape first n second time Arnav didn't let her escape
Mamiji is 007 James bone 😉
Arnav is big and strong enough for break bed.
Khushi 😲 n Arnav is 😉

Wanna to read more can't wait 4 next update.
Please continue soon dear.
Thanks for mp me. 😊

Question is how Khushi's gonna oescape arnav
Or both will start feeling towards eachother. ?...?????

Thankyou for liking and commenting!🤗

What would you prefer Khushi to escape or not to escape?!😉 😃

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wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#525

Originally posted by: arnavbarun

Hilarious update with an overdose of hottness!

Will he do what we are thinking!

Ha Ha!

Please do tell me in DETAILS what everyone is thinking!😃 I will use it in the next update🤗😉

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wiwy

@wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#526

Originally posted by: sohara
That's ramanchi.
how can you end like this!
what he gonna do? will he kiss her? No I, hate this cliff hanger.

So the lady from the store is actually arnav's mami! Hmm she must be thinking Khushi is Arnav's girl friend.
Interesting.
can't wait for the next chapter.

What the! Sohara! 😃 You want your shirless sexy boy, towel clad sexy boy as well as a hot sexy boy kiss in one update!!!! Tum bhi na!!☺️

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arnavbarun

@arnavbarun

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Posted: 12 years ago

#527

Originally posted by: wiwy

Ha Ha!Please do tell me in DETAILS what everyone is thinking! I will use it in the next update

he will try to KISS but he might MISS;)

or may be we can have another broken bed

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wiwy

@wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#528

Originally posted by: aashi12
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twist??.. It was a whole lot of surprise!

Mama ji and mamiji where did they come from??.. And theirr first missed kiss!

That was embarrasing, wid their 'bed breaking' scandal, in front of manorama and manohar already!

Must say, manorama cud have really lead to a difficult position, but khushi escaped well before!

But wat to say purse is must! And well she's again in lion's den wid door locked and lion aka arnav looking damn hadsome and he's already soo close to her!

Pls,let tis kiss happen! Or wud manno mami intervene??

Mama-Mami have come from the States(U.S,) yaar meri😆 They were away for over 20 years due to acrimony between Mami and Nani! Now Nani is very ill so they have come to India to let bygones be bygones!😆

Okay will let the kiss happen, next update?☺️

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wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#529

Originally posted by: cheesemad
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glad i checked before sleeping:)
feeling sleepy will edit it tomorrow:)

edit...
yar Di what the i thought they will have hot moments but y did khushi run away...Di this is ramanchi...

omg that lady is arnav's mamiji...lol...

"Yes, big and strong enough to break beds!!" came the pat reply from Manorama Mami.🤣

wow arnav is flirting with our khushi...this is so cute...

haye arnie in toweliya...please Di kuch to hone do inke beech😳