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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update di..
loved it.
love arni talk and also
Arjun self talk..
Convo between sam n annu..
Arjun's decision to have family dinner.
love all couple drive.
the song was awesome.
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Posted: 11 years ago
@AnjuRish, @Goldie, @Sarita, @Pinkerbell, @Aabish02, @DesiiiDivaaa, @Nakshatra92, @Snehajain, @Laila1994, @Megha , @Unishaz - Thanks to all u lovely friends ... stay tuned for more 😊
@DevilDiva - Thanks dear ... well... ab dekhti jao Chhotu kya karta hai 😉
@Naina - Thanks dear ... haan 😉 Bhindi baazaar... bahut kuch chhoot raha hai ... soch rahi hoon usko bhi guest role mein le aaun ... 😉
@Birdie - Thanks dear ... specially for the restaurant ... I know how special it is for u 😉
Yes... Riya is in a big shock ... par ab dekhte jao ki aagey kya hota hai 😉
And yes... tumhara fav genre aur mera sabse weak genre ... I am very bad at writing romance 😳
Wo to us song ka asar tha ... i'm in love with that song 😳
Mona-Chhotu ... a little more to come ... in a bit filmy style 😊
@Zuby - Thanks dear ... I understand how u must be feeling while reading ArNi part 😊 ... Sameer - Arjun ki dosti hi kuch aisi hai 😉
@ShanayaShaleen - Thanks dear ...hey!! it was Arjun's bday, Roshni ka Bday flashback mein tha 😉. and yes... Chhotu ki life mein itna bada panga ho gaya hai ...ab dekho kya hota hai 😉
@Farheen - Thanks dear ... Yes Chhotu ki line clear ... ab wo is line par kaise chalega ... ye dekhna hai 😉
@Zebbie - Thanks dear ... yippie ... Zebbie ka comment aaya ... bahut sare Res ke baad Zebbie ka comment ... Wow!!! 😉 ... ek aur chhota sa part aa raha hai 😉
@Payal - Thanks dear ... picture abhi baki hai 😉
@Ila - Thanks dear ... BTW tumhara picchla comment abhi bhi Res hai 😉
Arjun's reaction on Mona - Chhotu 😆 ... abhi maine socha nahi hai ... par kuch funny hi hoga 😉
Romance likhne mein mai thodi weak ... try kar rahi hoon 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Friends,

Please check my Thank you note on previous page 😊
I'm back with a small part. Kind of a filler 😊
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Mona: Unhe pata hai

Chhotu: Kya?

Mona: ki mai tumhe pasand karti hoon... aur...

Chhotu(gulps a lump in his throat): Aur?

Mona: tum bhi unhe pasand ho (winks)

Chhotu couldn't believe what she just said.
Chhotu (thinking) : Mar gaya
He closed his eyes trying to sink in Mona's words.
Mona came close to him and kept her palm on him shoulder.
He opened his eyes and saw that mischievious smile on Mona's face was gone and she was looking very serious. She intently looked into his eyes.
Mona: Its OK Chandrakant ... mai tumhe pasand karti hoon ... iska matlab ye to nahi ki tum bhi mujhe pasand karo ... ya fir sirf isliye ki mera bada bhai tumhara senior hai... tum kisi pressure mein aake ... zabardasti mujhse rishta jodo ... koi samjhauta karo ... (takes a pause) Nahi ... mai aisa kabhi nahi chahungi ... agar mai tumhe pasand nahi hoon to ... koi baat nahi ... bhool jao ye sab ... mai Bhai aur Maa - Papa ko bhi bol dungi ... ki is bare mein na soche ...
Chhotu looks at her with a question mark on his face.
Mona: wo ... Maa- Papa soch rahe they ki tmhare Baba agar bhai ki shadi mein aaye to unse humare rishtey ki baat karenge ... par tumhari marzi k khilaf kuch nahi hoga ... tumhare dil mein agar mere liye koi feelings nahi hai to ... nahi hai (shrugs)
Moan's eyes well up a bit, so to distract herself and avoid any further emotional outburst, she looks at watch
Mona: hey... bahut der ho gayi hai... mai chalti hoon... tum bhi jao ... Good night and Thank you ... mujhe ghar drop karne ke liye aur meri bakwaas sun-ne ke liye ... (she turns to leave)
Chhotu was confused. He was still in a shock. But he still noticed tears stuck in her eyes. This was the last thing he wish to do, make her cry. And he some how he gathered courage to call her back.
Chhotu: Mona!!!
Mona is stunned for second and tries to ascertain if he actually called her or she was hallucinating but she realised it was real. She turns and looks at him enquiringly.
Chhotu: Kal Sunday hai ... tum har sunday ki tarah subah 11:30 baje Tulsi complex k samne wale deparmental store mein aa rahi ho na shopping ke liye?
Now it was Mona's turn to be surprised.
Mona(surprised): tumhe kaise pata mai har sunday subah 11:30 baje waha jati hoon?
Chhotu(naughty smile): waise hi jaise tumhe pata tha ki mai ye samne wale Star gym mein jaata hoon
Before she could think and reply to him, Chhotu leaves racing his bike flashing a mischievious smile.
Mona (thinking): iska matlab wo bhi mujhe notice karta tha jab mai departmental store jaati thi
She blushes at this thought and goes home.
Both Mona and Chhotu had a sleepless night thinking about each other.
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Next day, Sameer's parents leave for Udaipur for marriage preparations.

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Monday was a regular day at ETF with team busy in a case. But Chhotu and Sameer were special courteous to each other but avoided any direct talks.

Riya noticed everything and she told Shree and Navika what Sameer told her about Chhotu and Mona's alliance. But due to case they didn't get time to talk about it.
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Tuesday, 28 May, was Shree's birthday, but poor techie was overburdened with work since morning. Sameer asked Riya and Chhotu to get a cake for him in the evening and they celebrated hi birthday in office after which he planned to go for dinner with Navika.
Though he was not sure he will be free early, but still he had booked a table for them. Sameer planned the work in a way so that Shree an go out with Navika.
Around 7:00 PM Shree and Navika reached the venue.
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So ... how was it?
A small one 😉
Please excuse the spelling mistakes and grammatical errors 😳
No Precap because even I don't know what and when will I be posting the next part 😊
Yay!!! is thread mein ek aur update aa gaya ... and may be this is my last update in this thread. Will try to be back soon in a new thread 😊
Those who wish to receive the PM on next update, please add me to your buddy list and those wish to be removed from my PM list please let me know.
And please don't thank me for PMs 😉
Regards,
Bhavna
P.S. - Sunday ko Mona and Chhotu met in the departmental store at 11:30 AM ... that part will be coming later 😉
Edited by bgargate - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
*unres*

Dhinka chika...
I m the first one to stalk ur update,without a pm.
Also first to comment and like without a pm.
Yay...
Woo Hoo...!! *dancing Gangnam Style!*
i am just loving the present track.
It was a superb,amazing and a dhasu update.
Loved it to the core.
Sach mein,kab shuru hua aur kab khatam hua,ekdum hi pata nahi chala.
Chotu and Mona ka convo was really superb.
I really liked it.
Chotu ke toh paseene choot gaye thhe when he heard that Rathod also knows about Mona's love for him...
Aww...
Mona was teary-eyed when she thought that Chotu doesnt love her.
Wow...
Chotu surprised her by asking her to come to that departmental store at 11:30am.
Yay...
Finally,Mona is happy.
Wow...
It was Shree's birthday.
Everybody celebrated it with lots of happiness...
Sr.Rathod and Mumma Rathod went to Udaipur for the wedding preps.
Wow...
I just love this story a lot.
Continue sooonish... :)
thanks for the update.
Edited by zebbie0504 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
huh! kab shuru hua aur kab khatam hua kuch pata hi nahi chala!
i guess in the history of RNP this ws th shortest update...
chotu ke upar likhte likhte update hi chotu kar diya! lolz

beautiful update rukku...finally a hatke yet cute confession frm chotu...

wow shree ka birthday...! u better know who'll be more happier than me... :-)

continue soon

love
Aisha
Edited by Aisha.Vashishth - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
HUH itnu sa update ...😡... Ahaaan bhindi bazar ka guest appearance to banata he ...😉... khyal acccha he ... lekin banaoge kyaa ussko ? ...🤣... interesting very inserting
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice yar..
But itna chotu sa update..
Not fair..
But anyways loved it..
Finally mona aur chotu ki gadi patri pe aa gayi..
All set for sam n annu's wedding..
Celebrated shree's b'day amidst..
Sameer gave off early for shree n navika..
Superb..
Continue soon..
Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome but short part
loved it
waiting for next part
update soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was a nice update and cute thnk god chotu maan gya vrna bechari humari mona darling dil tut jaata... aur fir arjun aur rathod sir milke band bjaate...

shrees bday wow...

itna chota toh itna hi milega..


Edited by ila_tanwar - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
sweetie like button not working
super finally one more love story on track

now only my ariya are pending

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