RNP (continued in new thread from 25-Nov, see index)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi Friends,
I'm new here and this is for the first time I'm posting my fiction story based on the characters of the serial "Arjun-Har Yug Mein Aayega Ek."
I have borrowed few characters from the serial and added a few new.
I'm not a professional writer, so don't have a style of mine...😛
It is inspired by the amazing writers whom I'm following here on I-F for a few months 😊
They are my inspiration and this is a tribute to them 😊
Thanks for inspiring me vidya.anand, kunchu, haruhi26, _Mohabbatgirl_ , zebbie0504 and my dear friends Chulbuli Annu and ila_tanwar ...
I know a lot of stories with these characters have been presented before this in this forum and I haven't got time to go through all of them so there might be some similarity in the story or concept.
If there is any it is purely coincidental. 😊
The story is mainly about Sameer Rathod 😊 . He is my favourite character in the show. ☺️
So here is the Prologue:
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Prologue:
It's late in the night. He parks his XUV in the parking lot of "Sneh Society" where he lives.
He hops out of the vehicle and locks it. He gets into the lift and presses the button for 10th floor.
On the 10th floor, he moves towards his apartment no. 1005, but as usual, his feet automatically take him to the neighbouring apartment no. 1006 which is locked for long time. Though he doesn't want it to happen, but it has become a part of his daily routine.
However hard he tries not to look there, but a certain force attracts him there everyday. This is happening regularly for last 3 years, whatever time he comes back home. He simply cannot control himself. He knows that every time he does it, he ends up hurting himself.
He goes near the locked door. He touches the door, the lock and the nameplates reading:

"ARJUN S. RAWTE"
"ROSHNI A. RAWTE"
After a few seconds, he turns back to his apartment. He takes out the keys, opens the lock, gets in and bangs the door behind him breaking the silence.
The nameplate on the closed door of apartment no. 1005 reads:
"SAMEER S. RATHOD"
Please excuse the spelling mistakes 😳.
Do comment or hit the Like button if you liked it
Or at least comment if u didn't like it 😉
A little info about the story and what you can expect from the story...
The main character of the story is ETF Chief Sameer Daam Singh Rathod and his relationships with people around him - Old and new. His Friends and Love interest.
Arjun Suryakant Rawte is the parallel lead character and Sameer's best friend. There is a story about him too 😊
Though I have written a big part of the story for both... But for Arjun, I still have the scope to change...
So a question for all Arjun lovers...You have two options... What do you want in Arjun's story...
Ariya or Arisha? 😛
Poll closed friends... on Public demand, its Ariya. 😊
Sakshi lovers, I don't intend to hurt you but there is no scope for this character in my story... so Arakshi is not an option
And this choice is not going to have an impact on Sameer's story... There is no Sam-Aisha and no Sam-Riya 😉
So please let me know soon 😛
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Index:
Part 1 : Page 12
Sameer's Family : Page 16
Part 2A : Page 17
Part 2B : Page 18
Part 3 : Page 23
Note (don't miss it): Page 28
Part 4A : Page 28
Part 4B : Page 29
Part 5 : Page 33
Part 6 : Page 40
Part 7A : Page 46
Part 7B : Page 46
Part 8A : Page 51
Part 8B : Page 51
Part 9 : Page 59
Part 10A : Page 67
Part 10B : Page 67
Part 10C : Page 68
Part 11 : Page 74
Part 12 : Page 81
Part 13 : Page 87
Part 14A : Page 93
Part 14B : Page 93
Part 14C : Page 93
Part 15 : Page 100
Part 16 : Page 105
Arjun's parents : Page 111
Part 17 : Page 111
Part 18 : Page 118
Part 19A : Page 124
Part 19B : Page 124
Part 19C : Page 124
Note : Page 129
Part 20 : Page 129
Part 21A : Page 132
Part 21B : Page 132
Part 22 : Page 135
Part 23A : Page 139
Part 23B : Page 139
Part 23C : Page 139
Part 24 : Page 143
Part 25 A : Page 145
Part 25 B : Page 146

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Regards,
Bhavna
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Chulbuli_Annu thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yipppeee



Me 1st...



ab aayega mazaaa...

Prologue to accha hai



ab main aapko lambe lambe comment krke pareshan karungi...


aur ariya hi likhna...yahaan ariya sabki zyda fav hai...

aur jaldi jaldi likhna


main apne surprise ka wait kr rhi hu😉😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Bhavna di if i coment it means i didnt like it ??
or i misread?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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new start 😊.. nice prologue ...😃...continue soon ...but plzzz want Arakshi ..plzzz 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hmm...

This sounds so different ...

Do update dear...

One thing dear...im with ariya only...
bgargate thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Payal_156

Bhavna di if i coment it means i didnt like it ??
or i misread?

No Dear, I didn't mean that... even if u liked u can comment...
In the comment you can clearly write whether u liked it or not... 😉
If u liked... what did u like in it
and if u didn't like... what u didn't like in it... so that I know ur views clearly😉
Regards,
Bhavna
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Payal_156

Bhavna di if i coment it means i didnt like it ??
or i misread?



uff payal

tu comment kr darr mat...diii kuch nhi kehne wali 😉... tune jo bhi padha hai chod use tu comment kr
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Posted: 12 years ago
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prologue is very interesting... please make it ariya
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: NainaSM

new start 😊.. nice prologue ...😃...continue soon ...but plzzz want Arakshi ..plzzz 👍🏼



hehehheeh naina bs yaar arakshi is not possible darling
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: NainaSM

new start 😊.. nice prologue ...😃...continue soon ...but plzzz want Arakshi ..plzzz 👍🏼

Thanks...I wish dear... but I had already mentioned... there is no scope of that character as of now... 😛 ... u will understand once that story progresses 😊
Edited by bgargate - 12 years ago

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