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Posted: 11 years ago
Friends... I know ye bahut chhotu sa update tha... sirf filler tha ... kyunki next update ab thoda lamba hai 😉
Comments and likes kam ho gaye hain ... shayad isiliye first thread par ataki hai ye story 😆😆😆
But never mind... the show must go on 😉
@ Sarita, @ Aabish_02, @ Leki, @ Shaff, @ Laila1994, @ DesiiiDivaaa, @ Nakshatra92, @ Megha, @ Pihu Thank you so much for ur appreciation and love for this story 😊
@ Zebbie - Thanks dear ... Love u ... me also dancing with u ... but energy bacha ke rakho... Sam-Annu ki shadi mein dance karna hai 😉
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Shree and Navika aur Chhotu aur Mona ki ek date to banti hai Sam-Annu ki shadi se pehle 😉
@Zuby - Thanks dear ...😆😆.. Ab Chhotu ussey humesha to door bhagta tha ... to wo bechari kya jaaney 😉 ... next part is all bout their dates ... read it and tell how it was 😉
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Part 25 A

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Around 7:00 PM Shree and Navika reached the venue. Shree had already booked a table for a candle-light dinner.

Navika gave him a sports watch. Though she didn't know much about the gadgets, but still she managed to buy one for him and he was impressed by her choice.
After dinner they went to beach for a quiet walk.
Shree couldn't believe he was in love. All he had in life was is obsession for gadgets and his quest for the latest technologies. There was a time when he used to spend hours learning how to hack websites, learning new ways to crack the difficult security systems keep him self updated about the latest technologies and in leisure time his gaming console was his companion.

His birthday never used to be a special for him. If he visited his home town Kolkata, his mom would make his favourite dishes for him and pamper him. But if in Mumbai, he never did anything special for himself.
But this year his life had changed. Navika entered his life. And Shree, who used to crib about work load in ETF was now thankful to it because this is where he met his soul mate.
Kaise Mujhe Tum Mil Gayi, Kismat Pe Aaye Naa Yakeen
Utar Aayi Jeet Mein, Jaise Chaand Utar Ta Hai
Kabhi Haule Haule Dheere Se
Gun Guni Dhoop Ki Tarah Se Tarango Mein Tum
Chhoo Ke Mujhe Guzari Ho Yuh
Dekhu Tumhe Ya Main Sunoo, Tum Ho Sukoon
Tum Ho Junoon..., Kyun Pehle naa Aayi Tum
Kaise Mujhe Tum Mil Gayi, Hooo.., Kismat Pe Aaye Naa Yakeen, Hooo...

He remembered the moment when he saw Navika for the first time. He was amused by her pink glasses but after knowing her, he was really impressed and admired her. And he didn't know when this admiration converted into love and a strong relationship which was to last forever.
Main To Yeh Sochta Tha, Ke Aaj Kal upar wale Ko
Fursat Nahi Phir Bhi Tumhe Banaake Woh
Meri Nazar Main Chadh Gaya, Ruit Pe Duaa..Aur Ban Gaya
Navika's state was no different. As a forensic expert, she had excelled in her career. But she was always scared of marriage. He sister's husband had burnt alive for dowry and that incident still haunted her. Whenever there were talks of her marriage in her family and the boy's family demanded dowry, her parents used to get sceptical. They gave a lot of money as dowry to their first daughter, but still they lost their daughter. They didn't want to repeat this and hence they were facing problems in getting her marriage fixed. And after all this Navika asked them to stop thinking about her marriage and they were worried about her.
But after meeting Shree, she knew he is the right guy for her. He knew about her past and understood her situation. But she was still thinking about this relationship. She wanted to meet his parents and get acceptance from them too and wanted her parents to accept him. And she was waiting for Sameer and Annu's wedding for this. But somewhere deep down her heart she knew she loved him. She had made up her mind and she was waiting for the right moment to express her love.
And she also knew once she committed to him, she will always be with him. She always dreamt of a sweet home for her family to be with and her dream was soon going to come true.
Badle Raaste Jharne Aur Nadi, Badli Deep Ki Tim Tim
Chhede Zindagi Dhun Koi Nayi, Badli Barkhaa Ki Rimjhim
Badlengi Rituein Ada.., Par Main Rahoongi Sada..
Usi Tarah Teri Baahon Mein Baahein Daal Ke Har Lamha Har Pal

Zindagi Sitaar Hogayi, Rimjhim Malhaar Hogayi
Mujhe Aata Nahi Kismat Pe Apni Yakeen Kaise Mujhko Mili Tu

Shree had understood her silent approval and tried his best to make her comfortable and not force anything on her.
He dropped her home and headed back to his place.
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Next day. Wednesday. 29th May 2013
There was no emergency case reported so team was just chitchatting. Riya was teasing both Shree and Navika asking about their dinner date and both were silent and blushing.
They saw Chhotu coming out of Sameer's cabin and decided to tease Chhotu. But they didn't know about Mona and Chhotu's confession.
Riya: Chhotu!!! bahut dino se ek baat poochhni thi... poochhoon kya?
Chhotu: Aise kyun bol rahi ho Riya... Poochho na
Riya: wo tumne Mona ke bare mein kya socha?
Chhotu blushed and smiled and Riya, Shree and Navika notice this. Earlier he used to get scared when she was mentioned in any talks.
Chhotu(tries to escape): Wo mujhe ek khabri se milne jaana hai ... ek drug deal ke bare mein kuch informtion nikalwani hai ... mai jaata hoon
Shree(blocks his way): ahannn Chhotey!!! humse bhaag raha hai ... tujhe kya lagta hai... hum tujhe aise hi jane denge... sach bata ...
Riya: Chhotu ... waise mere paas ek andar ki khabar hai... bataun?
Chhotu(shrugs): batao...
Riya: Rathod sir Mona ki shadi ke barey mein soch rahey hain ... aur uske liye rishta dhundh rahey hain ...
Chhotu(knew the truth and he smiles): To ??... ismein mai kya kar sakta hoon?
Navika: arrey buddhu ram ... wo Mona ki shadi kisi aur se karwa denge ... fir tumhara kya?
Chhotu(carelessly): tum logo ki bakwas khatam ho gayi ho to ab mai jaaun?
Riya, Shree and Navika were confused at Chhotu's changed behaviour. They expected him to panic and get scared, but he was cool. In fact he was blushing and smiling.
He turns to leave goes a few steps ahead and then turns back and gives them a surprise.
Chhotu: Aur haan Riya ... ye tum bhi janti ho ki wo "andar ki khabar" ye nahi nahi ki Rathod sir Mona ke liye ladka dhundh rahey hain ... balki khabar ye hai ki unhone Mona k liye ladka pasand kar liya hai ... par dusri andar ki khabar... jo tum nahi janti... wo ye hai ki us ladke ne bhi Mona ko pasand kar liya hai ... Aur Rathod sir ko bhi ye baat pata hai (winks)
Riya, Shree and Navika are baffled and before they could realize what Chhotu meant, Chhotu sprinted away smiling and waving his hand at them.
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Edited by bgargate - 11 years ago
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Part 25 B

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Chhotu left the office smiling to meet his informer. But he was lost thinking about his first official date with Mona on Sunday.
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3 days back. On Sunday.
Mona went to office early in the morning at 7:30 to finish her work early so that she can meet Chhotu at 11:30 AM. She got a message from Sameer that Sameer had asked Riya to ask Chhotu about what he feels for Mona. But Mona didn't tell Sameer about their confession last night.
At 11:30 AM
Mona entered the departmental store for her regular shopping but her eyes were searching for Chhotu. He was standing at the entrance waiting for her. They smiled at each other.
Khamoshiyan gungunaane lagi
Tanhaaiyan muskuraane lagi
Sargoshi kare hawa, chupke se mujhe kaha
Dil ka haal bataa, dilbar se naa chhupa
Sunke baat yeh sharm se meri aankhen jhunk jaane lagi
After shopping they went for lunch together. Mona told him how she expressed her feeling in front of her family and after initial hesitation how Sameer understood her. Sameer knew what it felt to be in love and adding to it he admired Chhotu. She also told him tha Riya knows about it and that Sameer told her. Chhotu makes anote of it in his mind on what to reply to Riya if she teases him.
This confession gave Mona new dreams. She saw a future with him but at the same time she was also scared of the thought if Chhotu rejected her. But she was very happy today sharing this all with Chhotu... her love, her happiness, her fears, her worries with an open mind.
Jaag utha hai sapna kiska meri in aankhon mein
Ek nayi zindagi shaamil ho rahi saanson mein
Kisi ki aandhi hai sadaa hawaaon mein
Kisi ki baatein hai dabi si honton mein
Raat din meri aankhon mein koi parchhaayi lehraane lagi

Khamoshiyan gungunaane lagi
Tanhaaiyan muskuraane lagi
Dil ka yeh karwaan, yunhi tha rawaa dawaa
Manzil na humsafar, lekin main maherbaan
Teri voh ek nazar kar gayi asar
Duniya savar jaane lagi

Chhotu was overwhelmed to hear all this form her. He also told her how every Sunday he used to wait for her to see her once in a week from his balcony. How much he loved her and his situation when he knew that she is ACP Sameer Rathore's sister. She laughed at this but Chhotu made her understand how much he respected Sameer and he would never want to upset him for any reason.
Mona assures him that Sameer is very happy and he believes that Chhotu's is the most trustworthy person and right life partner for hi "Toofan-mail" sister.
They went for a movie in the afternoon and later to the beach to watch the sunset.
Later while leaving for home, Chhotu for the first time dared to hold her hand while crossing a road and an otherwise bold Mona blushed at this gesture. He kept holding her hand even after crossing the road and Mona was amused at this but didn't try to get out of his hold.
Sharmo hayaa se keh do khuda haafiz, o meri jaana
Hai ghadi milan ki, khudaara laut ke na aana
Raat ka parda hamaari hi khaatir
Saje hai hum bhi to tumhaari hi khaatir
Jaise jaise tum paas aate ho, saansein ruk jaane lagi
Khamoshiyan gungunaane lagi
Tanhaaiyan muskuraane lagi

Dil ka yeh karwaan, yunhi tha rawaa dawaa
Manzil na humsafar, lekin main maherbaan
Teri voh ek nazar kar gayi asar
Duniya savar jaane lagi
Khamoshiyan gungunaane lagi
Tanhaaiyan muskuraane lagi
After crossing the road and walking a bit towards the parking.
Mona: Chandrakant
Chhotu: haan... kaho?
Mona: thanks... mujhe safely road cross karwane ke liye...
Chhotu(confused): ismein thanks bolne wali kaunsi baat hai?
Mona: wo ab humne road cross kar liya hai to... (pointing to their hands) ab tum mera haath chhod saktey ho...
Chhotu realizes that he is still holding her hand. He blushes and smiles shyly and leaves her hand though he didnt want to.
Mona understands what he felt like and this time she holds his and clutches it tightly. Both of them smile at each other.
Chhotu drops Mona at her place and leave for his home.
Mona feels like informing Sameer and she picks up her phone to tell him but something stops her. She didnt know what happened to her. She suddenly felt shy talking to Sameer about this. The same Mona who was ready to fight for her love suddenly turned into a coy girl.
So instead of calling Sameer she calls up Annu and gives her the news and requests her to tell Sameer but not let Riya know about it.
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Some time back.
Sameer and Annu had dinner together at Sameer's place and they were chit chatting after dinner when Annu's phone rang. It was a call from Mona.
Annu was pleasantly surprised and happy after talking to Mona.
Annu: Mona ka call tha ...
Sameer: Tumhe call kiya usne... kisliye?
Annu(smiles): ye batane k liye ki uski Chhotu se baat huyi ... wo bhi usey pasand karta hai ...
Sameer(checking his phone): kyun... mera phone nahi laga kya?
Annu: nahi... usey ye baat tumhe batane mein sharm aa rahi thi... usey laga ki ye baat usey sabse pehle mujhe batani chahiye ... aur fir wo chahti thi ki ye baat mai tumhe bataun...
Sameer was baffled.
Sameer: kya??... sharm aa rahi thi??... Mona ko??... us din to bina kisi sharm ke bol rahi thi ki usko Chhotu pasand hai... aaj kya hau isey?
Annu(chuckled): ACP Rathod ... us din wo ek bachchi thi... jo apni pasand ki cheez paane ke liye zid kar rahi thi ... aaj wo mature ho gayi hai ... ek atoot rishtey mein bandhne ki ore uska pehla kadam hai ... thoda to farak aayega na attitude mein... accept it ... aapki chhoti si behen ab badi ho gayi hai...
Sameer(amused): haan ... yakeen hi nahi hota ... Strange ... bhai se zyada ab usey apni bhabhi pyari ho gayi hai ...
Annu(smiles): Sameer!! wo apse ab bhi pehle jitna hi pyaar karti hai ... par ye baat kuch aur hai ... aur sach kahoon...Mujhe bahut achchha laga ... Mona ne mujhe chuna... apne dil ki baat share karne k liye ... usne dil se mujhe apni bhabhi accept kar liya ... ek apnepan ka ehsas hua ... mai apne naye pariwar ke aur kareeb aa gayi hoon... ye bandhan aur mazboot ho gaya hai...

Sameer smiles and pulls her closer and kisses her forehead.
Sameer: aur ye waqt ke saath aur mazboot hota jayega... tum is pariwar ka hissa ban chuki ho... aur ab hum kabhi alag nahi honge ...
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Present.
Sameer smiles to himself remembering all this when he happens to look at Riya who was chit chatting with Shree and Navika in the coffe area and he is again reminded of his responsibilty towards her. He wished to develop the same trust and bond with Riya that was between Mona and Annu. Or rather more than that. Annu was like a mother figure to Riya and he had to be an elder brother and a father figure to her.
Arjun comes to the conference room and finds Sameer looking at Riya.
Arjun: Kya dekh rahe ho?
Sameer: Riya ko dekh raha hoon... ab wo meri zimmedari hai
Arjun: matlab?
Sameer(takes deep breath): Haan ... Jaise Mona meri behen hone ke natey meri zimmedari hai... waise hi Riya bhi Annu ki behen hai isliye ab wo bhi meri zimmedari hai ... (remembers about Mona) arrey haan... tumhe ek baat batani thi ... Mona ke barey mein...
And Sameer narrates him the entire incident when Mona expressed her affection for Chhotu, later how he tried to get information from Riya but before that Mona and Chhotu confessed it and how Mona trusted Annu and told her about it.
Arjun was first shocked at Mona - Chhotu wedding talks but later he also agrees that Chhotu is a nice guy.
Sameer: bas wohi soch raha tha ... Ab Mona ki fikar to mit gayi hai ... uske liye to Chhotu jaisa achchha ladka mil hi gaya hai... ab Riya ki bari hai ... Annu ke bhi armaan hain uske liye ... uski shadi ke liye ... aur uske wo sarey armaan ab mai poora karunga ...
Arjun skips a heartbeat at the mention of Riya's marriage.
Arjun is quiet and doesn't react. Sameer is about to say something when his phone rings. There was a new case. The team sets out to solve it and they inform Chhotu to join them at crime scene, who was already out to meet his informer.
Riya's marriage talks somewhere disturbed Arjun but he didn't know why it was effecting him. Or may be he knew it but didn't want to face it.
But he couldn't take Sameer's words off his mind.
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So how was that ?
Funny ? Weird ? Stupid?
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Edited by bgargate - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awww...meri princess k liye treat..dat too in a golden vessel...lolz...i mean...such a beautiful Shree-Navika part dat too vid a beautiful edit...dill garden garden kar ditta..

loved all three couples spending some quality time together...har taraf romance hi romance...wow feels so great!

specially loved the beach stroll of both shreevika nd MonaChotu...u knw na...beaches r my fav...die hard romantic jo hu...

nd the songs were even more lovely...

continue soon Rukku...

love
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Edited by Aisha.Vashishth - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Love Shree & Navi..
Butaaj Chotu & Mona DIL le gye.. they are cute & lovely..
Riya & all teaseing Chotu , but he just blush.. 😊
Ye Sameer bhi na... her baat batani padti hai bande ko😆
Ab sab ki gadi bad gyi aage lekin Ariya peeche kyu???
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful update bhavna
Awesome Shree n navika date was so sweet
I was touched to see the past of navikas sister
She must have lost trust in marriage
But loved how shree made her comfortable
Loved Chotu n mona too
So Mona is now shy to share it with sameer
Bhabhis hoti kis liye hai 😉
So to Sameer ji riya ki bhi shadi karana chahte hai
Bhai ACP ho ke nahin dekh paaye
Ladka bagal main aur dhindora nagar main
Lovely update
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome dear..
Loved shree n navika's small part..
Riya navika n shree try to pull chotu's leg but get disappointed..
Chotu n mona's day out..
Their budding relation..
Mona shares it with annu..
Sam n annu's convo..
Sam feels more responsible towards riya as anu is a mother figure to her...
He lost in thoughts..
Sam shares his thoughts with arjun..
Arjun disturbed by the mention of riya's marriage..
Loved it..
Continue soon..
Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome part
love it
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved the way chotu handled the teasing
off course ariya hai to bahut sara drama banta hai:)

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Awesome story
I am new in arjun forum
but I read your story when you start this
I tried many times for become a member .but my phone was not suport for this .finaly now I am a part of this forum .
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