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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 23 C
Please bear with this part. I'm currently obsessed with this song "Aa Ja re piya" from "Bhindi Baazaar Inc" and badly wanted to have this song in this update to included it in hurry, so it might look odd 😳
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Aa.. ja re piya.., jiya jaye na..
Aa.. ja re piya.., jiya jaye na..

Sang daude mere peeche aage re
Teri parchhaiyan..

Mona was happy to be with Chhotu, specially when she had an approval from her family. And she was happy that her family trusted her.

Bina dor teri or o piya..
Man khincha jaye haan

Chhotu was still skeptical about what he saw in Sameer's eyes. Sameer trusted him with Mona, but he was still not sure whether it was just for this ride or for life time. He had observed a change in Sameer's behaviour towards himself.

Bina dor teri or o piya..
Man khincha jaye haan

Aa.. ja re piya.., jiya jaye na..
Aa.. ja re piya

Sameer takes Annu to a beach. It was quite in the night and not many people were around. He was guilty about his beaviour towards Annu. He tried to apologise to her again but she stopped him putting her finger on his lips. He remembered that while talking to Annu about her past for the first time, he too had taken a chance and so did Annu and it worked. He was thankful to Annu. Her efforts were instrumental in bringing Arjun out of his shell.

Annu was happy because Sameer was happy with the way things turned out to be. She knew she had taken a chance and it could have backfired but then, all is well that ends well. She forgot Sameer's rude behaviour in the afternoon, appreciating it as his concern for Arjun.


Jee uthin khwaishein..
Saans li jazbaaton ne

Arjun was feeling relieved and lighter. He was happy on his birthday after so many days. Though he missed Roshni but he felt her presence inside him which gave him strength. He enjoyed teasing Riya.

Ab to jagna shuroo
Kar diya meri raaton ne

Shree and Navika were also lost in their dream world and planned to take advantage of Sameer and Annu's wedding to introduce their parents to each other and take their love story forward.

Main ikhatti karta hun
Kehne ko baatein kar

Par tujhe dekh ho jate hain
Lafz hi la pata

Arjun was finding herself very close to Riya but was still not able to express himself to her. But still he took liberty to tease her. He was finding it strange but still today he decided to shed his inhibitions.

Riya felt bad about what she aid in the morning and understood Arjun's need of company. She knew he never expressed that he is lonely but she knew somewhere deep down his heart he is longing for a companion, who would understand his pain and accept him the way he is.

Mujhe hoti khabar tak nahi
Aur tu chhal jaye na

Aa.. ja re piya.., jiya jaye na..
Aa.. ja re piya..

Ab ragon mein jo basar hai
Woh tera hi asar hai
Phir bhi tu bekhabar hai, O piya...

Riya was thinking about herself. Even she had changed a lot after coming to ETF and working with Arjun. And she came more closer to him with basket ball practice.
She remembered the moment when Arjun helped her cope up with the situation when she shot a criminal in the head for the first time. Now she was one of the best shooters of the department.

Ab ragon mein jo basar hai
Woh tera hi asar hai
Phir bhi tu bekhabar hai, O piya...

Annu rested her head on Sameer shoulders and he embraced her and held her hand. Annu felt safe in his arms. Sameer kissed her hair.
She could feel the changes in herself after she got into a relationship with Sameer. He had helped her a lot in changing her attitude towards life. They spent some time talking about there future together.

Aaa...kori si zindagi pe..
Rang kuchh aise chadthe hain

Haath jaise koi...
Geeli mitti ko garhte hain

Sameer's life always revolved around his family and friends. It was for the first time when he experienced something called love. A new relationship had taken a form in his life and there were new colours in his old monotonous life. And he was enjoying this phase and was preparing himself for adapting to the new life. After all the independence that he enjoyed as a bachelor will be gone now

Aadatan hi sahi
Badla hai kuch to kahin...

Shree and Navika too were feeling the similar changes in their life. Shree was no more obsessed with his gadgets and was spending time with Navika.

Kabhi to aankhein band kar ke bhi
Dikhta hai sab naya

Yun lage ke jahaan mein nahi...
Koi apne siva..
Mona decided to express her feelings to Chhotu. She knew if she could tell this to her family then she can tell this to Chhotu too.

Aa.. ja re piya.., jiya jaye na..
Aa.. ja re piya..

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Chhotu and Mona reach near the Mona's apartment.Mona: Thanks!!
Chhotu: You're welcome (he turns to leave)
Mona calls him back.
Mona: Chandrakant!!!
Chhotu turns to look at her.
Mona(smiling): ek baat kehni thi tumse... 5 min ruk saktey ho?
Chhotu is surprised but still tries to be normal.
Chhotu: aise kyun kyun bol rahi ho... kaho na...
Mona(smiles mischieviously): I like you ... and may be i'm in love with u ... tumhe kya lagta hai?
Chhotu is now shocked and his eyes are ready to pop out.
Chhotu(scared): Tum janti ho tum kya keh rahi ho? Tumhare Bhai ... yani ki ETF Chief Rathore sir ko pata chalega to kya hoga?
Mona: Kya hoga? kuch nahi... wo bhi to kisi se pyar kartey hain? to fir agar mai kisi se pyar karoon toismein kya galat hai?
Chhotu(thinking): ye mujhe marwayegi... Hey deva... mujhe isse pyar hua par mai apne pyar ko bhoolne ko taiyar tha... issey kyun mujhse pyar ho gaya?
Mona: Kya soch rahey ho?
Chhotu: Kuch nahi ... tum pagal ho gayi ho... aur haan... is sab mein tumhe kuch nahi hoga... par meri jaan zaroor le legne Rathore sir!!
Mona: Unhe pata hai?
Chhotu: Kya?
Mona: ki mai tumhe pasand karti hoon... aur...
Chhotu(gulps a lump in his throat): Aur?
Mona: tum bhi unhe pasand ho (winks)
Chhotu couldn't believe what she just said.
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So ... how was it?
Totally mad ... isn't it ... 😉
Cant help it... mere dimag mein aise weird ideas hi aatey hain 😳
Please excuse the spelling mistakes and grammatical errors 😳
No Precap because even I don't know what and when will I be posting the next part 😊
And may be this is my last update in this thread. Will try to be back soon in a new thread 😊
Those who wish to receive the PM on next update, please add me to your buddy list and those wish to be removed from my PM list please let me know.
And please don't thank me for PMs 😉
Regards,
Bhavna
Edited by bgargate - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome part..
Loved it..
Arjun self talk..
Convo between sam n annu..
Arjun's decision to have family dinner..
Arjun scolding sam for behaving rudely with annu..
Sam n riya convo regarding chotu n mona..
All had good time with each others..
Arjun taking sweet revenge with riya by teasing her..
Arjun offered giving lift to mr n mrs rathod n riya n teased sam to take annu for long drive..
All couples were feeling different feelings..
Arjun was still hesitating to open up n riya understood it..
Sam was feeling guilty but annu let it go..
Shree n navika were experiencing new phase of their relation..
Last but not the least mona threw one of the powerful bomb on chotu..
He nearly got heart attack..
He got to know sam knows about them..
Interesting phase of every couples life..
Good one..
Continue soon..
Thanks for pm..
Edited by unishaz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
res😳
*edited*
super duper update di..!!!
arjun rosh fb was beautiful..!!! what a tradition me loved it..!!
and then his talks with her.. aww..!! glad he he could atleast clear his mind and heart...!!
annu ki baaton ka acha asar hua hai..!!😉 and omg he accepts that deep down he is affected by riya but isn't ready to accept her...!!!
sam bhi na.. faltu mai daant diya bechari annu ko..!!! but love how arjun supported her and asked sam to say sorry to her...
hmm so sam told riya about chottu mona.. and madam is planning to tease chottu😆
are wah everyone on dinner sponsored by arjun cool..!! love how he is more open up and teasing riya..!! poor girl..!!😆
and finally the long drive..!! lovely song...!!!
plus all the couple's moment were really very sweet..!!
sam annu on beach... shree navika ka relationship..
ariya ki teasing..!!! their pov on how they have changed..!!
and finally mona chottu..!!! wow mona proposed and poor guy was scared of sam aww..1
a bomb dropped on him..!!😆 ab kya hoga??😲
ab to he has to say yes..!!
continue soon..!!
eagerly waiting for the next part..!!
Edited by devildiva21 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
chotu mona conversation made me laugh
sam and annu relationship is slowing building up understanding is creeping in

my ariya slwoly getting closer and comfortable :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome bhavna amazing
Last main chotu n mona 😆😆
too cute all tghe couples were so sweet
Continue soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome amazing update
loved it
continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
oyeee hoyeee ...update itane dino ke baad aaya lekin bohot acchaa aayaaa ...👍🏼...sweet cute and awesome update 😳 Bhindi Bazar ... kuch to chhut raha hai 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
yay!!!! finally rukku baby is back vid a bang...
WELCOME BACK

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part 1

it ws a nic part...
i specially loved the arjun roshni flashback...i always love flashbacks...not only for RNP bt for every story...specially if it is ArNi flashbck...may b coz we hardly get to see FBs in show...

such beautiful love filled FBs nd arjun's such deep love for his wife compels me to rethink abt th budding relationship of Arjun and riya

wow loved th scene whr Arjun scolds Sam to have scolded Annu...lolz...
Edited by Aisha.Vashishth - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 2

wow Talk Of Town...my fav restaurent on Marine Drive Road...i jst love it...
its special u see... ;-)

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Happy Birthday Arjun Rawte

i love such happy happy updates...

aww...lil riya was so naughty in her childhood...

liked the teasing session of whole ETF for her...

WHAT!!! this mst have been Riya's reaction...lolz...whn she got to knw...that sameer already knws abt Mona's liking for Chotu...
Edited by Aisha.Vashishth - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 3

aww...wow...this is wat my fav genre is...Romance
sooo cute!...all the pairs (except arjun-riya) enjoying some quality time with each other...

loved th song...afterall meri Rukku baby ki choice kabhi kharab ho sakti hai...NO WAY!!! its really a beautiful song...me too loving it...

beach romance of Sameer-Annu...wow...i jst love beach romance scenes...bt practically never enjoy beaches too much$..

haww...mona...pakka ACP Rathod ki behen...kya direct confession...daring hai boss
Edited by Aisha.Vashishth - 11 years ago

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