ArHiSS:AnApateAffair#4,Ch21,Pg124,(19/07)COMPLETED

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IamSwapnali

@IamSwapnali

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#921

Lovely.. Loved how each chapter is based on some characteristic of the show.. I never knew what they meant by rabba ve in the show 😉

As I had said earlier, I am going to read this SS all over again..

Sad that this ends the SS and probably your writing on IF for now 😒
Just want to take this opportunity to let you know that you are very good at humor - it's very difficult to make people laugh, and I've burst out laughing at some of the humors in your stories.. So keep writing, not necessarily ArHi stories... all the best 😊

Thank you for giving us some of the amazing ArHi stories.. 🤗

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Omoraboti

@Omoraboti

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#922

Saiyu!

It took me 3 days to finish reading this SS though I wished I could finish at one go. Blame it on my horrible schedule.

This story is a treat for any IPK lover. A story woven around the milestones & dialogues of IPK .. the characters fun-filled, yet intact. Most of the time, when I was reading the chapters, I had a permanent smile glued to my face. And at times, I have grinned and laughed .. Thanks for this wonderful, IPKish story.

You have used almost all of my favourite scenes & dialogues. And I loved how in many cases, you have reversed the role - Khushi threatening him, Khushi dealing with the Diwali kiss .. and all those ASR wala dialogue from her mouth.

Loved your version of Arnav & Khushi. Totally. Both are equally crazy & stupid! It was written all over his face and he himself could see all the signs .. still he was allergic to the one word "love". So much for being ASR!

From "Bhaad main gaye aap" to "what nahi pot" to "maar doon" .. girl, you have used all my favourite dialogues and made me relive those wonderful moments.

Last but not the least, the eternal questions of the audience! Who was Aman? How did ASR knew the lyrics of Teri Meri? Why ASR always had a roll of bandage in his pocket? Love you for the humor you have brought into the story. I really had a good time laughing through the chapters. 😊

PS1: Do you really need an epilogue with a last chapter like that? Nah!

PS2: I am unfortunate that I did not get to read your other works. Especially, after reading this one, I regret even more. Hopefully SaRun comes back and make you write again!

Edited by Omoraboti - 11 years ago

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...Doctor...

@...Doctor...

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#923

Originally posted by: vfordonkey
sooo

sooo what donkey? 😆

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yoga123

@yoga123

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#924

Will miss you...please let us know when you come back

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momoahmd

@momoahmd

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#925

first ov all so sorry 4 da late comment...read da last three parts in one go...
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the ending was adorable n sweeet...
it was ur last update on IF...vl going to miss ur writing so badly...

but thank u so much dear 4 writing such beautiful stories...as it is because of writers like u that the IPKKND is still on top on IF n even in our hearts...

i vl definitely pray 4 barun n sanaya to make their appearance together in another show so we would get another chance to enjoy ur writing...

again thnxxx a lot n ver best ov luck 4 ur future...
n
EID MUBARIK...😛

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celinawalter

@celinawalter

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#926

i am feeling sooo... sorry for myself 1st time after joining I-F😭... i have joined it last month and had been involved with it since then as a reader... but not a silent one!! i came across ur story AAA only yesterday and go such a wonderful experience of reliving the journey of IPK with you... but ur last note was a shocker to me😲... i didn't knew that when i would really be looking forward to ur more works, u would have quit I-F... ur SS- AAA really touched my heart and the fun-quotient was so much that i had hard time controlling my laughter... the moment Akash exclaimed Bhabhi🤣, to the very last update of ARHI becoming parents and their undying LOVE😳 was so well executed... WOW, just WOW... 👏👏

and the roles of Payal and Aakash were jut awesome... they were sooo... funny, infact i thought that as they have been so underused in the show, the have been nicely exploited in this SS... and last update had Rabba Ve too... Wow!!!! u rocked with this update dear!!!⭐️

i don't know about ur other work but i would really would have read ur other work after reading this SS...

will miss u for sure.. but anyways,,,,, best of luck for all ur endeavors in life...

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Vee

@reflorated

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#927

Originally posted by: ...Doctor...

sooo what donkey? 😆

That wasn't me. It was... *drumroll* Mrinal.

Should I res for the "He's so weird" speech or will you do it yourself? 🤣

You've been watching DMG again, haven't you? I SEE IT IN YOUR SIGGY.

Exams got over today. I'm going back to sleep. I expect to see a reply to this on my scrap wall. LOVE YOUU LAN.

Btw, how are Rish and Dee? Been ages!!! :(

Bye, love you again.

You too Saiyyu, I love you as well. Don't get jealous now, I say! 🤣

I say I'm hilarious. Others say I'm mumbling in my sleep.

I'm hilarious when I mumble in my sleep.

BYEEE

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-Shilpaa-

@-Shilpaa-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#928

first of all,sorry for being a silent reader almost all d time... i started reading finding solace a few months ago and luvd it immensely ,and den found a link to AAA .. and found it really interesting ... i'v read these two works of yours and really love u as an author ... since i saved ur updates on my phone and read dem later offline, i have posted very few comment... please accept my apologies for not commenting frequenly... u hav been an amazing author and i'm gonna miss reading u...❤️

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Rami

@Rami92

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#929

OMg i just came to know abt this stry😲 😲 😲😲

n happen to read the note n was like 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

am still a kid 😆 😆 😆😆 to IF haha 😉 not by age but by searchn n readiong wrks 😃

just going through great writers work so i have to explore more and read great writers work more so please as u hav did fr other strys dont remove this too pleajjj😭 😭 😭 😭😭 😭 😭 😭

i would like to read atleast this wrks of urs pleajjj😳 😳 😳😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

n to say i have strted with chap one😆 😆 😆 but i could not move more but was immersed in ur suggestions f other writers n also ur note at the end of all chap😳 😳 😳 😳😳 😳😳

just loved the way u made me remember alll those spl sweeyt lovely eroyic monts on IPKKNd😉 😉 😉😉 😉 😉 😉 😉😉

and a big squessse🤗 fr starting up with anjali n arnav bond till the last one😉 😉 😉 😉😉

not forgetting anything importnt u gave us all the spl moments😳 😉 😉 😉😉

from anjali arnav bond,akash,payal-khushi bond,invisible aman,evil shyam,guptas raizada's,rabbavey's,terimeri,crazy khushi,strange hobbies n all the others... 🤗