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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello! 😳
Main aa gayi apne comments ka pitara leke 😆

Chapter 18 is the most adorable chapter till date. Arnav Khushi finally behaved like a couple in love. And for the first time in history they didn't fight over petty things. Phew!

Arnav is so naughty ☺️
I love the way he pulls, corners, kisses, hugs & teases her all the time. And he unintentionally admitted that he loves her 🥳Khushi didn't notice but I did.

Aakash and Payal are really different in this story *gulps* They were actually making out. Hey Devi Maiyya humein chakkar aa rahe hain..

Khushi is so funny 😆 She attacked Aakash like a tigress. Booyeh!
But what is this? Why do they keep cancelling their wedding all the time?

Shyam and his flop plans 🤣 Anjali's reaction was hilarious. I miss Anjali and Pooja ki thaali. They're the best! I hope this jodi will make an appearance soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
we being the more dynamic couple of the two

🤣 🤣

I can't get past this line 🤣 Payal Sapno ki duniya mein jeena itna bhi accha nahi 😆
She actually thinks that they're more dynamic than Arnav Khushi *falls down laughing*

*takes a deep breath*

Aakash finally has a competitor. He was having a lot of fun till now but now his betrothed has shown him his place 😆 Bechara!

NK and Lavanya are leaving no stone unturned, are they? Go NK!
Lavanya rocks. Loved the way she talked to NK. All ASR style, huh?

Finally! Khushi and Arnav have patched up...again. Now if they break up again then I'm gonna kill someone. Yeah I'm damn serious 😳

Arnav is behaving like a love struck teen. Why, you ask?

Sneaking into his beloved's room. Check.

Caressing and nuzzling. Check.

Jealousy. Check.

Possessiveness. Check.

Encouraging Badtameez deeds. Check.

Showing his haq. Check.

Waiting for the wedding to end and the wedding night to start ;) Samjhe ya samjhaun? 😆
Edited by ...Doctor... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Akhiri chapter se ek kadam door *sniff sniff*

This was the most entertaining FF I've read on IF. IT has humor, drama, emotional attyachar, love, care & IPK. All those dialogues which you picked up directly from the show, each and every 'In remembrance of..', everything used to remind me of IPK, a show which still stays in our hearts *sigh*

This update was H.I.L.A.R.I.O.U.S. Period.

I was like this> 😒 when I saw that you haven't written about the wedding ceremonies.

But I was like this> when I read the remaining update.

The best things about this update:

Arnav Khushi were fighting again 😃

Khushi refused to acknowledge the fact that she said 'I love you' to Arnav. Serves him right. Hmph! 😃

Anjali cried during Khushi's bidaai. 😃

After irritating and teasing Khushi about the 'I love you' thing, Arnav still hoped to 'do' something on their wedding night. Umeed pe duniya kayam hai 😃


The most shocking things in this update:

Anjali didn't joke about accompanying chotey to his room on his wedding night. Yeh kaise hua? 😲

Khushi paid a guest visit to her maayka on her wedding night 😲

Arnav's confession 😲

They finally 'did' it 😳

Arnav was sleeping at the Poolside. How is that possible? 😲

Loved the update! I'll miss this FF *sobs*

A special mention to asrcraze a.k.a Laa. I love her picture comments. They're really awesome, each and every picture matches the updates. It's almost like we're watching the show. And I read all the S has written about you in her updates. How do you know all the dialogues of IPK so perfectly? 😲

The things you wrote about your choti & the things she wrote about you were hilarious. Ek hazaro mein teeno behna hai...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Rabba ve Ooo Rabba ve!



Who needs an epilogue when you get an update like this *points at the update*

Khushi is so innocent 😳 She talked about their sleeping patterns with her parents 😆 Payal and her interruptions. Hayye! I never knew Payal was so naughty. Asking questions about satisfaction, need and what not 😳

Finally everyone got married and everything was settled.

Phew! Anjali has a bundle of joy to keep her busy. I hope she'd stop poking her nose into other people's life, not that I mind. I pity Shyam babua. Never got much attention from his wife. And then his flop plans are..let's not talk about it. I hope he succeeds some day 😆

Khushi's taekwando poses compelled Arnav to sleep at the Poolside?
But he got a hefty reward in return, didn't he? ☺️
I loved all the nuzzling, kissing, hugging, loving scenes of Arnav Khushi. My heart still dreams of watching Sarun onscreen doing all the above mentioned things but.. Dil hai ki maanta nahi!

All the puns intended at Anjali, Shyam, Badam kheer, pineapple in sooji halwa, NK and La's relatives, clipping the seat belt and everything else were hilarious 🤣 Especially the way Khushi said that the Raizadas ate more Badaam kheer than they drank water 😆

Everyone was talking about Rabba ve. I thought only Arhi rabba vey-ed par yahaan toh 😲

Twins 🥳 Arnav is such a biased father but I'm not complaining. Fathers ought to praise and pamper their daughters. Universal rule! But he's sweet as jalebi, he took care of Aryan too just because Khushi was tired. And I loved the way he worries about Arya's marriage. Awww! She's so little abhi, there's a long way to go...


Loved this FF to bits. Thank you for writing this S. It was a joyride. A beautiful FF that reminds me of my beloved show. And with that I say a teary goodbye to this FF. Hum hain rahi pyaar ke, phir milenge chalte chalte...🤗 😭


P.S.- After writing that note, you expect me to like it? Never! I'm not liking it at any cost. Hmph! 😒


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Posted: 12 years ago
I did laugh, and I hardly ever cried except when they were being stupid, so yay! Your goal has been achieved with lil ol' me! :D


I really liked the story, I think it was such a light hearted yet amazingly telling take on IPK.

And I love happy endings, but really I never liked Arya. She seemed like such a fail elf after Legolas. :/

I wish I could read more! :) <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
Saiyu... That was ENTERTAINING by all means... Actually I should have read it during my exam times...I told you that I 'll read it after my examz right..??? I postponed it to later... But You know Saiyu, AAA is really a Stress Relief... I enjoyed every bit of it...

You never ruined the stipulation of the relationship between Arnav Khushi in AAA... You successfully brought ARSHI till the end of the story, with that tom and jerry thing in them... That's the most beautiful reason I have found to love AAA to the core...

I already knew you handle comedy with such an ease, so AAA isn't a different case... I laughed for hours N my stomach ached you know... I was planning to read it piece by piece but when I started reading I couldn't help it... No wonder my 1 packet of Amul milk spilled out of boiling pan for 10 mins...😛, and didn't even bother until my room mate scold me to clean up all the mess... I muttered to her, all the curses I have studied since when I landed on this earth making a cry, till now ...😆

Constipation...??? Really...????🤣... The Great ASR could come up with that only from all the odds...??? OM*G , you are unbelievable Saiyu...

Shyamu with all time failed plans, NK and his Hindi, Anjali with her never ending tears, beautique and Mamiji, Akash, Payal ,Lavanya, mamaji, all were fabulous Saiyu...

I'm sure that I 'll come here often... Gonna miss your works Saiyu...

LOVE you..
ACHU

Edited by arshy4ever - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
I'm gonna miss you so much Rasgulla_sp..

I really like your writings...

And i really like your personality too.. You are very good and kind.. Never ever rude.. :)

I really hope that you get all the happiness...

AAA is a really mind blowing story...

I really love it!
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Posted: 11 years ago
I read this 2nd time & wish something ...
No I won't write it! Or else, the love-hate confusion will develop in your mind!

IPK 2😛



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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally finished reading this. Super entertaining !
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely ss...
Cute and lovely...
Arhi rocksss

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