SS: Of Lemons & Limes #5 (Chapter 20 - 22) - Page 44

Oye Farah - I am feeling so sad yaar. When are you going to give the next update. Just like Devi Maiyya, I can't see my Arnav broken down.Ab mein kya bolu. Bewakoof kahin ka - He had a week at his dispersal and he didn't even talk to Khushi about his feelings or about trying to do something for her and janab bole toh kab bole - when Khushi got engaged. Now I just hope Devi Maiyya does something and gets these 2 fools together. So jaldi se update karna. Nahin toh this tension is going to surely rise my BP. The rest of my comments, I will update after the next update because I can't give comments when my Arnav is broken down and defeated. Come on get him back to ASR mode - one who wins at any cost. Toh phir yeh Gautam kiss khet ki mooli hai.

so he was still thinking of giving it a try and she got engaged n now poor raizada realized not actually realized but defo felt something unknown...loved the update

Love DM..

Hope this will push Arnav to take the final plunge...

Extremely touching chapter and beautifully written! :)

Read this SS today. Enjoyed reading a lot. You have a beautiful writing style. Will read your other works also now.

Really feeling bad for both of them.. continue soon

What the!! Such a twist?! She, khushi got engaged!! Nooo!!
Here arnav thinking of taking a chance and changing his opinion and was trying. And there she got engaged?? How could she?
Devi mayya, whay has she done..

kyun dard hai itna tere ishqq mein rabba ve rabbe ve..

These are only lines i can think of!

Just pain, the hopes came crumbling down!

All in hands of Devi Maiyya now!

Oh wow.. that was beautifully written :)
Loved it.. Its only when you find yourself alone and in dark, you suddenly realize what made your world brighter !

I LOVE IT!!! Although it is heard to see Arnav go through something like this...I feel like he sorta deserves this...to some extent!! This is great piece of writing! Can't wait to read more!