SS: Of Lemons & Limes #5 (Chapter 20 - 22)

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mayurisb80

@mayurisb80

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#441

oh my dear...that was so shattering...i did not expect that...Arnav crumbling badly like that ...i just hope he does not rise as the hardened ASR.

Beautifully written as always...

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Preethi

@blackdove

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#442

Awesome update...

Feeling sad for Arnav...

Love u Devi maiyaa...I hope its not over too...

do continue soon !!!

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cool_zephyr

@cool_zephyr

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#443

That's a fabulous and wonderful update
Finally, when he thought of taking a step, he was pulled back from his ordeal. Indeed the 'ring' was not just a whiplash for Arnav but even for me.
Hoping DM's words turn out true and Arnav thinks calmly and try one more time.

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yeshyeshna

@yeshyeshna

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#444

excellent update

but heartbreaking...

feeling sad for both of them

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Leena

@LeenaRocks

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#445

freaking awesome! :)

the raizada needed this shocker! though i know its not what he thinks it is! but it is enough to evoke the required feeling in him that he fails to acknowledge it himself!

Bring it on! would love to see where this goes! :)

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A_BA

@A_BA

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#446

Loved this last chapter...it was so emotional, especially the ending.

That car ride just shows how much they both long to talk to each other and wish there is something more, but they can't reconcile that they have different opinions especially on marriage...I really do wish Arnav was able to ask her out on a date, would have loved to see her reaction, but I guess that's not happening.

So Khushi is engaged, and Arnav figured it out...the ending, with him breaking down, was really well written.

Looking forward to the next update!