SS: Of Lemons & Limes #5 (Chapter 20 - 22)

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Seeta

@LadyR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#451

Oh Devi Mai, divine intervention via speed dial please please..I cannot bear to see a desolate Arnav it hurts more than when Khushi is upset or hurt... Gautam really is a horrible name, but a,m hoping this is the little push that Arnav needs to understand how much he loves her,

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12041989

@12041989

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Posted: 12 years ago

#452

loving update...

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karsvinu

@karsvinu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#453

Awesome update😊...but this time i feel sorry for arnav...knowing ur loved one was going to be someone else's would be an earth shattering experience also loaded with unberable pain...i think would make him ask himself a lot of questions or may be he needed help...

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Onlooker

@Onlooker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#454

The chapter was beautifully written...

You started with his apprehension, and him not being in denial of his feelings and his decision to give 'them' a chance..his hesitation in asking for a date with him..and from no where cam the bomb..the twist...it literally twisted my gut quite forcefully..i felt his pain and heartbreak..you portrayed his emotions so well..

I think the way you surprised us with Kushi's engagement without giving any clue earlier did the trick..the impact was double...

Devi Maiyya's monologue made me see sense..nothing is over till it is really over...

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arnshi

@arnshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#455

wohoo khushi got engaged wow that was a big blow to arnie...it would be interesting how he claim khushi now...superb update...:D

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Nisha

@NishaAP

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Posted: 12 years ago

#456

Awesome. This is his heartbreak. What going he do now. Instead fighting for it he is thinking it's over.

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Nupur

@nupsiii

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Posted: 12 years ago

#457

wow...what a lovely part..jus love ur writing..the way you potray emotions is too good..

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rana5

@rana5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#458

Oh no! What will Arnav do now? He needs to fight for Khushi, not give up! Get him some brain cells now, enough of this self defeating crap !!!! Please???