New TR SS: Pain of Remorse:Ch2:pg11 updated

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Nikhita

@nuckts

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#91

lovely update dear,please continue soon!!!!!!!!😊

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shanaya

@shanya8

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

wohh dii ossam loved itt yr u kno wat itz totally diffrent from ur other ffs itz truly amazing

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hima sachan

@hima_crazyD3fan

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#93

It was jzt awesome..!!!

luved the update.. it was so good yr..!!!
jzt now red both the chapters yr they r jzt mindblowing..!!

the emotions feelings everything is so awesomely written yr jzt luved it..!!!

ab jaldi se update krna okk..!!!

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christy

@Amitz.Gibbore

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#94

why they are separated:( :( :( nice upd..well written,...wonderful update..😳

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dh19

@dh19

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#95

awesome and very well written
truly described there feelings.

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ajaved

@ajaved

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#96

Amazing update loved it every bt of it

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Jalebi bai

@Breezy.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#97

I read both the parts together!

Debu Di,This SS of your's really touched my heart. I have read just two parts but i have fallen madly in love with this SS. First it was THLH and now this one.. Seriously,Hats off to you for writing such an amazing story. First of all,They are 45 years😲 This was unexpected. But still staying apart from eachother for so many years also the love between them is same (Dil chu liya mera😭) Aab toh pakka beleive ho gaya ki app ne Pyaar,Ishq aur Mohobaat mein Phd kiya hai😆

Good going di, Want to read more and want to know the reason why they are seperated... I know yeh story bhi mujhe bohot rulane wala hai.

Next part jaldi update kardo and love you❤️

Edited by -upama- - 12 years ago

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yashi

@--taareylove---

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#98

just read the concept and first part butterfly it's awesome btw i'll definitely scrap you to know the meaning of tragic😆😆😆

"I fell in love with her when we were together, then fell deeper in love with her in the years we were apart." and

"Lots of things can be fixed. Things can be fixed. But many times, relationships between people cannot be fixed, because they should not be fixed. You're aboard a ship setting sail, and the other person has joined the inland circus, or is boarding a different ship, and you just can't be with each other anymore. Because you shouldn't be.

omg that para i am already fallen in love with that para sach sachi batana net se toh cheat nahi kiya na because t's so so awesome

aww rey is waiting or her princess really sweet and the way you portrayed present and past together really commendable because you made me short our of words which is impossible but you made it possible by writing such a beautiful story

okk now i can't wait to read next chap so i am running towards itwesome loved it to the core...

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pari

@PPooja08

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#99

nice part dear just awesome dear wow loved it superb awesome really liked it...

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Soumya

@.-Soumya-.

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#100

Superb update di
It wass really cute
N their flashbacks was really sweet
N then taani dialouge me "beside now my life has many bitter memories so I have to add extra sugar in it"
It was fantastic heart touching part di
Update soon n PM me