New TR SS: Pain of Remorse:Ch2:pg11 updated - Page 8

Originally posted by: flicka

yeah i got time and read it u know after writing that horrible file i was feeling low so i read ur ss

today i will tell u how i felt after reading the teaser and the first chapter not that i loved the story or anything to day i will tell u from 2 prospective as a writer and as a reader so get ready because i am going to say what i am going to say

plz plz bare my lecture i really hope u don't mind listening to my lecture

first as a reader

hmm when i read the title i know that it has a tragic ending but after reading the title i became curious to read the story

hmm when i started reading the teaser i felt like there is a deep pain hidden in this ss

when i finished reading the ss teaser i was crying it was really emotional and but i wiped my tears and hit like don't kill me for that then i think about reading the chapter 1 as i was curious what is the real story

in the chapter 1 rey waiting for taani how sweet of him

he is 45 that was a shock to me didn't expect that

he remembering his birthday with taani

so many questions in my mind about why taani left why is she looking sick is she ok or suffering from some disease

as a writer i will say it was a should i express my true emotions yes i think i should it was a very good story it was the first story in which i didn't know what was going to happens and why anything is happening so i really became curious and loved the way u expressed the emotions they were beautifully describe love u for giving us such a wonderful story and yes i didn't wasted my time after reading it i enjoyed reading it

wiull be waiting for the next update

really hope u don't get angry after reading my this comment😉

Originally posted by: Mohit_monaya

omg! di...thank u soo soo sooo muchh for this... 🤗

i jus love u soo soo sooo muchh...😳 🤗

i loved the teaser...rather the two quotes...

it said all...

and the first chap was jus wow!!

loved the way u expressed the emotions...

the flashbacks were overwhelming...

i had this touch of pure love and den the mix up with the pain...

i already know im gona love it soo soo muchh...

its soo soo amazingg!

esp i loved the part where u described her, and rey's desperation, and the flashback...

wel, that sorta sums up the whole thing

okay so in short the whole part was jus awesome...

im so gona love it... <3

and thank u soo soo much for writing this =)

super excited for the parts yet to comee...

and well...u r jus too awesome...lovee uu dii... 🤗

thank u for the scrap btw...or else main miss kar deti... 😔

and most importantly...update soon 😳 😆

Originally posted by: crazy2012

@bold - Sanu, for this line muuuaaazzz to ya!!! so beautiful, so meaningful..lovely

Truly you are one of them, who really very good at analysis of my stories, characters. Sometimes, I also feel surprised that is it so?? i have never thought like this..😊

No dear, they can't - they are not made for each other😭